FF: MANISH GOPLANI AS KSHITEJ & BIHAAN *PART 14 & 15 on Pg 5

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MANISH GOPLANI AS KSHITEJ

SONIA BALANI AS SONIA

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ANKITA SHARMA AS ANKITA

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MANISH GOPLANI AS DR BIHAAN



PART-1 BY ARTI

This is a story of 2 twin brothers Kshitij and Bihaan separated when they were 6 years old. They were left in an orphanage when they were infants. In orphanage, they were inseparable. They used to play together, eat together, be with each other all the time. Bihaan was a timid shy kid and Kshitij was very outspoken and naughty. If any kid ever troubled Bihaan, Kshitij used to beat that kid and always protected Bihaan.

Bihaan was adopted by a nice loving middle-class family when he turned 6. Kshitij was extremely broken after this. He stopped smiling, stopped talking to anyone in the orphanage. Often his grief used to come out in form of aggression. It became increasingly difficult to control Kshitij's anger. At the age of 14, he angrily pushed a kid from the terrace of the orphanage building, which resulted in the death of that kid. He was sent to the juvenile prison after that. Juvenile prison had an extremely bad effect on Kshitij. It turned him into a ruthless, extremely selfish and evil man. When he was released from the prison he started pickpocketing to fill his stomach and slept on the streets. When he was 18, he met a magician and requested him to make him his assistant. With that magician, he started learning magic and started doing his own small shows. Then he learnt hypnosis and soon became a very famous magician. He adopted Azad Parinda as his stage name. By the age of 25, he became very famous as Azad Parinda - the magician for whom nothing is impossible. He became a millionaire and had everything. But his rough past had made him a very unhappy, cunning man. No amount of fame, money made him happy.

On the other hand, Bihaan was also broken when he was adopted. At the age of 7, he got a little sister Bihu and his loneliness went away. He spent all his time playing with her. He went to a nice school, studied very hard, became a doctor. He grew up to be a loving, caring, selfless and happy man. His family was proud of him. Over the years he had totally forgotten about Kshitij.

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PART 2 BY SARA

Though Kshitej had everything like money, name, fame etc but he lacked a nice loving family. He used to sit in the park watching kids playing with their mom and dad he used to feel bad for himself and soon he started hating the word FAMILY..

He also started hating Bihaan because he felt that Bihaan never tried to reach him and left him alone in the orphanage He dint even care whether he was dead or alive he was so disheartened that a brother for whom he fought from the whole world have became so selfish that he dint even try to contact his own brother after getting a family..

On the other hand though Bihaan had a good school and loving family he dint get the love and affection from his father because soon after his adoption he got his own daughter his own blood so started treating bihaan like an unwanted member of his family

Bihaan used to study hard day and night and since he was a brilliant student he manged to get a scholarship from a medical school and became a doctor.. during his struggle his father never supported him and in between this he tried several times to search for his brother Kshitej but all his efforts gone in vain because Kshitej was now Azad parinda who used to hide his real identity by using a mask!

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PART 3 BY ARTI

It was a busy monday morning. Bihaan was in the hospital wearing a mint-colored shirt, black pants and his white doctor coat. Suddenly he was called in the emergency ward. A little boy was lying on a stretcher with a huge wound on his head. He was unconscious and bleeding badly. Bihaan was checking for his vitals and cleaning the wound, when suddenly the door of the ward burst open and a young girl in her early 20s came rushing in towards the bleeding boy. She pushed Bihaan away and hugged the little boy crying and trying to make his conscious. Bihaan asked her who she was, but she didn't say anything because she was sobbing badly. Bihaan asked the nurses to hold the girl and take her out of the ward. She struggled to get out of the grip of the nurses but eventually she was taken out of the ward. Bihaan treated the wound of the boy and bandaged his head. As soon as he stepped out of the door, the girl rushed to him almost colliding with him asking how her brother is. He held her shoulders and made her sit on a chair asking her to calm down and told her that her brother is totally fine and recovering. He asked her to fill a small form on the reception of the hospital and she can take her brother home after 3 hours. Then he left for his cabin.

During lunch time, he was sitting in the cafeteria when the same girl walked towards him with her brother (who was now conscious) and started saying thank you continuously to Bihaan. Bihaan smiled and asked her to calm down. He offered her his lunch which she first refused, but later ate all of it because she was really hungry. She was continuously talking while eating and Bihaan was watching her amusedly. She talked about everything, from her favourite movie to how her maid annoys her so much at home. After she had finished she realised that they wasn't any food left for Bihaan and again started apologising. She said that since bhindi is her favourite and she hadn't eaten anything since morning, she didn't realise that she had actually eaten all of his lunch. Bihaan laughed and said bhindi isn't really his favourite so he didn't mind her eating her lunch. She smiled, said bye to him and started walking towards the door. Bihaan was continuously smiling like an idiot watching her walk away. As soon as she stepped out of the door and was out of sight, Bihaan realised that he hadn't even asked her her name. He ran towards the door. She was already across the street. Bihaan shouted on the top of lungs "BHINDI". She looked towards him shocked from across the street. Bihaan again shouted "What's your name". People on the road were staring at him as if he was some mad guy. The girl laughed a little and shouted "Ankita" loudly before she sat in the autorikshaw and went away.

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PART 4 BY SARA

While walking on the road towards her house ankita was in her own world of thoughts! She was continuously blushing thinking about Bihaan like how cutely he shouted BHINDI just to grab her attention for the purpose of asking her name.. She was so lost that she didn't even realise they have already reached the house and ended up banging her head on the wall.. This made her came out of her imaginations and she saw her brother who was standing beside her giggling and making fun of her! She scolded him and asked him to go inside and take rest as soon as she sent him inside she realised she was getting late for her job she immediately rushed towards the taxi stand coz she wanted to reach office as soon as possible...

While running madly in between the busy road she ultimately got hit by a white posh car and fell on the road... luckily she wasn't injured and was left with some minor bruises only... Ankita even before stabilizing herself she started screaming and abusing the driver! While she was still lying on the road she shouted!!! OH HELLO MR. ARE U MAD OR WHAT? CANT U SEE A GIRL CROSSING THE ROAD? JUST BECAUSE YOU HAVE AN EXPENSIVE CAR DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE FULL FREEDOM TO HIT ANYBODY ON ROAD!! THIS IS NOT YOUR DAD'S PROPERTY" She ended.. this made that driver came out of his posh car Ankita started starring him from bottom to top!! She saw a Chic coming out with classy boots and a shinning blue blazer! She was astonished to see his face as he was non other than Kshitej!! Who was an exact replica of Bihaan...Ankita felt extremely bad and embarrassed for her words and before she could apologise to Kshitej whom she was considering Bihaan, she was grabbed by Kshitej with full force... Kshitej hold her arms tightly by pressing his fingers against his soft skin which was hurting her and making her feel really uncomfortable! Kshitej even after realising that his touch is making her extremely uncomfortable kept doing that and in his bold husky voice and eyes full of angst and animosity he said " WHO THE HELL U THINK U R? DON'T U HAVE BRAINS THAT U WERE RUNNING MADLY IN BETWEEN A BUSY ROAD AND INSPITE OF BEING SORRY FOR UR ACT U R BLAMING ME? AND LET ME TELL U ONE THING DON'T EVEN DARE TO TALK TO ME LIKE THIS EVER U DON'T HAVE ANY IDEA HOW DANGEROUS I COULD BE" Ankita was still in shock but she managed to free herself from him by pushing him away and she said "I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS THE SAME DR BIHAAN I MET IN MORNING... AND LET ME CLARIFY YOU ONE THING NEITHER IM MAD NOR IM BLIND I WAS JUST IN A HURRY TO REACH MY WORKPLACE ON TIME BECAUSE MY CREUL BOSS WON'T GIVE ME A SECOND CHANCE BEFORE FIRING ME FROM MY JOB.. AND WITH THIS JOB I EARN BREAD FOR MY FAMILY.. BUT OBVIOUSLY PEOPLE LIKE YOU WHO HAVE EVERY LUXURY IN LIFE CAN NEVER UNDERSTAND THAT" She left having tears in her eyes... Kshitej felt bad seeing her in tears but before he could apologise her his ego and self obsesisity stopped him from doing that n he left the place!

While driving Ankita's words striked in his mind " I cant belive its the same bihaan I met" he immediately stopped his car and....

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PART 5 BY SARA

Ankita's words stroke Kshitej's mind " I cant believe this is the same Dr. Bihaan I met" and he immediately stopped the car! He mumbled the name Bihaan with eyes full of tears but soon those painful and bitter flashbacks started appearing in his mind like how his brother left him alone to die when he needed him the most. He then wiped off his tears, clenched his fist in anger and decided to meet Bihaan and ask him all those unanswered questions which were running in his mind since childhood!

He then smirked and said " I WILL RUIN HIS LIFE HIS CAREER HIS LOVE AND EVERYTHING HE HAS GOT.. I WILL MAKE HIM REALIZE THE PAIN, HARDSHIPS AND DISTRESS I HAD TO GO THROUGH MY ENTIRE LIFE" He takes an oath from himself that from this day he will make Dr. Bihaan suffer for the selfishness he had shown towards him when he was little and had no shelter. With all these dreadful thoughts in his mind Kshitej recklessly droves his car and reached the same taxi stand where he left Ankita! He asked those drivers whether they know anything about her workplace but all of them denied to share any single detail of her office as she was their regular passenger.. Kshitej then decided to bribe a driver who was willing to share the address with him.. He finally got the address and reached her office..

Kshitej enetered the cabin where Ankita was sitting by bursting the door with rage which made Ankita frightened. She was shivering from head to toe and started apologizing for what she had said just before.... Kshitej without even hearing a single word grasped her and took her towards his car.. Ankita was struggling hard to get out of his grip but it was not possible for a meek and weak girl like her.. she saw the whole staff giggling and making fun of her.. that time she felt simply hopeless and helpless.. Kshitej then made her sit in his car.. He cupped her face and asked her with his clenched teeth and shivering voice " Where is Bihaan?"

Ankita who was already in a state of shock dint believe what she just heard and said nothing! Kshitej again shouted with much louder voice " I said tell me where his clinic is?" Ankita was so damn confused about the whole situation and was wondering why Bihaan is asking her about his own clinic? but she still managed to take kshitej there..

In the clinic Bihaan was doing his extra hours due to an emergency case.. when kshitej asked Ankita to go inside his cabin and ask him to come outside! Ankita with shaking legs entered the room and after watching Bihaan who was an exact replica of the guy who was standing outside couldn't control herself and got faint! Bihaan immediately stood up with concern and tried to make her conscious.. while he was doing that he noticed a man coming inside his cabin.. he started looking him from bottom to top and was shocked to see his face..

Bihaan took no time in recognizing that he is none other than his brother whom he was trying to find since years.. Ankita after coming back in her conscious state saw Bihaan who was teary eyed and dying to hug him once! Bihaan stood up and murmured BHAI in a shivering voice! He was about to hug Kshitej when he pushed him away and asked him not to call him bhai again.. Bihaan tried to stabilize himself as he wasn't expecting this from a brother who was once ready to sacrifice even his life for him.. Bihaan felt that agony and hatred in Kshitej's eyes for himself which made him completely broken... Bihaan had so much to tell and ask his brother but....

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PART 6 BY ARTI

Kshitij angrily walked away before Bihaan could say another word. Bihaan felt completely broken. He was shocked and shattered on seeing the immense hatred in the eyes of Kshitij for him. He kept sitting on the floor completely lost, staring at the door blankly with teary eyes. Ankita sat near him and tried to talk to him. "Dr Bihaan, are you alright? Dr Bihaan?", she said repeatedly but Bihaan wasn't responding to her at all. He was just sitting numbly on the floor staring at the door from which Kshitij had walked out. Ankita pat his shoulder gently, continuously trying to talk to him but Bihaan didn't respond at all. Ankita got teary eyed seeing his this state.

"BIHAAN! BIHAAN! BIHAAN! BIHAAN", she started shouting his name loudly patting his cheeks forcefully trying to bring him to his senses. Bihaan immediately looked at Ankita confused and a moment later broke down sobbing like a kid in her arms. He wasn't able to speak anything, just kept crying. Ankita rubbed his back trying to calm him. Ankita felt strange why she is feeling so connected to emotions of a person she barely knew. Why are Bihaan's tears affecting her so much. She doesn't get emotional so quickly, even the most emotional scenes in movies never made her teary-eyed like the way Bihaan's tears did. For some time both Bihaan and Ankita was lost in a warm hug where Bihaan found his comfort in her arms, Ankita was trying her best to console him.

Their hug was broken by a phone call on Bihaan's mobile. The sudden realisation that they had just been so close made them very awkward and they shyly moved away from each other. Bihaan was completely red as he picked up the call. In fact he was almost about to drop the phone on the ground. "Bhaiya! Where are you? Remember you had to take me out for shopping today? You said you will take a half day and you still aren't at home! I am so angry at you! When will you reach home? What happened to the always punctual Bihaan bhaiya? If you aren't home in 15 mins, don't talk to me ever again!", Bihu shouted from the other side of the call. Bihaan smiled a little and said "I'll be home in 30 mins pakka. I'll let you shop as much as you want today. Love you Bihu". "Love you too bhaiya but you better be here in 30 mins, otherwise forget the tv remote forever" Bihu said laughing. Ankita was awkwardly about to leave when Bihaan motioned her to stay and sit down on the chair.

Bihaan disconnected the call and sat next to Ankita. He nervously said to her "I am really sorry for whatever happened today. I am really sorry for making you so uncomfortable. I never thought my past would come in front of me like this". "Past? what past?" Ankita asked holding his hand. Bihaan said staring at the door again getting teary-eyed "I really don't want to bother you with all this. Even I am so confused right now". Bihaan got up, took his bag and was about to leave, when Ankita held his arm and said "Wait, I am coming with you."

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PART 7 BY SARA

Ankita held bihaan's hand when he was about to leave his cabin and asked him to take her with him... Ankita did feel awkward while doing so but she didn't want bihaan to go n drive alone because he was still in a state of shock n deep grief! Bihaan noded to take ankita with him as he himself didn't want to leave her alone he decided to drop her safely to her house because she was his responsibility now... on their way to home ankita hesitantly asked bihaan that was he really his brother? She said " im shocked to see how two brothers can have such drastically contrasting characterstics!! Ur brother is a Demon!" Bihaan turned his face towards her n showed his dislikness about what she just said!! Ankita realised that bihaan loves his brother alot n she shouldn't have said such words about his brother on his face... Bihaan ask her not to judge him for what he said n did...he said " I know my brother well there must be a huge reason why he reacted this way My kshitej can never live without his bihaan" he ended up having tears in his eyes.. bihaan while talking to himself decides that he will get back kshitej by hook or by crook.. he will bring his brother back to him at any cost!!

Bihaan stopped his car...Ankita said this is not the place I live bihaan... he smiled and asked her to get out of his car ankita noded n came out... after coming out he said actually my sis has given me a deadline to reach home so I will take her n then drop u to ur house.. I hope u don't have any issue with that? Ankita smiled thinking about how protective bihaan is for his sister she adored him and said she is absolutely fine with it!! Listening bihaan's car horn bihu rushed towards the parking lot and saw a beautiful girl standing right next to bihaan..

Before bihaan could say anything bihu started screaming omg!!!! My bhabhi is soo beautiful... bihaan bhai so this was the imp work u were busy in?? Hmm?? thats not fair u should have told me about her before!! But wait let me take her inside, mama will be really happy to meet her!! But wait... if she is my future sis in law than who was the girl u were with last night? Bihu teased bihaan and started laughing... Bihaan and ankita were feeling extremely awkward with whatever bihu was uttering bihaan noticed weirdness in ankita's eyes n he shouted!! Bihu will u please shut up?? There is nothing like she is just a.. bihaan started thinking who is she? She isn't even his friend nor a his patient... so ended up introducing her as colleague!

Bihu felt sad as she was v happy that finally his brother have chosen a right girl for himself!! While bihaan was denying whatever bihu was suspecting ankita unintentionally under jealousy asked " Dr bihaan how many gfs u have?? " bihaan was shocked to hear that as he wasn't expecting such question from a girl whom he met just today.. bihaan smirked n said " do I look like that kind of a person?" Ankita felt ashamed of her question as she had no rights to ask or feel jealous of what bihu said!! Bihu was noticing though they r denying but there is definitely some chemistry in their eyes...

After all this conversation bihaan ankita and bihu walked towards his car! Bihu asked ankita to sit on a front seat and she herself sat on the backseat... bihu being a v talkative girl started talking with ankita and started asking her about his job hobbies beauty secrets fav dishes etc etc bihaan was simply smiling hearing their convo... bihu then asked ankita to accompany her with shopping as she felt ankita has a great fashion sense about traditional clothes! She was loving her suit dupatta and bangles she was wearing! Bihaan asked whether she would like to accompany them or not? Ankita smiled n said ok I will!!

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On the other side Kshitej was standing alone near a calm silent beach holding a bottle full of alcohol in hand! He was completely drunk and was struggling to even stand properly... He was only thinking about Bihaan and his reaction after seeing him... somewhere in his heart he did feel the love in Bihaan's eyes but it was not enough to melt a person who has become completely emotionless and stone hearted due to the hardships he had faced in his childhood, the age when children mostly spend time playing with toys Kshitej was living in a cage in between prisoners under harsh conditions...So, Kshitej was still adamant to destroy Bihaan's life the way he destroyed his...

A moment later Kshitej got a phone call from a girl who trying to contact him since 5 hours but he wasn't attending any of her call.. kshitej then picked up her call angrily and said "What's wrong with you? why are u calling me again and again?" The girl replied! " I was worried for u!! and u sound like u r drunk... She shouted and asked him where the hell he is? Kshitej warned her not to interfere in his personal matters... " How many times i have to tell u that i have not given you any rights to interfere in my personal space! wherever I am whatever i am doing is none of ur business.." he ends up throwing his phone on a beach sand...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it Sarah! Kshitij is going to be a really psycho villain 😆

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Loved it. Sarah you are amazing.anihaan ka hug passionate lag raha hai.btw who is this new girl in kshitij's life.and pls update soon. I am waiting.

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PART 8

Bihaan, Ankita and Bihu entered the shopping mall. Bihu was constantly taking fashion advice from Ankita. Ankita was very amused by Bihu. She enjoyed her company and her cute funny talks. Bihu as usual was cracking little jokes and Ankita was constantly chuckling talking to her. Bihaan was completely lost in her laugh. He was smiling like an idiot staring at her whenever she laughed. Suddenly he bumped into a glass door of a store and came to his senses. He stood there rubbing his forehead and Ankita, Bihu rushed towards him asking if he was alright. Bihaan felt embarrassed and said "I am completely fine. Actually umm I was umm looking into my phone and that's why I bumped into this stupid glass door". Bihu teased him and said "Are you sure it was the phone you were staring at and not someone else?". Bihaan became red and looked at Ankita. Ankita's eyes widened and she tried to change the topic saying "Let's go and start your shopping Bihu. We are already late". And they went inside the store.

Ankita helped Bihu select some outfits and Bihu was trying them one by one. Bihaan was just sitting there trying not to stare at Ankita again. He was trying to divert himself by looking randomly around the store. Bihaan was randomly roaming around looking at some kurtis when he heard some ladies laughing at him. He became red and tried to cover-up the situation by pretending like he is looking for kurtis for his wife. He asked salesman "Which is the latest design? Which do you think will look best on my wife?" he said pointing towards Ankita so that the ladies would stop laughing at him. The salesman gave him a beautiful light yellow colored kurti and said "Sir, this will look beautiful on your lovely wife. Please ask her to try this and then we can get it altered for her if she chooses to buy it." Bihaan was completely red now. How was he going to ask Ankita, whom he barely knew, to try out a random kurti. He slowly walked towards her and nervously handed her over the kurti. Ankita said "Oh Bihaan you selected this for Bihu? It is lovely! I will ask her to try it out". Bihaan stammered "No, Ankita actually I want you to try this. Pl Pl Please", he said giving an awkward smile as he looked back at the salesman who was looking towards him smiling. Ankita was very confused but decided to try it as it was indeed a very pretty kurti.

Since all the trial rooms on the floor were occupied, she went to the upper floor trial rooms. Bihaan was so red that he felt he would burst any moment. To escape the salesman's constant gaze, he also went behind Ankita on the upper floor. Ankita entered the trial room and Bihaan was standing outside nervously looking down on the floor. After some time, he heard Ankita's voice from the trial room. She said "Bihaan, can you get someone to help me with the dori of this kurti?". Bihaan said "Sure, wait a min. I'll get some saleslady to help you out". He looked around but no one was there. He went downstairs to get Bihu or some saleslady but couldn't find both. He went upstairs and said "Ankita, I can't find anyone here Ankita. Leave it. You can try it later with Bihu's help". Ankita thought for a moment and then peeked from the door of the trial room and slowly said "Do you mind helping me Bihaan? It's okay if you don't want to. I don't want to make you feel weird". Bihaan stared at her for a moment with his mouth open and he was more red than ever before. He stammered and said "uhm aa o o okay". He entered the trial room and felt he would faint any moment now. Ankita was also red but was also controlling her laughter looking at Bihaan's nervousness. Bihaan stood behind her and was looking on the floor. His hands were shaking as he held the dori. Ankita wanted to laugh really badly looking at Bihaan. But suddenly Bihaan looked in her eyes through the mirror. Ankita's urge to laugh went away and she felt a sudden rush of blood in her face as she looked in Bihaan's eyes through the mirror. They stared at each other and for some time all the awkwardness and nervousness vanished between them. Bihaan gently pulled her close to him constantly looking in her eyes through the mirror. He tied the dori and turned her towards him. They had an intense intimate eyelock where they had completely forgotten about where they were or what they were doing. They felt a beautiful connection with each other. They moved closer to each other maintaining the eyelock almost about to kiss when suddenly Bihaan's phone rang.

As soon as they realised what they were about to do, they became so embarrassed. They moved away sticking to opposite sides of the trial room looking everywhere but each other. Bihaan picked up his phone and hurriedly stepped out of the trial room when he saw Bihu standing just outside. She said "What are you doing here bhaiya? Are you also trying something? I have been looking for you since so long. Even Ankita di disappeared somewhere. Can't find her. Have you seen her?". Bihaan looked at her all red. Bihu saw his face red and became worried "Are you alright bhaiya? Why are you so red? Is it fever? Omg your temperature seems high. Bhaiya let's go to home. You don't seem well". Bihu tugged his arm to take him when suddenly she saw Ankita coming out of the same trial room. Bihu looked at Bihaan and Ankita and was completely shocked. Ankita awkwardly looked at Bihaan and then looked here and there trying to divert her mind. Bihu was staring at both of them with her mouth open. Before Bihu could say anything, Bihaan said "Let's go. We are quite late already. Mom must be waiting for us. Ankita, we'll drop you to your place. Enough shopping for today Bihu". Bihaan paid for Bihu's clothes at the checkout counter, and all three walked out of the store towards the parking. They sat in the car and suddenly bihaan said "I forgot my wallet inside. I'll run and get it. Both of you wait in the car". Bihaan rushed back to the store, purchased the yellow kurta that Ankita wore and returned to the car. He hid the bag containing the kurta in the boot of the car, sat in the car and they left the mall.

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