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Posted: 4 years ago

Random shot ..on spoiler when guddan is blamed and left her house..

Everyone was blaming her...but her husband her friend stands in her support...he was arguing with durga bahu..dadi bua...for her...everyone blaming him for her...he knows that she is innocent...but not able to prove that...he is not caring for his respect...his family talking badly to him...she can't see this ..how can she let them insult him...no the only way to stop this is..

Gudd: hum ye ghr chodkr ja rhe hai...

Aj : guddan ....tum ese kese ja sakti ho..ye ghr tmhara hai...aur kisi ko tmse problem hai to wo...

Gudd: nhi jindal sahab hum hi jyenge...

Dadibua: dekha lalla..maan liya isne apna gunha..aur tu..iske liye humse lad rha tha..

Gudd: bua ji...humne ye nhi kha ki humne ye sab kiya,hai...hum bs ye kh rhe hai ki agr ghr ki shanti hmre yha se jane m hai to hum ja rhe hai..

Aj: tum khi ni ja rhi ho guddan.. And by saying this he left for their room..

Dadi: tu ese ni ja sakti beta..ye tera ghr hai..

Laxmi: ha sasu maa aap nhi jyengii..

Gudd: laxmi bahu,dadi...ye hmara ghr hai to hum kbi b a ja sakte hai naa..abi hmare jane se sb thk rhta hai to hum jyenge...

Aur abhi to hume apke lalla ko bhi samjhana hai...and she left for their room..

Room:

Aj was fuming in anger...guddan enters..

Aj : tum kese..

Guddan run and hugged him...

Aj shocked but hugged her back...

Gudd: Aap phle hmari baat sunege..aur fir kch khenge..nhi to hm ese hi khde rhenge..boliye..sunege na hmari baat..

Aj: tum ese rhogi to kese sunuga...

Guddan awkwardly leave him..

Gudd: Dekhiye jindal sahab..hum hmesa k liye nhi ja rhe hai..kch tym k liye ja rhe hai..tbtk aap aur hum dono pta lgayenge ki ye kisne kiya..aur hum yha nhi honge to hmara naam bhi nhi ayega..

Aj: ye sb to tum yha rhkr bhi to kr skti ho..m promise krta,hu koii bhi tumse kch nhi bolega..

Gudd: humesa hum apki sunte hai na..is baar aap hmari sun lijiye..jane dijiye hume..

Aj closed his eyes and take a deep breath ..

Aj : thk hai jyo..lekin ..

Gudd: hum jaldi waps a jyenge..

Guddan start packing her stuff...and seeing all this..Akshat is feeling pain in his heart..he knows that she will return soon...but he can't handle this..

Aj: ye sab rhne do yhi...mera matlb hai thoda saman le jyo na...tumhe to jaldi ana hai naa..

Guddan smiles at him and nodded in positive..and pack her little stuff..

As guddan start leaving her room...her pallu stuck in something...she turn to fetch it..but surprised to see Aj was holding it in his hand..

Gudd: kya...kya hua...jane dijiye naa..

Aj : wo...wo bs..jaldi a jana..and he left her pallu..

Guddan put her bag down..and move towards him...

Gudd : hume nhi pta tha aap ese behave krenge ..hume itna miss krenge...nhi to hum aur phle hi jakr dekh lete..ki aap hmare jane k baad..

Aj pulled her to him...they were hell closed to each other..

Aj: kha na jane ki baat mt kro...aur ab ja rhi ho to...jaldi wapas aa jana..

Guddan was breathing heavily...

Gudd: aur nhi aye to...

Aj bent down and whisper in her ear..

Aj: nhi to consequences bht khrab honge Mrs.Jindal...aur ye baat aapka dost nhi..apka pati bol rha hai...

And with this he left her stunned and move out of the room in his usual swag..

After few minutes guddan gain her consciousness and blushes thinking their close proximity..

Guddan leaving house ..she says good bye to everyone and promised them to prove herself innocent..Aj was standing upstairs and watching her...

She looks at him and he turns his back..to her ..and then she left..

Aj touched his face...there were tears running down..he never cries...what guddan makes him...he is not the same Aj...he is now her "Jindal Sahab"..

He knows that everything is changed now...she is not her friend only...he start seeing her as his wife...his new found love..his life..it is difficult...very difficult for him to live without her...not for a day also..he can't bear this...when she will comeback she will come as his wife..his WIFE and he will make this sure himself.. With this thought he left for his room witj determined face..

Here Guddan knows that he is upset because of her leaving this house..she is leaving for him for his respect..she knows that he will never love her but what about her...he is her first love...her husband...she can't let him down because of her..she will prove herself innocent and come back to her "Jindal sahab" as not only his friend but as his wife..she knows the dimensions of their relationship are changing..and she will put her all efforts to make it work..with this determination she left for her father's house.. 

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