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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey i have a req to all d writers of dd forum i loved all of ur writing n concept but i have a req to made plz write something on jealous rak i will want to read how jelous rak will be thanku in advance n sry to bother u all

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Request accepted. Will start writing and post soon😃 Even I love jealous Rakshit 😆 Thou jealous Dri will also be a treat to watch.😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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"What are you, Mr. Shergill? Five? Come on, grow up."


"Grow up, eh? Grow up and dance like you, with your friend like you two are eternal lovers separated by fate?"


"He is your brother and my brother in law for heaven's sake. Can you just stop saying it because it is not just ridiculous but sick to even listen."


"It is sick to listen but it isn't sick to do." He murmured.


"Aap to rehne hi dijiye. What were you doing with Lavanya?'


" What was I doing?" Play innocent, Rakshit. Play more innocent.


"You have this huge problem with my casual dance with Shikhar but when that Lavanya was jumping all over you, grabbing you as of she is the sole owner of you, slide down her hands from your shoulders to chest.... you didn't have an issue, did you? That wasn't sick, was that, Mr. Shergill?"


"I was waiting for you to escort me from her. She is too stubborn to let me go unless my fiery biwi shows her where she stands."


"What do you think I was doing then?"


"What? Don't tell me Shikhar was being a chipku like Lavanya."


"Don't call him that. He is such a handsome and sweet guy. I really like him."


"To usi se shadi karni thi. Mere sath kyu aake baithi mandal me?" Handsome my foot!


"Shikhar and I may not be eternal lovers separated by fate but you are I are eternal enemies separated surely. Shadi to aapse hi karni thi. Bohot se badle lene hai pichle janam ke. You remember, pichle janam me ek Latika naam ki ladki thi jiske sath aap flirt karte nahi thakte the? Mujhe to lagta hai... Nahi pakka yakeen hai, ye Lavanya wahi stupid Latika hai. Argh."


He shot her a what the •••• look. What was she even blabbering? And then he regretted. Regretted not taking his wife seriously when she said she had a rare mental disorder.


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No, I don't know what this is. I wish I would have had time to write something properly but I am going off from tomorrow. Couldn't resist typing out something when I saw this. Kindly ignore if this doesn't make sense. This is a 5 minutes writeup that I didn't even bother reading again. 🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hehehe nice one sure do take ur time n where r u gng will be waiting for ur stories do update soon n yes i will wait for a proper jealous rak but this one is also good

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: kgoyal

Hehehe nice one sure do take ur time n where r u gng will be waiting for ur stories do update soon n yes i will wait for a proper jealous rak but this one is also good

Ah, no. I won't be writing more. I cannot be active here owing to some personal issues. I'll be back a while later only to update the ongoing SS. That's it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sure dear u take good care of urself n be active will miss ur writing do come n update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yes please....would love to read ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It is really good @IAdoreYou

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Ah, no. I won't be writing more. I cannot be active here owing to some personal issues. I'll be back a while later only to update the ongoing SS. That's it.

Ohh nooo I will miss you and your stories😭 take care thou. Keep visiting 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

"What are you, Mr. Shergill? Five? Come on, grow up."


"Grow up, eh? Grow up and dance like you, with your friend like you two are eternal lovers separated by fate?"


"He is your brother and my brother in law for heaven's sake. Can you just stop saying it because it is not just ridiculous but sick to even listen."


"It is sick to listen but it isn't sick to do." He murmured.


"Aap to rehne hi dijiye. What were you doing with Lavanya?'


" What was I doing?" Play innocent, Rakshit. Play more innocent.


"You have this huge problem with my casual dance with Shikhar but when that Lavanya was jumping all over you, grabbing you as of she is the sole owner of you, slide down her hands from your shoulders to chest.... you didn't have an issue, did you? That wasn't sick, was that, Mr. Shergill?"


"I was waiting for you to escort me from her. She is too stubborn to let me go unless my fiery biwi shows her where she stands."


"What do you think I was doing then?"


"What? Don't tell me Shikhar was being a chipku like Lavanya."


"Don't call him that. He is such a handsome and sweet guy. I really like him."


"To usi se shadi karni thi. Mere sath kyu aake baithi mandal me?" Handsome my foot!


"Shikhar and I may not be eternal lovers separated by fate but you are I are eternal enemies separated surely. Shadi to aapse hi karni thi. Bohot se badle lene hai pichle janam ke. You remember, pichle janam me ek Latika naam ki ladki thi jiske sath aap flirt karte nahi thakte the? Mujhe to lagta hai... Nahi pakka yakeen hai, ye Lavanya wahi stupid Latika hai. Argh."


He shot her a what the •••• look. What was she even blabbering? And then he regretted. Regretted not taking his wife seriously when she said she had a rare mental disorder.


*

No, I don't know what this is. I wish I would have had time to write something properly but I am going off from tomorrow. Couldn't resist typing out something when I saw this. Kindly ignore if this doesn't make sense. This is a 5 minutes writeup that I didn't even bother reading again. 🤣

This was funny🤣

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