The Guy Next Door:BeHir FF

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Hiii all,I'm Ima,I wrote a story in wattpad and thought to post it here too.Hope you all will like it.

The Guy Next Door
I was waiting for the elevator. I was late and this elevator was testing my patience. It has been in the basement for the past four minutes. Who the hell is taking these much time? .I hear the door of my apartment opening.I Suhani peeped out.Surprised,she asked,"Weren't you gone?" "This thing is not coming. " "Take the stairs or you are going to be late for your exam." The door closed. Suhani was right.Why didn't I think of it before? I turned to the direction of the stairs when the door of the elevator opened and I bumped onto someone. "Hey,Don't you have eyes?" I asked turning to find the person I bumped onto. He was really handsome. I really felt the need to stand and stare at his face,but,to my dismay,he broke my thoughts by his voice "I'm sorry", "It's alright." I said eyeing the luggage he bought with him. So,this was the reason I was standing still for the past few minutes. Maybe,he caught me eyeing his stuff because he told "Hi , My name is Mahir,I'm shifting to 902." "I'm Bela." I replied. He started taking his luggages out and I too helped him. We finished the work and he said "Thanks."I smiled at him entering the elevator. He smiled back at me.I'm sure he smiled or did he? Yeah,he should have smiled.I'm good looking.I know that.Oh No!My exam!!! I forgot all about it. I ran as soon as I reached the basement.
MAHIR

I unlocked the door of my new apartment and got in taking all my luggage inside. I bought this apartment to start a company on my own which would be soon nearby. Tired after a long journey,I lied on the sofa. Again ,that girl occupied my thoughts. Who is she? Would she be my new neighbour? What if she came here to visit someone? Maybe she wouldn't come back. My thoughts were broken when my phone rang. It was mom. "Hello mom" I said taking the call."Mahir beta,did you reach safely?""Come on,mom. I am not a kid anymore,I am a grown up ,I came here to start my own company.so,please I request you,stop asking these kinds of kiddish questions." I had a doubt whether I was a little harsh.She was my mom and I loved her a lot. "Son,It's because I'm a mom,you won't understand it now,when you become a dad,these things would be crystal clear" "okay mom,I understand," well maybe a little ,anyway, I can wait till I become a dad, " And by the way I liked this apartment" I was genuine at this. "Sumithra Sehgal's selection never goes wrong,beta." This was right.Mom would always select the best for me.But in Bela's case,I doubt it.She is the one for me.I saw that in her eyes "Mom,anything more?" "Nothing beta,take care." "Bye mom." I cut the call.
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Hope it wasn't boring at all,If it was,please don't discontinue,something really nice is coming,just wait till three to four chaptersšŸ˜‰
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TenderCoconut thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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God,I wanna post the next chapter,but it feels awkward to post the second chapter without a comment,somebody comment!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You have no patience na..
Post kardo all parts
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

You have no patience na..

Post kardo all parts

ThanksšŸ˜›šŸ˜›,next part comingšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 6 years ago
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PRIORITY
BELA

I was exhausted. I couldn't perform well. The exam was easy and I had studied really hard. I knew I was going to perform well till today morning.But then,I met HIM. I tried to erase his face a lot after we met.But,no matter how much I tried,I failed. Not only that,HIS face was finding more space in my heart.I decided something .I was going to meet HIM today. Anyway,he was my new neighbour. I hurried to the parking lot only to find Vishakha and Vikrant standing there. They are engaged and are my best friends. "Hey Vish" ,I called out walking towards them. "Bela,were you here",Vish seemed a bit worried, "Tell me you didn't hear our private talks" "No,I didn't"I laughed. "Vish and I were discussing about our post-wedding plans "It was Vikrant. "Oh,and not about honeymoon,right Vish?" She blushed. "Um so Bela,our wedding date is fixed,it would take place soon after our exams."Vikrant informed."Ok,I would be there" I assured them and was about to go when Vish asked "Bela,how was your exam,,you are the only one who does not have any distraction,isn't it right Vikrant?" "Yeah,Bela is the only one who doesn't have ONE."I'm sure he really stressed on one.But how could I tell them that I too got ONE which was 'HIM'.The HIM I bumped onto. "It was pretty easy " I lied to them. I said bye and took my car and drove off. Yes,I was in a hurry. Hurry to meet HIM. Just after hours we met,HE became my priority.


MAHIR

I finished my works. A lot of of phone calls,video conferences and many other things the day I reached itself. I am a businessman. I had to do these. And starting a company is really a tedious work. I was tired would be an understatement. I really need to get some sleep. But I had something important. I need to meet HER. Or atleast ,I'm going to meet my newly found neighbours and enquire about HER. If she suits me,I'm going to ask my parents to arrange for our wedding.What did I just think?'If she suits me?'She suits me.I know that.Yeah,and our wedding would happen in a month. Mahir Sehgal is really fast,man.Hey,wait,what if she is married?NO,never. What if she doesn't agree for our marriage? Why,There is no reason for her to do that . I'm rich,handsome and whatever a girl would love to have. But moreover,I love her. I started to love her the moment I met her. And whoever she is,I will continue to love her. I'm going to ask her hand,Whether she accepts it or not,it's none of my concern. I love her. That's it. Making myself the decision clear,I proceeded to the washroom. I freshed up and put on my favourite jacket.Making sure I'm in the handsome way possible,I went.I locked the door and neared the opposite apartment and stood in front of the door . I rang the bell waiting someone to open.

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Edited by TenderCoconut - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That's it,and I need good response from you all
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was a nice update.
Both are thinking about each otheršŸ˜‰
Mahirji already planning of marriagešŸ˜†bade fast hai Mahirji
Waiting for their next meeting😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya258

It was a nice update.

Both are thinking about each otheršŸ˜‰
Mahirji already planning of marriagešŸ˜†bade fast hai Mahirji
Waiting for their next meeting😊

Thanks Priya chechišŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ¤—U made me so happy,is the next part needed today itself,😲😲No,right,I will post it tmw,or people will think that I have no patiencešŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImaJain

That's it,and I need good response from you all

Good Response šŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Good Response šŸ˜†

Don't worry,all will give good response,wait and watch
Guyss,pleaseeešŸ˜†šŸ˜†

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