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The title of our OS is the same as I had written a TS long back with the same name 😂😂

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Dil khush Kar Diya...

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Part 2

After guddan left her house..

Dadi bua: dekha lalla..chali gyi naa..tu uske liye humse lad rha tha aur wo..

Aj: dekhiye bua ji mai apki izzat krta hu iska matlab ye nhi ki mai apni patni ki kam izzat karta hu…please mai aapse kch esa nhi boln achata …isliye aap guddan ke bare mai kch na hi bole to behtar hoga..

And he start moving towards his room,but suddenly turned around ..

Aj: aur haa…guddan khi nhi gyi hai..ye ghar uska hai…wo kch time ke liye apne mayke gyi hai..age se mai uske bare mai kch glt nahi sunuga..fir chahe wo koii bhi kyu na ho…and he glares at everyone..and leave for his room..

As he enters the room…he feels emptiness there…his room is silent…no this is not his room…this is his world with guddan…they share so much in this room..and now..he is alone..he knows that she will come back soon..but he cannot live in this room alone..so he exits the room and closed its door…

Aj: Laxmi bahu…mere is kamre ko koii nhi kholega..koii bhi nhi…is baat ka dhyn rhe…and he left for his restaurant..

Dadi: dekha didi aapne….mera lalla nhi rh pa rha hai apni patni ke bina…wo dono ek dusre se alg rh hi nhi sakte..isse gehra pati-patni ka rishta aur kya hoga..

Bua: haa dikh rha hai bhabhi…ab aapka beta ..hamra lalla nh irha…guddan ka pati ho gya hai..whi krta hai jo wo kehti hai…shhadi to uski phele bhi hui thi tb to esa nhi tha wo.. pta nhi is gudden ne kya jadu kr diya hai..

And she left the hall with durga and saru..

Laxmi came to dadi:

Lax: dadi…kya Aj antra maa ji ka bhi ese hi sath dete the ..unke liye bhi ese hi…

Dadi: nahi…mera matlab hai…antra alg thi aur guddan alg…antra kbhi ghr mai kisi ke khilaf nhi jati thi..fr chahe wo sahi ho ya galat..aur lalla kch bolta tha to usko bhi nhi bolne deti thi..kyi baar mne lalla ko man markar uski haa mai haa milate dekha tha…pyar to karta tha usse…wo bhi pyar krti thi mere lalla se…lekin uske pyar mai aazadi nhi thi..

Dadi: wo niyam aur kayde ke sath rhti thi…iske chlte wo lalla ki patni to bn gyi lekin wo sathi nhi bn payi jisse lalla apn asukh dukh sab bina jhijak ke baant le…wo sathi use GUddan me mil gya hai…inke rishtey mai azadi hai..dono apna har such dukh ek dusre ke sath baant lete hai..to unke beech kch rh hi nhi jata jo unh ek dusre se dur kre.. samjhi kch..

Lax: haa dadi…matlb ye ki aj guddan se pyar karte hai lekin antra maaji wala nhi guddan sasu ma wala..

Both stat laughing and thanked kanaha for Akshan..

Aj was restless in his office…it is 9 p.m and he was still in his cabin…he really did not want to go home…but maa was calling him again and again…he closed his eyes and rest his head on his chair..and again his phone rings..

He receives the call without checking the number…

Aj: maa mai ghr aajyunga aap preshan hona band kijiye…

Gudd: to aap abhi tak gr nhi gye hai…

Aj: tum…tum..ab call kar rhi ho..pura din na ek bhi call na koii msg na btaya ki phuch gyi ghar ki nhi..

Gudd : acchaa jo har 1 ghante mai aap revti ko call kr rhe hai wo…

Aj: agr tum nahi bataogi to mai to khi se pta karunga hi naa..

Gudd: jindal sahab…

Aj: tumhe to koii frk hi nhi padta hai ki mai yha..

Gudd: jindal sahab…

Aj: bas tumhe sahi lga aur tum chali..

Gudd: akshattttt….

Aj become silent on hearing his name…

Gudd: kbse bol rhe …hmari sun hi nhi rhe aap…isliye wo humne…wo sab chhodiye ye btaiye ki ghar kyu nahi gye aap…pta hai na dadi kitni pareshan hai…laxmi bahu b kitni baar call kr chuki hai….boliye..ab..

Aj: mujhe…kaam tha…aur mai chla jyunga bola to mne maa se…

Guddan knows that he is lying..

Gudd: accha thk hai ..ye btaiye ki khana khaya aapne…kyuki hume to bht bhuk lag rhi hai…lekin na aap ghar jar he na khana kha rhe to hum bhi kese khaye…

Aj: tum na pagal ho bilkul khana kyu nhi khaya..chlo ab jaldi se khao..

Gudd: nahi jab aap ghr jkr maa ke sath bethkr thk se khayenge tabhi hum khayenge…aur hum tabhi baat krenge aapse…

And she cuts the call..

Aj: guddan…maa bhi naa..kitna preshan hoti hai mere liye…aur ise bhi kar diya…and hi left for his home..

After half-an-hour..aj video called her ..

Aj: dekho kha rha hu mai kahana aur ghar bhi a gya hu..abtum bhi jaldi se kha lo…

Guddan smiles and nodded in positive..

After two days..

@jindal mansion

Guddan entered in the house with her luggage…

Dadi bua: aa gyi tum…2 din bhi tkh se nhi rh pyi nay ha ke arm ke bina…

Gudd: aram se to hum bhut the bua ji…bs sukoon se nhi the….whi sukoon jo kisiko apne ghar mai rhkr milta hai…

Bua: taane maar rhi ho hume..dekho ..hum apne bhai ke ghar mai hai…

Gudd: nahi bua ji humara ye matlab nahi tha…

Durga: tum ese kese baat kar sakti ho bua ji se…aur jise tum apna ghar bol rhi ho na..wo ghar antara maa ji ka hai….tum to bs ek..

Aj (shouted): bas kijiye aap sab…bola than a mne..ki koii iske bare mai kch galat nahi bolega ..abhi to wo ghar ke andar bhi nahi ayi aur aap sab fr suru ho gye…ye ghr Antra ka tha durga bahu..ab guddan ka hai…is ghar mai hasi gunjti hai na jo khusi dikhti hai..wo sab guddan ki hai…is gharmai jo rang hai na wo sab guddan ke hai…YE GHAR MERI PATNI GUDDAN KA HAI…

Ye baat aap sab samajh lijiye…

He went to guddan;

Aj: aaj mai AKSHAT JINDAL sabke samne tumse kch khena chatahu…tum ek galti bankr meri zindigi mai ayi thi ..aur fr dheere dheere tumne meri life ki har galt chz ko sahi kar diya..tum me mujhe ek dost mila ek sathi mila jiske samne mai sab kch bol sakta hu..apna har dukh har khusi bta sakta hu..lekin ab mujhe sirf ek dost nahi ek patni bhi chahiye…kya tum sath dogi mera..hmare is rishtey ko age bdhane mai…kya meri sirf dost hi nhi patni bhi banogi…wo hak wo jagha jo ek pati ki hoti hai wo dogi mujhe apni life mai…

Guddan was spell bound by his words…she don’t know what to answer…it’s like her dream comes true

Gudd: ab hum kya bole ..hume to lga hi nhi tha humara rishta yha tk kbhi phuchega..hume lga ki hmare sapne bas sapne hi rh jyenge….lekin aaj sab sach hota dikh rha hai to..viswas hi nhi ho rha..she looked at him with lot of love in her eyes..hum denge apka sath is rishtey ko age bhdane mai..humesa sath rhenge apke..srif ek dost ki tarha nahi balki ek patni ki tarha bhi..hum wo sare hak apko denge jo ek pati ke apni patni par hote hai..

Aj smiles and held his hand out for her..she take that and come inside the house..not as saas,bahu or dost….as wife of Akshat Jindal…and he led her to their room..

Aj: jab se tum gyi thi ye ese hi bnd hai..ayo hum sath mai apne kamre apni duniya mai chlte hai..and she opens the door…he lifts her in his arms and take her inside their room…

Dadi and laxmi bahu was admiring their bond..while others are in shocked state watching this side of AJ…

So , I end here this …imagination of mine…and hope to seesuch some scenes in the serial too..

Dear writter .....it's a request pls do not inni achchi achchi baate ki we all start blushing or shedding our eyes with tears.....

Log galat samajhne lagte h aas pass k

Just read both the parts in a go!

I loved it a lot ❤️

AJ kitna romantic hai ❤️❤️

Amazing

I wish show me v same dikhata bt anyways i enjoyed it

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Hi everyone read this such a beautiful written👍🏼. I just hope ki esa kuch show m ain b dekhne ko mile...😳 Fingers crossed

Awesome

Loved it alot

D dialogues were beautiful 👍🏼

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