When Akshan Met Kalma OS part 5 (last part ) updated - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome teaser

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Awesome teaser

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Can't wait to read the next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hehehe

Guddu aur kallu ka jaghda...

Interesting....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part:3

Aj was talking to some men and Malhar was checking all the preparations….kalyani was taking selfies with ,Moksh…and guddan was tasting food…while walking guddan step over something and drop juice on one woman

Gudd: sorry sorry …humne jankr nii kiya galti se ho gya hai …

Wmn: haa haa galti se jaan hi le lo meri…pta ni kha kha se ajte hai…

Gud: hum sorry bol rhe na aapko fir aap ese kese bol sakti hai…

Woman calls her husband

Wmn: ek to isne meri puri dress khrab kr di aur upr se mujhpr chillakr meri insult kr rhi hai…

Man: dekhiye madam mai yha ka organizer hu..abhi 2 min m apko bhar kar dunga…

Gud: aap hume bhar karenge…hume..GUDDAN AKSHAT JINDAL ko…

And they start arguing and it grasp all attention…kalyani also came and understand all matter..

Kal: dekhiye sir agr wo bol rhi hai ki galti se hua to galtise hi hua hoga …kyuki apki wife se jyada acchi dress to inki hi h..to inke pass to koii reason ni hai na..

Gudd: ekdum sahi bola aap ne…lekin ye to kisi ki sun hi ni rhe….

Woman: ohh to tum dono ye sath milkar karti ho…mai abi police ko bulati hu..ye log function khrab krne ayi hai..

Kal: bula lijiye…mai kisi se darti nii …mera naam KALYANIRANE hai ACP Malhar Rane ki patni hu mai..

Gud : sii hai yrr…tmhre pati ACP hai…

Kal: haa..aur aapke….

Gud: hamare….indore ke sabse bde chef hai…AKSHAT JINDAL…

Man: aap Mrs. Jindal hai…aur aap Mrs.Rane…

Kal&Gud: haaa..

Man: sorry mam…koii misunderstanding ho gyi hai meri wife se…I am really sorry..

And nudges his wife…

Woman: sorry…

Meanwhile;

Malhar taking steps backwards…and get stumbled ..he is about to fall down when AJ catches him on time ..

Mal: thank you so much…

Aj: no its alright ..aap hamari safety dekh rhe to hum b to kch help aapki kar hi sakte hai..

Mal: shakes his hand with him..ACP Malhar rane..

Aj: chef Akshat Jindal…

And they hear noises…

Aj asked one man what is happening there..?

Man: aree koii ladki hai jo jhagad rhi hai..kisi ki sun bhi nahi rhi haii..

AJ and MAL (simultaneously):

Meri patni hi hogi..and looked at each other with tensed face..

Both run towards the place..

Gud: hum bhi to kabse yhi bol rhe the ki hmse galti se hogya ..chaliye ab jane dijiye..and all get dispersed..

Kalyani goes where she kept pillu in trolly…bur he was not there…she got panicked and start searching for him..

Aj comes to guddan…

Aj: kya hua sab thik hai naa..

Gudd: haa hume kya hoga..wo bas ek choti si misunderstanding ho gyi thi..and narrates whole incident..and praises Kalyani…

Malhar also listened all this..

Both AJ and Malhar exchanged look that they were right about their wives….

Malhar patted Aj’s shoulder…as saying we are on the same boat…and leaves from there..

Malhar spotted kalyani;

Mal: kalyani tum…

Kalyani was weeping and searching here and there…

Kal: Malhar ji..pillu…pillu pta nhi kha chla gya…uski trolley yhi thi…aur fr khi chali gyi…pta nii kha…

Mal: kalyani ye kya kh rhi ho tum…ese kha ja sakta hai…yha security bhut tight hai khi nii jyegaa..yhi khi hoga chlo dekhte hai…

Kal: pta nii kha chla gya hai pillu ..mai bas isi wajha se yha nii a rhi thi..muje mera pillu chahiye..

Malhar take her in his arms and consoles her..

Mal: kalyani hum milkar dhundege chlo…and he alerts all other constables about the same..

@Akshan

Guddan start moving but can’t she turned back and saw her dupatta stuck in child trolley..

Gudd: tabhi hum soche hume esa kyu lag rha ki koii hume kheech rha hai..ye trolley to hmare sath sath yha tak aagyi…

She looks into it and moksh was laughing sitting there ..

She takes him in her arms..

Gud: aur aap kon hai mahashey…jo hmare peeche peeche yha tak aa gye hai…apke mmy papa kitna pareshan ho rhe honge…

Moksh makes crying face on her words…

Gudd: ohh rona nii aap…hum Guddan hai aur GUddan ke hote hue aap apne maa papa se alg nii ho sakte..lekin phle hum aapko ek khadoos uncle se milwate hai..

Gud went near aj:

Gud:dekhiye hume ye kon mila…pta hai inki trolley hamre dupatte mai atak gyi thi..aur ye hmare sath yha tk aa gye..

Aj: tumhe pta hai ye kiska baccha hai..iske gharwale kitna pareshan ho rhe honge..aur tumhe kese pta nhi chla itni bhari trolley ka…(sighed)Mumbai mai ate hi problem..

Aj looked at Guddan with moksh

while other side

kalyani is weeping while hugging Malhar…

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Awesome update

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Superb update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

So Kalyani ends up helping Guddan, and i thought from teaser this two will get into a fight 😂😂 Malhar aur Akshat ka bromance acha tha 😜(hahaha just kidding) So Pillu is lost but actually with Akshan 😂😂, aww I so wanted to see Baby Pillu with Akshan ❤️ thank u for fulfiling this wish of mine haha

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Amazing it was funny mjhe laga hi tha either kalyani or guddu end up helping each other Akshat and malhar bonded well

pillu Guddu ke peeche peeche chala aya lekin guddu ko pta v nhi chala waiting for ur next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Beautiful update 😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Aww... Guddan is so sweet with the kid ❤️ I want AkshAn babies 😢

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