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Hi,

Thanks to everyone for liking but I couldn't help noticing they have dropped since Chapter 8. It is possible it is because of the change in the India Forums interface.

However I would like to thank those who have consistently kept at it and continued to motivate me and helped me overcome some difficulties due to the change.


Chapter 11

The next morning, Aarav landed on their door step as a big surprise for Mrs. Rai. Aarav was good looking and almost as tall as Arnav, but Aarav didn’t resemble his cousin too much. He wore glasses which reminded Khushi that Manav hadn’t been wearing his glasses much since the first day she had seen him.

The same night, Anjali had also arrived in Udupi. Arnav had announced casually about his cousin sister's impending visit without imparting any more information. Since she was sharing her room with Anjali, and with Aarav's arrival, they hadn’t really talked since the night on the terrace.

The next morning, it was full house and with Ratna's, Khushi managed to get the breakfast ready.

"This dosa is amazing Khushi," Anjali complimented her, "you will have to share the recipe with me."

"That is Neer dosa," Mrs. Rai explained, "Khushi had become very good at it now."

"Sure Anjaliji." Khushi said politely.

"Please call me Anjali." Anjali's smile completely transformed her face, taking years off it. Khushi couldn’t help admiring how elegant and poised Anjali looked in her long gray kurta, with pink flowers and green vines printed on it. She had matched it with ankle length white cotton pants.

"You have a beautiful house here aunty," Anjali complimented Mrs.Rai, "lovely location too."

"You can come here anytime you wish," Mrs. Rai said, "I hope you know this house belongs to Arnav now."

"How many times have I told you not to say that?" Arnav said, "The house belongs to you."

Mrs. Rai explained how they had been forced to mortgage the house after their parents' death. A few years ago, Arnav had bought the house.

"I will be buying an apartment in Bangalore soon," Aarav said, "mom and I will live there when I come back."

"What made you come to Udupi Aarav?" Arnav asked his cousin, "I told you I was taking care of Ma."

"He came because he as jealous," Manav quipped as he looked at Aarav's annoyed face. "I sent you all those pictures with Arnav and aunty and you couldn’t take it anymore."

"Why don’t you grow up?" Aarav asked him, "I am not 18 anymore."

"This has been going on with them since college," Mrs. Rai told Khushi, "Aarav spent half his holidays in Bangalore and the other half in Mangalore."

"What was the point?" Manav retorted, "He would bring all his books to Arnav's place and be buried in them."

"I was studying medicine not computer science."

"He loved Mangalore so much that he ended up doing his residency here," Manav said.

"Don’t be silly," Aarav dismissed it, "you weren’t even here."

"Did I say you did for us?" Manav grinned, "you must have come her for some South Canara beauty."

"Beauty – my foot!" Aarav exclaimed, "I came here because of the hospital. Do you know how important a residency program is? It's not like your silly computer games."

Khushi got the feeling that Aarav was completely opposite to Manav in nature, more mature and serious, even more so than Arnav.

"We earn our living with our silly computer games." Manav retorted.

"Alright you two – cut it out," Arnav said, his tone laced with humour, "you are scaring the ladies here with your squabbling."

Aarav turned to Arnav. "I know you can take care of mom – in fact you have been doing that the past few years," he said, "I wanted to see mom and had planned to come here during Christmas holidays anyway. After this, I plan to take mom to Bangalore to visit dad's relatives."

If Khushi hadn’t heard about Arnav from Mrs. Rai, she might never have understood the deep bonding the cousins shared, having grown up together in the same house. It must have been hard for them when Arnav had moved to Delhi.

Later that day, they visited the Sri Krishna temple as per Mrs. Rai's wish and Rashmi joined them along with little Sanvi.

Khushi was fascinated by the unique temple where the devotees could view the idol of Lord Krishna through a small window known in the local dialect as Kanakana Kindi or Kanaka's window. According to the legend, around the 16th century, when Kanaka Dasa, the saint visited Udupi he sang devotional songs for the Lord, staying in a hut situated behind the temple as he was not allowed to enter the temple premises being a person of a lower class. Later one day, it was believed that Lord Krishna, impressed with his devotion had turned around to the back and created a hole in the wall so that his devotee to could see him.

Before entering the temple, Khushi was surprised to see Arnav taking off his navy blue checkered shirt and then the other two men, Aarav and Manav followed suit. Rashmi explained to her and Anjali who also seemed equally surprised that, it was the stipulation for the males before entering the premises of the temple.

As Khushi looked through the small window at the image of the Lord illuminated by the glowing oil lamps, she was mesmerized and a peaceful feeling settled in her heart.

After the darshan, they went to the famous Woodlands restaurant for lunch and they all ordered the vegetarian meal that came in a big round steel plate with poori and a bowl of rice in the centre and ten small cups of different dishes that included sambar, rasam, vegetable curries, pickle, dessert and papad. Even though Khushi couldn’t do justice to the meal, it felt nice to be in the company of these people who were all pretty much bound together by Arnav Singh Raizada.

"So, what are we going to do for New Year's Eve the day after tomorrow?" Manav asked Arnav.

"Should we go to the beach house?" Anjali suggested.

"No." Arnav said, "Let's go somewhere else."

"Yes, you are right," Manav agreed, "It will be boring -- we should go to a party."

On New Years' eve, they set out on a trip in a rental Innova to Hebri, a town that was 30 kms away from Udupi. The destination was a waterfall called Kudlu Theertha falls, that was located amid the jungles of the Western Ghats and was recognized as the first waterfall of the river Sita.

Manav was at the wheels of the van, and Anjali sat in the passenger seat next to him as she had the tendency to get motion sick if she sat at the back of the car. Khushi and Rashmi shared the middle seat while Arnav and Aarav sat in the rear. Khushi looked out of the window at the beautiful scenery whizzing past and her thoughts began to wander.

The day after Nagamandala, the security guard at Payal's old hostel had called her to inform her about a box that belonged to Payal. He had told her that he had found this box in an old storage room where they kept students' belongings that they might have left behind. Since it was eight years ago, he had taken time to find the box but he was proud that he had managed to find it. She had gone to the hostel during lunch break and brought the box back with her to college but due the incident with Sriji, she hadn’t been able to look in to the box until later that night after Arnav had left with Manav to the bar.

The box contained notebooks from Payal's final semester at college and a pouch with some knick-knacks like hair ties, pen, make up and some jewelry. But what had caught her attention was the random notes written by her sister like one would write in a diary. Payal hadn’t mentioned names nor there were dates on the letters which made it difficult to know the time frame but it was clear who she was writing about as some of the incidents matched with what Manav had told her -- about a knight in shining armour saving a damsel from distress, his visits to the hostel, about the tutoring class, the movies and a trip with the entire group. These notes had been mixed up and Khushi had a tough time arranging them in a sequential order or at least what she thought was one.

The notes were happy ones that described, what seemed to Khushi like a one-sided infatuation. She had come to that conclusion because most of what she had written seemed to be a misinterpretation of actions, rather than a real interaction. In one note, she had expressed her optimism that relationships were not written in stone, and that sometimes people didn’t see what was right in front of them but instead hankered after something that was not right for them. It was quite clear that she was talking about Arnav and Rashmi's relationship. If anyone else had read these notes, they might have thought that she was penning down a story because she had not written them in the first person. Khushi thought that if Payal had lived, she would have been a novelist one day, for she could see that her writing had a fictional quality. There was one note where she scribbled down her anguish about lost dreams, which Khushi surmised was written after the break-up which was at least apparent from her sister's perspective. There didn’t seem to by any notes after this about her rekindling her relationship with Arnav as her friends had claimed. After discovering so many new things about Payal, Khushi couldn’t put it past her, the likelihood that she had created a fictional situation to show her friends that she had moved on. Did she have other reasons to indulge in this farce? Khushi was disappointed that she hadn’t found any more notes that would help answer these questions. But it had answered one important question – Arnav had not been in love with Payal.

"Khushi?" Arnav called to her behind, "can you get down -- we need to step out for breakfast."

Khushi realized that they had stopped at a fast food restaurant on the highway.

"Sorry!" she exclaimed as she stepped out.

As she struggled to collapse the seat, Manav came to her rescue. "Let me do it, Khushi."

Soon they were seated in the modest restaurant and ordered breakfast of idlis, and dosas. Then Arnav ordered some poori aloo to be packed.

"There are no restaurants near the falls," he explained, "we will have to carry our own food and water."

"If you had told me I could have prepared some at home," Khushi said.

"That’s exactly why I didn’t tell you," he said, "a trip is supposed to be fun. I don’t want you waking up earlier than everyone else only to cook."

"I could have made some vegetable pulav," Rashmi said, "it would have been fun."

"No offence Rashmi, but I think we are better off without vegetable pulav," Manav said, emphasizing the vegetable part.

"Talk for yourself," Aarav said, "I like pulav."

"God!" Anjali exclaimed, "can’t you do without meat even for a day?"

"I am doing without it," Manav said, "Does poori-aloo sound like non-veg to you? I should just pack something from Karavali Seafood right across the street."

"You are incorrigible!" Anjali shook her head in resignation.

"I can understand these two are born vegetarians," Manav told Anjali, "but what's wrong with you?"

Anjali shrugged her shoulders. "I just quit one day."

Later as they began to get into the vehicle, Manav said, "Khushi, could you sit at the back? Aarav told me he has been feeling a little queasy."

Khushi looked at Aarav who looked clueless at first. "Yeah." He said as an afterthought.

"Sure." She said wondering if this was Manav's mischief.

Arnav thought he should talk to Manav later for his juvenile trick but he hadn’t been able to take his eyes off Khushi from the moment he had seen her in the red black and white printed full length, wrap-around skirt and the white crop top. Sitting next to her right now, he wished no one else was in the vehicle.

As he picked up her hand casually and began to stroke it absently, he noticed her face was flushed with color.

"Why are we going to this waterfall on New Year's Eve?" Aarav asked, "I thought we were going to a party."

"I never said that," Arnav drawled, "Manav did."

Arnav's fingers moved up her forearm, to stroke the crook of her elbow and he saw that Khushi was quivering with feeling, as her fists scrunched up nervously.

"I did want to go to a party," Manav defended himself, "did you think this was my idea?"

"We could have gone to a party if we were in Bangalore," Aarav said, "We happen to be in a not-a-very-happening-place."

Arnav lifted Khushi's chin and gently placed a kiss on her lips, his tongue bathing her lips in continuous strokes. As he pushed her down on the seat without letting her lips go, his fingers slipped into her top, to touch the smooth skin of her stomach, and then slid upward to upward to cup her breast. As he kneaded her breast gently, Khushi gasped allowing his tongue deep inside her mouth.

"Arnav?" Manav's question brought Arnav out of her his day dream. "I was asking you if you think Udupi is not a happening place?"

"Never mind!" Arnav raked his hand through his hair, "this is a healthier way to celebrate New Year." He couldn’t believe he was imagining things like an adolescent would.

Once they arrived in Hebri, Arnav had booked a Jeep that would take them the rest of the way to the base of the water fall which was about 14 kms further from Hebri. Armed with three bag packs that had the food and water, they got into the vehicle. As the roads passed through the jungles of the Western Ghats, the condition of the roads deteriorated into a muddy pathway. However, the landscape on both sides of the road was a sight for sore as eyes, with green lush mountains under blue skies, coconut groves, tall silver oak trees surrounded by dense bushes and rubber plantations.

"How much further is this place?" Rashmi asked Manav anxiously, "you told me it was nearby."

"Have you never come here before?" Anjali asked, "you are from this area, right?"

"My father wouldn’t let me go anywhere," she said, "he was very -- protective."

"Thankfully we won’t be doing that to our kids," Anjali said, "my daughter is in boarding school and is already quite independent."

"I don’t know how you do it," Rashmi, said, "I can’t imagine staying away from Sanvi."

As Anjali fell silent, Manav said, "That means you won't let Sanvi do anything either. You are probably as strict as your father."

"Don't be rude Manav!" Aarav admonished his friend, "don’t mind him. He has left behind his manners at home today."

"I agree." Arnav added.

Manav sat back looking somber. "Everyone is ganging up on me today."

"I haven’t said anything." Khushi said tentatively.

"You are my one true friend Khushi," Manav pouted.

After they reached the base of the waterfall, they alighted the jeep. The driver informed them that he would wait for them until 3 PM and no later than that.

Soon they were crossing a narrow bridge across the river and into the jungle, toward the water fall. As they entered the jungle everything seemed darker with the dense thicket of trees and bushes. They could hear the gurgling of a stream and stepped carefully on rocks to cross it. Arnav held Khushi's hand as he helped her cross it. Aarav did the same with Rashmi.

"Where are Anjali and Manav?" Rashmi asked.

"Anjali can't walk fast," Arnav said, "Manav will take care of her.

Soon, they came to a point where there were steps built to help in the ascent.

"There were no steps the last time I came here." Arnav said, "race you to the top!"

As Arnav and Aarav ran up the stairs, Khushi and Rashmi walked slowly one step a time.

"Can we rest for a bit Khushi?" Rashmi asked her, "I am out of breath."

"Sure," Khushi said, "the water is with the guys. I wish we had kept one bottle with us."

They sat looking around the trees in the jungle, listening to the sounds of birds making melodious sounds, once in a while.

"Manav told me you are Arnav are together." Rashmi said suddenly.

"What?" Khushi was shocked beyond words.

"He told me I should keep out of your way," she said, "he was quiet vocal about it."

"I – the thing is –" Khushi stuttered.

"He needn’t have worried," Rashmi said, "Arnav and I are just friends."

"Rashmi – you don’t have to explain." Khushi said going red in the face. She would have to have a talk with Manav soon.

"I know Manav told you about Arnav and me during college," she began, "but it looks like he doesn’t know details about our break up."

Khushi realized she was going to hear Rashmi's version of the break up and wondered why she was telling her all this out of the blue.

"Arnav had come to talk to my dad and told him he would marry me after completing his MS. But my dad convinced me that I would be leading a very difficult life with a man who wanted to make it on his own. I chose to listen to my dad."

Now she understood what Rashmi had meant by her words earlier. "Going against parents' can be daunting," Khushi tried to offer some comfort.

"That's a nice excuse," Rashmi smiled through her tears, "The reality was that I chose a life of luxury over love."

"You were young Rashmi." Khushi said.

"I paid a price for that," Rashmi said, "it turned out that my husband's family had lost a lot in business and they needed me to bail them out of their financial crisis. I realized very early in marriage that my husband was used to luxury but didn’t like to work hard to earn it."

"I am sorry."

"After a year of marriage, I met Arnav again," she continued, "I practically threw myself at him but he told me that in clear words that he cannot accept me in his life. However, he said he would give me all his support if I needed it.

"My father realized his mistake but because of his pride he wouldn’t let me divorce my husband. He supported me by giving my in-laws more money. My husband's death was because of his indulgence of fast cars. He was driving over the speed limit when he lost control and crashed into a truck. Finally, my in-laws are fighting me for the property that belongs to me.

"Despite everything that happened Arnav is helping me out now. In these past couple of months, I have learnt how to be independent – something my dad should have taught me a long time ago. I am truly grateful to him for that.

"The only good thing in this whole fiasco is my daughter." She smiled fondly.

As Khushi saw Manav and Anjali approaching, she warned Rashmi to straighten herself out.

Soon they were on their way up and were joined by Arnav and Aarav who had come down looking for them.

"What took you so long?" Arnav asked Khushi, "we were there for nearly fifteen minutes when we realized you hadn’t turned up."

"We took a break." Khushi said looking up at Arnav.

At the first glimpse of the pristine waterfall, they just stood silently astounded by the beauty as it flowed amid a backdrop of green foliage and brown rocks, splashing into a pond below. As it fell from a height of 300 ft above, it felt as though it was flowing from the blue skies. As the rays of the sun sluiced through the gaps, illuminating the water like gold, the scenery looked like a small piece of heaven.

The men, who were already attired in shorts, took off their t-shirts and got into the shallow pond shouting at the top of their voice, as the cold water touched their bodies. Khushi noticed a group of young girls who were awestruck by the sight of the three handsome men.

Khushi turned toward Anjali and Rashmi.

"Shall we get into the water?" she asked them eagerly.

"I can't step in to cold water Khushi," Anjali shook her head in refusal, "I will get a migraine."

"Me too." Rashmi agreed. "I can't afford to get sick with Sanvi around."

"You go ahead Khushi," Anjali said, "we will keep watch on all our stuff."

As she hesitated she caught Arnav's eyes and as he gave her an encouraging nod for her to join them, Khushi took off her wrap-around skirt and her t-shirt to reveal the water-resistant black shorts and the black and white spaghetti top she wore inside.

As she stood on the rock, Arnav motioned her to jump in and after the first initial shock, Khushi got accustomed to the temperature of the water as she swam smoothly, enjoying the warmth of the sun rays that fell on parts of the pond.

She saw Arnav, Manav and Aarav trying to get close to the waterfall as it splashed on to the pond. As she got closer, she realized the force of the water fall was too much to sit under it.

After playing in the water for a few more minutes Arnav and Khushi moved farther away and sat on a huge rock, basking in the sun. As birds flew above in the blue skies, Khushi leaned back as a feeling of peace settled in her heart.

"This place is so beautiful!" She exclaimed with pleasure.

"You are beautiful." He looked at her, his molten brown eyes simmering as they bore into her hazel ones.

I chose a life of luxury over love…

As Rashmi's words reverberated in her head, with startling clarity Khushi realized that she would drop everything in the world to be with Arnav even if he had nothing to his name. She was in love with him.


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Edited by charlotte74 - 6 years ago
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Edit: Payal is coming across as delusional. I got this eerie feeling while reading that portion, a few chapters back I had commented whether Arnav saw Payal in Srijit, a certain obsession. Some of us had commented that she probably made it seem as if she was in a relationship. Wonder why, purely out of a delusion she had built in her mind or as a way of protecting herself from something. Looks like the former now. Had she told Khushi also something along the same lines back in the day? It sure looks as if she was someone who needed some sort of psychiatric help. And I guess we can safely shelve all the Aakash conspiracy theories😆

I can't help feel sorry for Rashmi too, her story is probably a lot common than we think. The father wanted what he thought was best for his daughter, and she went as per what he said. Arnav in a sense escaped, as he wouldn't have been truly happy if their relationship had continued, it would've been a compromise of sorts for him. He felt too responsible to break their relationship when in college but I'm glad that he made it clear that there was no chance later on. I hope Manav realizes that meddling beyond a point can be counter productive.

He can't keep the lid on his attraction any more and she needs to sort out the mystery behind her sister's death before giving in fully. But she knows that she's fighting a losing battle by acknowledging to herself that she is in love.

Edited by kizh72 - 6 years ago
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I am absolutely loving the pace of this story. Up until the last update we knew nothing about Anjali and barely heard about Aarav. And in today's update we see them both interacting with Arnav & Khushi. Each update has a lot of new info which keeps all the Sherlocks, Byomkesh-es and Dayas busy for the whole week 😆

I think Sandya was right about Aarav being Payal's bf. Let me know where do I send the cheque Sandy 😊 The timing seems to match too. Did he choose to do his residency in Mangalore for Payal? When Manav commented on Aarav's jealousy, he retorted saying he's not 18. Does that mean he was jealous of Arnav then? I wonder if he had a thing for Rashmi, but lost her to Arnav. He and Payal could have bonded over broken hearts 💔 My theories change with every chapter LOL. I was so sure Aakash was the BF after the last update 😆

Manav is kind of growing on me. I love the way he has brought everyone upto speed on Arnav & Khushi's "status quo". He literally shooed Rashmi out of their way and then not-so-subtly made sure the lovebirds stay together. Well, I may not have appreciated these efforts if I was Arnav or Khushi. But who am I kidding, with the pace these two are going, I think Manav is just the right catalyst to speed up the process. I also like how he engages everyone in his banter. I agree with him wholeheartedly about the vegetable pulao smiley36

Looks like Aarav still carries a torch for Rashmi. But it's too early to say for sure. Manav also seems to harbor feelings for Anjali. He was there for her all throughout the trip.

Like always, I am mesmerized with the description and intro you give on all places, Kavi. Udipi tourism is going to soar. I am telling...you should start collecting royalty 😎

I have a feeling not all notes from Payal were about Arnav. Khushi had a hard time arranging them chronologically based on the input she received from Manav & other sources. What if Payal was referring to someone else? E.g. the note about "relationships not written in stone" makes me go back to my earlier speculation about Akaash being her bf. Maybe he wasn't happy in his marriage and had an extra marital affair with Payal *ducks* But the main takeaway for Khushi was, Arnav was not in love with Payal or misled her in any way. Hopefully this should put an end to her dreams.

Speaking of dreams, someone really needs a cold shower. The waterfall probably helped in more ways than one. Not sure how long that will help though 🤣

At the waterfall 😉 -


Edited by cheers2all - 6 years ago
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Wonderful update! I like that it's finally clear to Khushi that whatever existed between Arnav and Payal was from Payal's side only, that should make it easier for her whenever she discovers the truth about what really happened with Payal. Hearing Rashmi's side of the story should also help clarify who Arnav is as a person, in Khushi's mind, beyond the attraction she feels for him, and the confusion he causes in her.

Looking forward to see how the arrival of Aarav and Anjali takes the story forward...

- Tinkertoes

Edited by just4coll - 6 years ago
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Firstly Thanks Gauri for reminding me this story and making me catching up on time. I owe you one for this!

My Thoughts:

This story is a perfect example of suspense and surprise!

When it started I did not even guess the story will have such turns of events and man you make me hold my breath every single update!!

First with a prologue I thought it's an infatuation turned love for Arshi and see it's the love blossomed between the most matured people at the matured age! How it ended with Arnav shocked over his thoughts about Khushi.

Chapter 1 - it was totally a roller coaster! Khushi from a little girl hanging out with her sister friends to a girl with hunched shoulders with past bitter memories struggling to process and proceed with life and it ended with how Khushi was shocked with her thouhts about Arnav.


Chapter 2 - Though Khushi came to Bangalore with a motive and struggling with Payal thoughts. Arnav came just in to help her, seek her out and put her out of the misery and how. How it ended with Khushi meeting Arnav at the least expected time and Arnav not recognizing her and Khushi not really happy about it😂


Chapter 3 - Khushi's hidden crush over Arnav over taking her resolve to avoid Arnav! - Arnav and Khushi on the table, with lights off, holding eackother close, just mobile torch and Khushi had to wipe his sweat (poor Girl, I can totally understand her action any girl in her place would have done the same;)) - How it ended with Khushi remember her crush and him teaching her dance, a positive sign!!


Chapter 4 - I totally loved for quick progress in the story with Payal story and Arnav admiring Khushi and Khushi admiring Arnav and Khushi starting seeing Arnav on a different light and Arshi fighting - Arshi getting comfortable with each other despite not getting aware of and the great Rashmi entry which I don't ponder over it too much and How it ended with Arnav and Khushi on a bike, waahhhh!!


Chapter 5 - this took away the place for my favorite chapter, loved every bit of it - Right from how Khushi mind was messed up and Arnav turned up to mess up more and he did, didn't he? The way he chased Srejith away, the way he started caring for Khushi, the way he tied her hair (my god), the way Khushi showed her jealousy over Rashmi and Arnav's explanation to it (damn cute), Khushi anger on Arnav for drinking though it's her frustration on Payal, Arnav's reply and his explanation, Khushi consoled and lend her shoulder and in turn she cried on Arnav's shoulder and how it ended with Arnav and Khushi sleeping cosy on a sofa and Khushi dream which is her consciousness pricking her.


Chapter 6 - and yet again this chapter took away the place of my favorite chapter - Especially which Ridhabh strong words on Arnav, her forceful confession confused Khushi more - But the trip to well and saving girl from the ghost and scaring Khushi then daring Khushi and Arshi's almost kiss then Rashmi called to confuse Khushi more - How it ended with Khushi acknowledging her craving for forbidden fruit!!


Chapter 7 - OMG, this chapter I understand not this chapter but the whole has become my favorite that each chapter will become my favorite for its own reasons - How it started with Manav's entry here he came, he told, he gave an insight of past life, encouraged Khushi - Again came Rashmi though I was little doubtful with Rashmi kept saying things as Arnav's favorite and turned out to be its Manav's favorite and I felt may be there was love triangle and brushed it off thinking he is trying to make less akward for Khushi - How it ended with Khushi was convinced with Payal at fault and Arnav after all seem to have helped her.


Chapter 8 - Do I need to repeat myself as to what this chapter did to me?!! Of course my most favorite one for the obvious kiss happened!! - How it started with Saree shopping, sexy blouse, Function where Khushi felt out of place and when she saw Arnav, Rashmi and Savi, she could stop her heart breaking a little and chest tightening - I absolutely loved the fight and How it ended with Khushi bursting at Arnav with ranting from Srejith to Rashmi and Arnav had to stop her by kissing her and then snapped her blouse open!!


Chapter 9 -What a chapter!! Sheetal ice cream parlour - Though I was a little disappointed with the Chapter not starting from the exact end part of the last chapter but you understand us and gave away what we needed - Arshi crossed the boundary and already comfortable with each other atleast Arnav with Khushi - Stupid Srejith, glad He is out - Rashmi played a role in messing up Khushi brain and glad it happened as relationship should not start on a lie - I'm surprised how Khushi saw Manav's crush/love for Rashmi but I think he is over it - I loved how Khushi took care of Arnav and how it ended with Khushi wailing in guilt!


Chapter 10 - Much Needed revelation about Arnav's background - so proud of him, despite his suffering he stood tall and helping others are what I like the most about him - I'm sure he helped Payal like he helped Manav and Rashmi and probably he tried to stop her from going back to drugs but he couldn't and as a result she went back and on top of it she would have proposed him and he would not have accepted it/ hurt her unintentional which would have made her do something in party which let her die - Arnav must be feeling guilty of not able to save her like how he tends to take blame for other doings - How it ended with Khushi in the dilemma and Arnav clarifying about his and Rashmi relationship which means that he acknowledges and admits Khushi is one special and the mind blowing kiss!!


Chapter 11 - A surprise chapter with the arrival of Aarav and Anjali -I dunno why I get a nagging feel that Aarav is someone very crucial here - Glad Rashmi understood Arshi relationship and clarified her stand - Now I understood how mature Arnav is though there was an ample chances for Rashmi getting back as well needed his help and he did but at the same time, made it very clear as to she will remain a friend to him - Khushi though should have rejoiced with this , she didn't her went out for the young girl sufferings and reasoned Rashmi's doing - Both Arshi are very matured!! I loved loved loved Arshi little romance in car all thanks to Manav, i liked how Khushi is fluttering and shivering with Arnav ministrations and Arnav is daydreaming about her eyes wide open -How it ended with Khushi and Arnav moving away from others and Khushi saying this place is beautiful, Arnav saying she is beautiful and Khushi looks at him and realises how she would give every damn thing to be with him ever! And that how one realizes tthe love!! Love should slowly deep into your heart gives you warm feeling and spreads all over your heart then gives a sudden realization that this is love!!!


Thank you for this lovely tale and I love reading every bit of it🙂

Sorry for such a long comment, couldn't resist!!

Edited by Aishu136 - 6 years ago
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Dear Kavi,

Namaskara to Udupi Krishna. Brought back all the memories about this special Krishna pose as I peeped in through the window to catch a glimpse. You added one more essence of DK into the mix today - with the temple visit, food at Woodlands and finally the Hebri falls.

Mrs Rai's house has become the most happening place in the town in recent times. Anjali seems to enjoy a solo vacation (hmmm???!!!!). What's going on in her life?. The serious Aarav seems to have serious intentions of returning to the country. The jovial and well-meaning Manav is trying hard to fix his mentor's life (I wish he stopped being so obvious, or rather leave Arnav and Khushi to figure things out themselves). Rashmi -- she seems to be tagging along everywhere. [Happy new year to Sanvi, from me here 😊 ].

And then there's Arnav and Khushi. She, for one, was the most prepared for the trip to the Falls. ☺️Will she get to showcase her age-old swimming capabilities near the Falls today? Ring a bell, Arnav????

Arnav is a goner. Any little glimpse into his mind is always welcome :D I think once the house guests clear off, he might get a chance to have a serious conversation with Khushi. I hope that happens sooner than later. For, Rashmi might have cleared the air about her relationship with Arnav, but there is an even bigger elephant in the room that needs to be addressed. I think I warmed up a little more towards Rashmi today. It takes courage to openly admit your flaws (no matter what!). And she actually stirred up a conversation about a relationship that has no future, with someone who could possibly be the future of the person in question, Arnav, in this case. Kudos to her! Rashmi revealed some other facets of Arnav's personality -- how principled and helpful he is...but at this time, I don't think Khushi needs any more testimonials to accept her feelings for Arnav.

Kavi -- I liked how you brought about the conversation between Rashmi and Khushi. That laid the foundation for some self-exploration on Khushi's part. I think this clear vision should now set her up for that conversation with Arnav.

The bickering between Aarav and Manav - old scores to settle (despite everything seemingly harmless?!]. I always hear about guys going after "Coorgie beauties"...oops, how could I forget the certain South Canara beauty who won the Ms. World title 25 years ago? A South Canara beauty is a force to reckon with :D

Thanks Kavi, for yet another stellar update.

Edited by Newfan2016 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Such a beautiful chapter this was..Jst didn't want to stop reading..

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So khushi came to know one sided affections of Payal...I believe derz still more to d story...also feeling very bad for rashmi..by any chance r u trying to pair a Aarav wid her....would be good....will b waiting for the next update....

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Wonderful part! ❤️❤️

Many revelations! Good for Khushi and us 😊

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I have never been to Udipi temple. I didn't know men needed to be shirtless. Is the undervest okay or does that need to be taken off too? I know different temples in South India have different rules(have visited a temple where women could not be wearing anything resembling pants(salwars, churidhars etc.) its either a saree or a half-saree or long skirt.

Arnav taking off his shirt sparked my imagination 😳


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So Payal nursed a one-sided crush on Arnav. hmm...thought as much.

It was lovely to see Arnav as affected by Khushi as she is by him. And that his imagination is running wild. I wonder whether he realizes he is in love with her. What does he think about her? I am so eager to know his feelings (not just things from his POV) Does he still have no inkling that Khushi is Payal's sister?

Another thing that I found a little odd (or maybe I am just reading too much into it) is that when Rashmi spoke about how strict her father was, she didn't ask Khushi about her father. She has never asked Khushi about herself. Actually, none of them have but then the others really haven't spoken about their families. I thought it would be natural especially in Rashmi's case, given that she has been told that Arnav and Khushi have a thing for each other. Maybe she is not as perceptive as I thought or she doesn't want to know Khushi's background.

Another stellar update, Kavi. Am loving it!

Edited by Ssanjinika - 6 years ago

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