Sumi dear🤗
Wow beautiful OneShot its lovely to read it.
so true, calling by name shows a sense of emotion and closeness , hearing chakor from him would had been the wonderful moment
Then the boys talk on that, cuties telling Maiiidhhamm all cute and Raghav babu calling his birdie SB....😍😁
I can imagine that death glare and elbow kick..lol
these lines Wow...and the scene followed in their room ❤❤
Right from start, those cuddling to salty tears to the final touch, lovely scene, I can visualise, if only we got to see this onscreen, MeeJay would have aced and we would have gone crazy😁.
With indirect phases , you have beautifully described that his love has overwritten her past.
yes ,its emotional to know Sun's thoughts are archived and rays has overwritten. it feels so emotional but chakor deserves this love. both deserves a happy life.
yes thats true. she has to give mind, heart and soul to him..thats how love should be and true fact too
so you have written it so correct, true and beautifully with indirect phrases
the one shot was beautiful as always with your beautiful words and writing.
Nikki made you work on your leave☺ but we should thank her for making us read this😎🤓😁
And comments for additional part coming in..
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