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The title is kinda vague until I come up with something good.


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"My husband is not your servant who will do whatever you will say and don't think that I am ignorant about Maan works and you of all people orders him around". Geet gave the peace of mind to her brother in law. She had enough of her husband's brother and his dearest mother that she was now on the edge of loosing herself.

"Geet , what are you saying? Came a quick reply of Dev Khurana. He was nothing but a hen packed husband and does nothing on his own.

"No.. not geet.. it's either Bhabhi or Mrs. Khurana. I am your elder brother's wife and you will speak to me with respect." Geet said and then turned to her mother in law.

Madhura Khurana was her husband's step mother and geet had been tolerating the woman from the day since she came to KM as Maan's wife.

"How dare you talk to my son like that geet. Don't forget that you are nothing.. geet crossed her hands, she had enough of this mother and son taking advantage of her husband and she know that Maan will not say anything. It's not his fault but his upbringing which made him like that. He will bear everything but will never say anything. But she can't say anything with him. Her live surpasses everything but she can't see these people controlling her husband anymore.

"Mummyji I can do that.. Maan is my husband and I have never seen you saying any kind word to my husband when he came all tired from work. He slogs himself for this family but what does he gets in return. You start your mental torture asking for the nonsensical matters and this Dev what he does.. he just ask for the money like he has earned it .

Geet was angry and her anger was justified, she had seen her husband ignoring his own demands, not caring for her himself and today she felt anger erupting within her when she saw that her mother in law had literally forced Maan to leave the home for the work that Dev was supposed to do.

"I do everything that bro asks me.. Dev countered back but geet was having a lava inside her that was waiting for her to erupt.

"And you what do you do? Half of the time Maan had to be on the business trips that you have to do. Half of the time he is correcting the mistakes that you does and in that he doesn't even care for his health. And you say that you work.. ha.. Dev Khurana if you go out of Khurana's i can bet that your capabilities will not even earn you the job of a peon." She said and turned this time looking at her mother in law.

"Don't think that you can say all this with much extra information to Maan.. believe me I am moments away from giving you in the women cell. The amount of mental torture I am having seeing Maan neglecting himself don't make me arrest you for the haressment.

Saying so geet went.

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A random thought I had after remembering some episodes of geet

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats Suhana on the random shot! 😊

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Congrats on your story

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats Suhana on the new story! 😊

Chetna please don't say this is not a story but my random thought

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Saving his grace .... hooo seems like our Geet will save his grace

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1

Fabulous start! amazingly written! loved how Geet spoke up and warned Dev and his mother!

she was right to do this!

how dare they treat Maan like that?

update soon

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Congrats Suhana on this! thanks for sharing 😊

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Sorry Suhana..... have edited!

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Sorry Suhana..... have edited!

Thank you 😀

Story makes me feel

Again I have one more to compelete

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