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Geet look at him angrily

G- you don't love me anymore.

Maan look at his wife disappointed. It become daily story now. They are falling apart failing to save their relationship. It's 5 years to their marriage. They were happily married but since past few years since when they come to know they can't be parents geet insecurity start increasing day by day. They are trying treatment is going on still everything is falling apart.

M- you know na its not like that.

Geet wiped her tears Shrruging his hands away.

G- no I I can't become mother that's why?

I know I I a

G- I want divorce.

I don't want to be obstacle in your life anymore.

Her voice start chocking causing him to get angry on her

M- DO HELL

I DON'T CARE THINK WHATEVER YOU WANT.

I'M GOING AWAY.

..

He hit his car damn since morning his day is bad first fight with geet & now this stupid car.

Damn !

He hold his head he needs to be in meeting urgently.

After few moments he found a bus coming toward him. He immediately stopped bus getting inside the bus.

..

Nxt day



Geet sat there stunned

BUSINESS TYCOON MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS DEAD.

Savitri, Rano everyone trying to calm her down but no use. He was missing since past 24 hours. He didn't reach his office.

Geet remember that 2 hours later she get call about absence of maan. He must have reach an hour before but his phone is even switched off.

Inspector informed them about a bus accident but geet denied as maan was in his own car. Which they found on the way.

S- calm down beta

You need to be strong.

He h wo n't leave us like this

Mohinder looked angry toward tv

Mo- how dare they do this .

How could they say he is dead?

R- no one is alive who was in bus. Few bodies were burnt few mi ssing.

Rano look at her daughter

R- he is no more beta

Geet look at her mother and shrug her hand angrily

G- HE IS ALIVE HE CAN'T GO LIKE THIS.

HE H H E P PRO MIS SS ED M ME

She said

G- d da di

H h e is an ngry w with me. So he doing a prank.

Causing all of them to look toward her with sympathy

G- m ma

V vo I told him I I want d d divv vorce b because I don't w wa nt to be o obstacle I in his happiness

But I I promise ma

I won't repeat such things again I I just want him back

I don't want child

Rano & savitri looked at her with teary eyes .

R- you need to try to understand he won't be back.

Geet part away from her angrily

G- he have to.

Saying so she rush outside

They tried to stop her but no use she already left.

...



Geet rush inside gurudwara crying for her husband as she don't get qny hope & on top of ut media who declared him dead.

Folding her hands in front of her babaji she prayed for his safety

G- I promise I I won't ask for child.

I can live without a child but I can't imagine my life without him.

I i'm s sorry.

I I didn't valued something with which you blessed me with.

I I promise babaji

I if you want take m my life but send him back.

...

4 hours passed since she keep in front of her babaji looking toward them constantly with a hope that he will bring her maan back.

He can't be so cruel to her even if she deserves it.but with each passing moment she was breaking down.

M- geet

Maan places his hand on her shoulder

Geet look at him with teary eyes

G- where were you?

How much you scared me do you even realize?

He looks at her with sad eyes

M- you told me n I need to go?

You want to be live separately. I I am going now.

She held him tightly

G- no you can't I

I am sorry

She made desperate attempt to hold him but he was vanishing turning into smoke.

She look at him with wide eyes

G- d don't go

Please I i'll die.

Maan please

M- Take care of yourself.

Saying so he placed a kiss on her forehead before vanishing suddenly

G- MAAN

Geet open her eyes breathing hard

G- maan

M- calm down geet i'm here.

Shh

Geet trace his face with her hand looking at him with teary eyes placing a number of kisees on his face.

G- y y o oyr a alli ve.

I I w as sc ccared

M- i'm fine.

Sorry for scaring you..

That's when her eyes feel on his forehead that was bandage & numerous wounds but he is alive that was the thing matters to her most.

G- I I am sorry I won't repeat my stupid mistakes. I I just want you in my life . I can live without a child but can't live without you.

I I am s sorry.

M- I I want you to meet with someone.

Geet look at him confused.

Then she look here & there she is in her room. How could she come here?

M- drive bring you back you get unconscious in gurudwara.

M- geet I want you to meet someone who saved my life.

G- haan maan

We should thank him

Maan guided her toward another room where a nurse & doctor present examining a baby.

G- baby?

M- he saved me

G- where is his parents .

M- he have none except me

...

He open his eyes with a lot of difficulty.

His head was aching badly but a constant cry of baby made him open his eyes

Last thing he rember he was in bus. Everyone was so happy . He was busy in his call when his eyes fell on a couple with a baby hardly 3 month old.

His parents were so happy to have him in their life. The child was crying constantly as he was hungry and his parents trying to console the child.

Looking at them he felt a void in his heart. He too wants to have a baby but he is not lucky enough. But things that hurt him most is that how could she imagine he can live without her?

Everything was going smooth untill a truck come and his bus driver lost balance . There were 30 passenger in bus including the small family. They are turned panicked as in moment they bus lost his control and head toward a chasm.

Fear engulfed all of them. Maan too was so scared everything come back to him as every moment of his life roam in front of his eyes .

He turned scared. His eyes feel on the couple besides him but he was lucky. His side window was open. He told everyone to jump but no one dared. He turned to jump. Maan said to couple it may save their life but his mother handover her child to him. You please keep him safe. We will come after you.

Maan nodded his head and hold baby in a way that he doesn't get injured. When his father stopped maan

F- if something happen to us please take care of our baby.

Maan nodded his head promising them he jumped with child after that he didn't remember anything as his head hit with something hard and he opened his eyes as the baby was crying continuously looking for his mother.

Maan get up with and pick child up when he found they rolled to other side. He walked for few minutes when he saw the spot. But he got to know that even before they jump bus fell in chasm.

Maan held baby tightly and officers guide him to km where he was greeted by everyone & come to know about geet.

...

Geet look at maan with teary eyes.

G- maan he is our baby.

M- he is.

Saying so they placed a kiss on his forehead.

..

We never knew what next moment hold for us so try to be happy with whatever god blessed you.

THE END.

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hi thanks for sharing!

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amazing n emotional story

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This OS was so Realistic Awesome

In life when never truly knows what would happen next

and how one's destiny is already written

Geet could not have a baby and she became insecure

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lovely story..

maaneet blessed with baby but the circumstance so sad and difficult..

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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

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