FANFICTION: MANISH GOPLANI AS KSHITEJ AND BIHAAN

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Posted: 6 years ago
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MANISH GOPLANI AS KSHITEJ


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ANKITA SHARMA AS ANKITA


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MANISH GOPLANI AS BIHAAN

PART-1 BY ARTI

This is a story of 2 twin brothers Kshitij and Bihaan separated when they were 6 years old. They were left in an orphanage when they were infants. In orphanage, they were inseparable. They used to play together, eat together, be with each other all the time. Bihaan was a timid shy kid and Kshitij was very outspoken and naughty. If any kid ever troubled Bihaan, Kshitij used to beat that kid and always protected Bihaan.

Bihaan was adopted by a nice loving middle-class family when he turned 6. Kshitij was extremely broken after this. He stopped smiling, stopped talking to anyone in the orphanage. Often his grief used to come out in form of aggression. It became increasingly difficult to control Kshitij's anger. At the age of 14, he angrily pushed a kid from the terrace of the orphanage building, which resulted in the death of that kid. He was sent to the juvenile prison after that. Juvenile prison had an extremely bad effect on Kshitij. It turned him into a ruthless, extremely selfish and evil man. When he was released from the prison he started pickpocketing to fill his stomach and slept on the streets. When he was 18, he met a magician and requested him to make him his assistant. With that magician, he started learning magic and started doing his own small shows. Then he learnt hypnosis and soon became a very famous magician. He adopted Azad Parinda as his stage name. By the age of 25, he became very famous as Azad Parinda - the magician for whom nothing is impossible. He became a millionaire and had everything. But his rough past had made him a very unhappy, cunning man. No amount of fame, money made him happy.

On the other hand, Bihaan was also broken when he was adopted. At the age of 7, he got a little sister Bihu and his loneliness went away. He spent all his time playing with her. He went to a nice school, studied very hard, became a doctor. He grew up to be a loving, caring, selfless and happy man. His family was proud of him. Over the years he had totally forgotten about Kshitij.

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PART 2 BY SARA

Though Kshitej had everything like money, name, fame etc but he lacked a nice loving family. He used to sit in the park watching kids playing with their mom and dad he used to feel bad for himself and soon he started hating the word FAMILY..

He also started hating Bihaan because he felt that Bihaan never tried to reach him and left him alone in the orphanage He dint even care whether he was dead or alive he was so disheartened that a brother for whom he fought from the whole world have became so selfish that he dint even try to contact his own brother after getting a family..

On the other hand though Bihaan had a good school and loving family he dint get the love and affection from his father because soon after his adoption he got his own daughter his own blood so started treating bihaan like an unwanted member of his family

Bihaan used to study hard day and night and since he was a brilliant student he manged to get a scholarship from a medical school and became a doctor.. during his struggle his father never supported him and in between this he tried several times to search for his brother Kshitej but all his efforts gone in vain because Kshitej was now Azad parinda who used to hide his real identity by using a mask!

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PART 3 BY ARTI

It was a busy monday morning. Bihaan was in the hospital wearing a mint-colored shirt, black pants and his white doctor coat. Suddenly he was called in the emergency ward. A little boy was lying on a stretcher with a huge wound on his head. He was unconscious and bleeding badly. Bihaan was checking for his vitals and cleaning the wound, when suddenly the door of the ward burst open and a young girl in her early 20s came rushing in towards the bleeding boy. She pushed Bihaan away and hugged the little boy crying and trying to make his conscious. Bihaan asked her who she was, but she didn't say anything because she was sobbing badly. Bihaan asked the nurses to hold the girl and take her out of the ward. She struggled to get out of the grip of the nurses but eventually she was taken out of the ward. Bihaan treated the wound of the boy and bandaged his head. As soon as he stepped out of the door, the girl rushed to him almost colliding with him asking how her brother is. He held her shoulders and made her sit on a chair asking her to calm down and told her that her brother is totally fine and recovering. He asked her to fill a small form on the reception of the hospital and she can take her brother home after 3 hours. Then he left for his cabin.

During lunch time, he was sitting in the cafeteria when the same girl walked towards him with her brother (who was now conscious) and started saying thank you continuously to Bihaan. Bihaan smiled and asked her to calm down. He offered her his lunch which she first refused, but later ate all of it because she was really hungry. She was continuously talking while eating and Bihaan was watching her amusedly. She talked about everything, from her favourite movie to how her maid annoys her so much at home. After she had finished she realised that they wasn't any food left for Bihaan and again started apologising. She said that since bhindi is her favourite and she hadn't eaten anything since morning, she didn't realise that she had actually eaten all of his lunch. Bihaan laughed and said bhindi isn't really his favourite so he didn't mind her eating her lunch. She smiled, said bye to him and started walking towards the door. Bihaan was continuously smiling like an idiot watching her walk away. As soon as she stepped out of the door and was out of sight, Bihaan realised that he hadn't even asked her her name. He ran towards the door. She was already across the street. Bihaan shouted on the top of lungs "BHINDI". She looked towards him shocked from across the street. Bihaan again shouted "What's your name". People on the road were staring at him as if he was some mad guy. The girl laughed a little and shouted "Ankita" loudly before she sat in the autorikshaw and went away.

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PART 4 BY SARA

While walking on the road towards her house ankita was in her own world of thoughts! She was continuously blushing thinking about Bihaan like how cutely he shouted BHINDI just to grab her attention for the purpose of asking her name.. She was so lost that she didn't even realise they have already reached the house and ended up banging her head on the wall.. This made her came out of her imaginations and she saw her brother who was standing beside her giggling and making fun of her! She scolded him and asked him to go inside and take rest as soon as she sent him inside she realised she was getting late for her job she immediately rushed towards the taxi stand coz she wanted to reach office as soon as possible...

While running madly in between the busy road she ultimately got hit by a white posh car and fell on the road... luckily she wasn't injured and was left with some minor bruises only... Ankita even before stabilizing herself she started screaming and abusing the driver! While she was still lying on the road she shouted!!! OH HELLO MR. ARE U MAD OR WHAT? CANT U SEE A GIRL CROSSING THE ROAD? JUST BECAUSE YOU HAVE AN EXPENSIVE CAR DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE FULL FREEDOM TO HIT ANYBODY ON ROAD!! THIS IS NOT YOUR DAD'S PROPERTY" She ended.. this made that driver came out of his posh car Ankita started starring him from bottom to top!! She saw a Chic coming out with classy boots and a shinning blue blazer! She was astonished to see his face as he was non other than Kshitej!! Who was an exact replica of Bihaan...Ankita felt extremely bad and embarrassed for her words and before she could apologise to Kshitej whom she was considering Bihaan, she was grabbed by Kshitej with full force... Kshitej hold her arms tightly by pressing his fingers against his soft skin which was hurting her and making her feel really uncomfortable! Kshitej even after realising that his touch is making her extremely uncomfortable kept doing that and in his bold husky voice and eyes full of angst and animosity he said " WHO THE HELL U THINK U R? DON'T U HAVE BRAINS THAT U WERE RUNNING MADLY IN BETWEEN A BUSY ROAD AND INSPITE OF BEING SORRY FOR UR ACT U R BLAMING ME? AND LET ME TELL U ONE THING DON'T EVEN DARE TO TALK TO ME LIKE THIS EVER U DON'T HAVE ANY IDEA HOW DANGEROUS I COULD BE" Ankita was still in shock but she managed to free herself from him by pushing him away and she said "I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS THE SAME DR BIHAAN I MET IN MORNING... AND LET ME CLARIFY YOU ONE THING NEITHER IM MAD NOR IM BLIND I WAS JUST IN A HURRY TO REACH MY WORKPLACE ON TIME BECAUSE MY CREUL BOSS WON'T GIVE ME A SECOND CHANCE BEFORE FIRING ME FROM MY JOB.. AND WITH THIS JOB I EARN BREAD FOR MY FAMILY.. BUT OBVIOUSLY PEOPLE LIKE YOU WHO HAVE EVERY LUXURY IN LIFE CAN NEVER UNDERSTAND THAT" She left having tears in her eyes... Kshitej felt bad seeing her in tears but before he could apologise her his ego and self obsesisity stopped him from doing that n he left the place!

While driving Ankita's words striked in his mind " I cant belive its the same bihaan I met" he immediately stopped his car and....

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PART 5 BY SARA

Ankita's words stroke Kshitej's mind " I cant believe this is the same Dr. Bihaan I met" and he immediately stopped the car! He mumbled the name Bihaan with eyes full of tears but soon those painful and bitter flashbacks started appearing in his mind like how his brother left him alone to die when he needed him the most. He then wiped off his tears, clenched his fist in anger and decided to meet Bihaan and ask him all those unanswered questions which were running in his mind since childhood!

He then smirked and said " I WILL RUIN HIS LIFE HIS CAREER HIS LOVE AND EVERYTHING HE HAS GOT.. I WILL MAKE HIM REALIZE THE PAIN, HARDSHIPS AND DISTRESS I HAD TO GO THROUGH MY ENTIRE LIFE" He takes an oath from himself that from this day he will make Dr. Bihaan suffer for the selfishness he had shown towards him when he was little and had no shelter. With all these dreadful thoughts in his mind Kshitej recklessly droves his car and reached the same taxi stand where he left Ankita! He asked those drivers whether they know anything about her workplace but all of them denied to share any single detail of her office as she was their regular passenger.. Kshitej then decided to bribe a driver who was willing to share the address with him.. He finally got the address and reached her office..

Kshitej enetered the cabin where Ankita was sitting by bursting the door with rage which made Ankita frightened. She was shivering from head to toe and started apologizing for what she had said just before.... Kshitej without even hearing a single word grasped her and took her towards his car.. Ankita was struggling hard to get out of his grip but it was not possible for a meek and weak girl like her.. she saw the whole staff giggling and making fun of her.. that time she felt simply hopeless and helpless.. Kshitej then made her sit in his car.. He cupped her face and asked her with his clenched teeth and shivering voice " Where is Bihaan?"

Ankita who was already in a state of shock dint believe what she just heard and said nothing! Kshitej again shouted with much louder voice " I said tell me where his clinic is?" Ankita was so damn confused about the whole situation and was wondering why Bihaan is asking her about his own clinic? but she still managed to take kshitej there..

In the clinic Bihaan was doing his extra hours due to an emergency case.. when kshitej asked Ankita to go inside his cabin and ask him to come outside! Ankita with shaking legs entered the room and after watching Bihaan who was an exact replica of the guy who was standing outside couldn't control herself and got faint! Bihaan immediately stood up with concern and tried to make her conscious.. while he was doing that he noticed a man coming inside his cabin.. he started looking him from bottom to top and was shocked to see his face..

Bihaan took no time in recognizing that he is none other than his brother whom he was trying to find since years.. Ankita after coming back in her conscious state saw Bihaan who was teary eyed and dying to hug him once! Bihaan stood up and murmured BHAI in a shivering voice! He was about to hug Kshitej when he pushed him away and asked him not to call him bhai again.. Bihaan tried to stabilize himself as he wasn't expecting this from a brother who was once ready to sacrifice even his life for him.. Bihaan felt that agony and hatred in Kshitej's eyes for himself which made him completely broken... Bihaan had so much to tell and ask his brother but....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you thank you thank you sooooo much Sarah.I m felling bad for bihaan.now you have to update daily.btw you are talented writer.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks alot :) u guys will love Bihaan and Ankita's sequence in the next part ;) stay tuned!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Next part will be updated on Friday night

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Ok Sarah.I can do anything for kshitij. My new favorite couple ankita+bihaan anihaan kshitij+ankita kshita
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehrishnoor

Ok Sarah.I can do anything for kshitij. My new favorite couple ankita+bihaan anihaan kshitij+ankita kshita


Aww lovely names ♥♥♥♥♥ lets see what we will get AniHaan or KshIta ;)

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