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Posted: 5 years ago

Woow...sasha ka band bajaa daali geetne...loved it

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sanam1234u

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Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

awesome...part

bechara maan didnt get single chance to talk with geet...

the way geet takes sasha's class awesome?????😃

now waiting for maan to see what will he do?😉

thanks for update...😊

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dhrastimaan

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Posted: 5 years ago

Will be waiting for your next updated

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Soni

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Posted: 5 years ago

I have not been active since long, but feel good to come back and see everyone work...
I just loved the 3 parts you post, the best of was Geet real avatar the way she give back to Sasha loved it I think Maan was quite surprised too see her but I hope Maan will find his way to manaofying Geet poor soul
I just can't wait for the next part hope you update soon don't make us wait for soo long

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: soni-zee
I have not been active since long, but feel good to come back and see everyone work...
I just loved the 3 parts you post, the best of was Geet real avatar the way she give back to Sasha loved it I think Maan was quite surprised too see her but I hope Maan will find his way to manaofying Geet poor soul
I just can't wait for the next part hope you update soon don't make us wait for soo long

Thank you dearie🤗

So glad that you are back to IF after a break and I wish many many of the old readers get back here to read and give their lovely comments and inputs...😊

I will be updating in a day or two... sorry for the wait...

Meantime, I am posting a teaser below...hope you like it.

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 5 years ago

TEASER - PART 20

(I guess this is my first ever teaser that I have shared on ORP...Hope you like it. Will be updating PART 20 within a day or two.)

GIRL: So, "KHURANAS" are related to you?

The boy she is talking to nods for a yes with all excitement and hugs her sideways

GIRL: Then how come you and your family were not informed about Geet-Maan's wedding?

His smile fades away...Now the girl gives a disgusting look to Maan and Maan's head bent down in shame...an eye opener to the ugliest truth that he has kept his marriage a secret and none of his close and distinct relatives or closest of the connections know about his marriage and Geet is his wife.

Even though this fact hurts Geet too.. but she still speaks up ...

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Note:

Will reveal the identity of the boy and girl in my next post. Till then keep guessing . Its not that difficult. 😉
This is an outline of flow of words among these characters...the words, sentences may change and few other dialogues may be added in between...

Edited by Vaidhumom - 5 years ago

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Preethi

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice teaser dear waiting for your update continue soon

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

IF-Addictz

+ 7

Posted: 5 years ago

beguiling teaser!!! feeling for Geet!!!

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 5 years ago

Nice teaser

Update soon

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neena.v

@NeenaDd

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Nice teaser

Waiting for the update

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