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Posted: 6 years ago
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An interview with a serial killer


She sat in the waiting room watching the rain violently pelt against the glazed pane, Geet Handa'the security called and she immediately stood up walking to the help desk. The large corridor creaked as winds howled loudly travelling through the gaps in the floorboards. Badge' the attendant asked reaching a hand forward and she removed the lanyard and left it on the counter desk; the following moments were awkwardly silent. Follow the yellow arrows' after the instruction, Geet hugged her bag and walked further into the old building.

Place your bag in the box here and walk through the detector' with a strict smile she followed through as a guard checked her belongings while another gaped at her, So you're the chick interviewer?' He asked looking her up and down, for a minute she felt repulsion. Hmm' she replied feeling his unfit stare freeze just below her face, somewhere around her chest.
Can I go?' She asked when the other guard stopped and stared too, when two pairs observed and sniggered, it made it all the more difficult.
Yes I suppose you can' the guard who examined her bag answered
Next time maybe you could question me baby' the other leaped forward suddenly stopping a little away, probably a step apart. I promise to answer just the way you like' he looked down at her chest before raising his eyes suggestively
I don't think that's possible, neither are you a hero nor wanted' she fought back the anger and smiled sarcastically as the other guard burst into giggle

The room she stepped into was rather small, consisting of a table and two chairs; sitting there was the man in the news. The serial mastermind, grown in the rural parts of the country he could barely navigate yet he's the most wanted in the province: Maan Singh Khuranna. You should have worn something more appropriate!' was the first thing he said even before she could take a seat. Geet briefly looked at herself, being a journalist meant she dressed simply yet professionally. On her was a black knee length pencil skirt, a peach shirt, small heels, a bracelet and a pendent hanging loosely. Close to zero cleavage showing, of course she knew how dangerous it could be to enter a high profile prison. Hmm' she agreed recalling the few minutes with the leachy guards outside, both asked several questions: all condescending and abrupt but she was in no position to counter attack.

Take a seat' he offered when she continued to stare at his dark silhouette, Hmm' she responded again sitting opposite him with a notebook and a pencil. Her bag was still outside on the inspection counter. You look very different' was the first thing she commented seeing his face for the very first time; dark orbs, crisp nose and a curved lip. He didn't look like the criminal described as the serial offender. Rather the man opposite wore a cloak of gentleness and care. Don't believe everything the paper says!' he smirked looking straightly at her and she couldn't help but ask How was it possible? How could such a small man from such humble background be this notorious killer. You've annoyed the government to no end, your case is everywhere? What made you do what you've done?' she continued asking without a stop, in the end she frowned looking at him distress

Am I supposed to answer them all?' he asked with a gentle giggle, his handsome face shone bright reflecting the burnt orange bulb that lit over their heads. He briefly smiled shrugging his shoulders as she stared in a daze. It wasn't meant to be like this' he answered after several beats. Then how was it supposed to be' Geet asked finally uncapping her pen and getting ready to write however he stayed mute, just looking; looking deeply, soundlessly. Minutes following were awkward, he kept staring as she gathered her thoughts together.
I'm the reporter from the news, Geet Handa' she finally introduced as if remembering suddenly.
I know, [chuckle] I've seen myself in the news' he carried the same ease, his smooth voice sounding shallow and benign. Hmm' she responded once again, the small episodes of stillness was overbearing.

How do you feel being the most hated man in the country?' she asked mercilessly breaking the brief peace. The rain outside continued to violently hit himself against the walls. Nor am I disposable or dispersible like water, so I refuse to attack myself' he answered looking out the window as loud cracks echoed. Can I ask you a question?' he asked several minutes after, while she was still deconstructing his answer. How do you feel being the most beautiful woman on TV?' he asked looking back with a soft smile and all logical thinking derailed from within her.


[laughs] you can't feel a thing for something which you are unaware of' he replied to her confused look. That was when she noticed he was far too fast witted. I did what was right at that time' Maan ended and she took note, both of his answer and body expression which highlighted no regrets, not even a sign of remorse. You've killed so many people?' she asked in a devastating tone, as if trying to remind him of his heinous crimes. People only know half the story, most of which the government and the media baked. So really what the public hate is the picture you guys painted?' he answered shrugging his shoulder and she froze for a minute.
Have you been wrongly framed?' It wasn't a question that was even on the agenda, however it was one she couldn't help ask. He didn't look or sound like a criminal, even his background and credentials didn't match that of a high profile murderer. No' the monosyllable carried much weight, creating another few seconds of silence. While she tried to comprehend his actions and words, he asked something of this own Have you ever witnessed helplessness?', seeing as she froze he continued to ask, Do you have a family?' She nodded softly for a No' and continued watching as he sighed in bad taste. But did I?', she knew of his family history so didn't stop to ask instead looked eager to know more and he didn't disappoint, I had 2 brothers, both younger; Dev was wheel chair bound and Vicky in secondary school, a beautiful grandma and a lovely sister' she gaped awkwardly, there was no news of a sister. Like I said, be careful of what you read. The colleagues you work with will sell their soul for less than a dime' this time his voice lost that ease, instead it was filled with pain and torment. She was brutally killed, slaughtered from dignity and pride' a tear let loose and planked against a hard table. As a brother I made sure everyone paid, be it the brutes that murdered her, the influenced fathers that protected their sons, the filthy cops that were bribed or the journalist that fed lies' there was an hidden anger, a unwanted loom.

So your family?' she asked when the heaviness in her heart reduced slightly, the weight of the clot was dense and immoveable. They were killed right in front of me, one after another' he answered looking away from her inquisitive eyes. After I lost them, I no longer had anything to live for'he added touching the handcuffs that chained him to the table.

Geet' he called kindly as he remembered a time they knew one another as passing civilians, she was a media student and he an aspiring businessman. It was a time when they were strangers in love, attending the same university and riding the same bus. Forget my story and move one' he urged moving forward to place one of his beaten hands over hers and she jumped as if electrocuted. I'm just trying...' she wanted to say find the truth', because what the world said about him she didn't believe and so even though it took her 5months to track his location, to know of his story, she still decided to fight his case because somewhere deep down she still loved that stranger, that man who beat off two rogues in a dark alley for her. Her very first and last hero. Stop trying, I don't want anything to happen to the last person I care about' he instructed in a whisper looking outside as if to check whether the guards watched over. Please Geet' he asked in earnestness and she nodded looking down, trying her might to hide the tears that forfeited in defence.

The next day her article titled An interview with a serial killer' held much of the conversation, caused commotion and forced the government to reopen Maan Singh Khuranna's' case once again, the pending death penalty was waived off until further investigation was carried out; all of which Geet Handa hoped for and she got. Public seemed to have shifted their hatred from Maan to the actual evils, the murderers.

I'll do anything for the only person I care for' she repeated to no one in particular standing in the middle of her cold, dark room. She was his only hope, and he was the only person she called her own.


THE END

Edited by sahibasharma - 6 years ago
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Life is not a bed of roses for everyone or for much longer.

A storm struck in their paradise too. The day that was supposed to be the happiest day in Maaneet's life turned their life upside down. It was truly heart wrenching to witness Geet after she got to know Dev is Maan's brother.

Desolated, She tried to distance herself from Maan.
Heart broken...And lonely!

But their love was too strong to accept any defeat.

Even though there were so many hurdles for them yet they overcame everything with their pureness of love.

True to his words, Maan stood by Geet..
Not even flinching once he stood against his own family member. Didn't care if Dev was his brother. But the only thing he always stood by is the fondness of truth & honesty.


Meanwhile, Naintara didn't leave a chance to bring trouble in Geet's life. She went to the extent of trying to kill Geet. But Maan saved her at the nick of the time.

When NT raised questions on Geet about her honor, dignity & name, Justifying the depth of his immensely beautiful name, Maan filled Geet's maang with his blood and he proved that he was Geet's honor..her Maan.




With his unfaltering voice, Maan berated Naintara that Geet doesn't need a name as his name is always there honoring her! Defeated badly, Naintara burned in her same old jealousy and hatred!






Edited by Madhu_31 - 6 years ago
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Life

Geet look at him angrily
G- you don't love me anymore.
Maan look at his wife disappointed. It become daily story now. They are falling apart failing to save their relationship. It's 5 years to their marriage. They were happily married but since past few years since when they come to know they can't be parents geet insecurity start increasing day by day. They are trying treatment is going on still everything is falling apart.
M- you know na its not like that.
Geet wiped her tears Shrruging his hands away.
G- no I I can't become mother that's why?
I know I I a
G- I want divorce.
I don't want to be obstacle in your life anymore.
Her voice start chocking causing him to get angry on her
M- DO HELL
I DON'T CARE THINK WHATEVER YOU WANT.
I'M GOING AWAY.

..

He hit his car damn since morning his day is bad first fight with geet & now this stupid car.
Damn !
He hold his head he needs to be in meeting urgently.
After few moments he found a bus coming toward him. He immediately stopped bus getting inside the bus.

..
Nxt day


Geet sat there stunned
BUSINESS TYCOON MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS DEAD.
Savitri, Rano everyone trying to calm her down but no use. He was missing since past 24 hours. He didn't reach his office.
Geet remember that 2 hours later she get call about absence of maan. He must have reach an hour before but his phone is even switched off.
Inspector informed them about a bus accident but geet denied as maan was in his own car. Which they found on the way.
S- calm down beta
You need to be strong.
He h wo n't leave us like this

Mohinder looked angry toward tv
Mo- how dare they do this .
How could they say he is dead?
R- no one is alive who was in bus. Few bodies were burnt few mi ssing.
Rano look at her daughter
R- he is no more beta
Geet look at her mother and shrug her hand angrily

G- HE IS ALIVE HE CAN'T GO LIKE THIS.
HE H H E P PRO MIS SS ED M ME
She said
G- d da di
H h e is an ngry w with me. So he doing a prank.

Causing all of them to look toward her with sympathy
G- m ma
V vo I told him I I want d d divv vorce b because I don't w wa nt to be o obstacle I in his happiness
But I I promise ma
I won't repeat such things again I I just want him back
I don't want child
Rano & savitri looked at her with teary eyes .
R- you need to try to understand he won't be back.
Geet part away from her angrily
G- he have to.
Saying so she rush outside
They tried to stop her but no use she already left.
...


Geet rush inside gurudwara crying for her husband as she don't get qny hope & on top of ut media who declared him dead.
Folding her hands in front of her babaji she prayed for his safety

G- I promise I I won't ask for child.
I can live without a child but I can't imagine my life without him.
I i'm s sorry.
I I didn't valued something with which you blessed me with.
I I promise babaji
I if you want take m my life but send him back.
...
4 hours passed since she keep in front of her babaji looking toward them constantly with a hope that he will bring her maan back.
He can't be so cruel to her even if she deserves it.but with each passing moment she was breaking down.
M- geet
Maan places his hand on her shoulder
Geet look at him with teary eyes
G- where were you?
How much you scared me do you even realize?

He looks at her with sad eyes
M- you told me n I need to go?
You want to be live separately. I I am going now.

She held him tightly
G- no you can't I
I am sorry
She made desperate attempt to hold him but he was vanishing turning into smoke.
She look at him with wide eyes
G- d don't go
Please I i'll die.
Maan please
M- Take care of yourself.
Saying so he placed a kiss on her forehead before vanishing suddenly

G- MAAN
Geet open her eyes breathing hard
G- maan
M- calm down geet i'm here.
Shh
Geet trace his face with her hand looking at him with teary eyes placing a number of kisees on his face.
G- y y o oyr a alli ve.
I I w as sc ccared
M- i'm fine.
Sorry for scaring you..
That's when her eyes feel on his forehead that was bandage & numerous wounds but he is alive that was the thing matters to her most.
G- I I am sorry I won't repeat my stupid mistakes. I I just want you in my life . I can live without a child but can't live without you.
I I am s sorry.

M- I I want you to meet with someone.
Geet look at him confused.
Then she look here & there she is in her room. How could she come here?
M- drive bring you back you get unconscious in gurudwara.
M- geet I want you to meet someone who saved my life.
G- haan maan
We should thank him
Maan guided her toward another room where a nurse & doctor present examining a baby.
G- baby?
M- he saved me
G- where is his parents .
M- he have none except me
...

He open his eyes with a lot of difficulty.
His head was aching badly but a constant cry of baby made him open his eyes
Last thing he rember he was in bus. Everyone was so happy . He was busy in his call when his eyes fell on a couple with a baby hardly 3 month old.
His parents were so happy to have him in their life. The child was crying constantly as he was hungry and his parents trying to console the child.
Looking at them he felt a void in his heart. He too wants to have a baby but he is not lucky enough. But things that hurt him most is that how could she imagine he can live without her?

Everything was going smooth untill a truck come and his bus driver lost balance . There were 30 passenger in bus including the small family. They are turned panicked as in moment they bus lost his control and head toward a chasm.
Fear engulfed all of them. Maan too was so scared everything come back to him as every moment of his life roam in front of his eyes .
He turned scared. His eyes feel on the couple besides him but he was lucky. His side window was open. He told everyone to jump but no one dared. He turned to jump. Maan said to couple it may save their life but his mother handover her child to him. You please keep him safe. We will come after you.
Maan nodded his head and hold baby in a way that he doesn't get injured. When his father stopped maan
F- if something happen to us please take care of our baby.
Maan nodded his head promising them he jumped with child after that he didn't remember anything as his head hit with something hard and he opened his eyes as the baby was crying continuously looking for his mother.
Maan get up with and pick child up when he found they rolled to other side. He walked for few minutes when he saw the spot. But he got to know that even before they jump bus fell in chasm.

Maan held baby tightly and officers guide him to km where he was greeted by everyone & come to know about geet.

...

Geet look at maan with teary eyes.
G- maan he is our baby.
M- he is.
Saying so they placed a kiss on his forehead.

..
We never knew what next moment hold for us so try to be happy with whatever god blessed you.

THE END.
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It was a pleasant sunny day.Geet was making her way to the hospital.Today is her last check-up.Soon she is going to have her baby in her arms.The mere mention about her baby brings immense happiness to her.Why not..now her world revolves around her baby.

Like all the girls she too dreamt of her Prince charming and fairy tale life.But does always our dreams come true?No! Her parents disowned her as she went against their wish and got married to the person she loved.She thought one day they will accept her but that day never came.

Her married life was a bliss during the initial months.She was on cloud nine when she got married to the man who stole her heart,Dev Singhania.Though his parents 1st denied to accept their marriage, in due course of time they accepted for the sake of their son's happiness.Life was going on smoothly.She accepted Dev's parents as her own but that was not in the case of them.They hated her and soon started creating problems in her life.She accepted all their taunts and curses..only Dev's love was medicine to all her wounds.But seems she is not fortunate enough.In the desire to expand his business Dev spent most of the time in business tours. Little fights and arguments lead to a drift in their relationship.

In between all this, they got to know that she was pregnant. The in-laws who hated her started to love and take care of her. Life turned happy again but the happiness was short lived. Her world turned upside down when Dev handed her divorce papers and said that he is gonna marry one of his client's daughter.Still she clearly rememberd his words.Our love was a mistake Geet.I should have listened to my parents' words.I took a haste decision Geet.We were not meant to be together.Please free me from this burdened relationship.And she freed him too..what else she could do?.But about one thing she was very happy , Dev would never ever get the custody of her baby.

It was not easy to move on.But she did for the little life that is breathing inside her.She got a job in a school,rented an apartment and living in her own little world.

"Baby,today I am gonna see you again.You know na Mumma loves you a lot and soon you will be in your Mumma's arms.And now we are moving to hospital for mumma's check up.Are you gonna sleep or you are gonna be awake?,asked Geet.She was walking to the hospital that is situated very near to her home.She was creasing her baby bump and taking to her baby while walking.In response to her question the baby kicked.

Geet felt the kick and she smiled,So my Shona is awa..,Before she could complete her sentence she was hit by a bike and her head hit the nearby electrical post very hard and she collapsed.People gathered around her and rushed her to the hospital.

Her condition was turning worse and soon the doctors thought to save the baby first.She was almost due and so they performed C-section and took the baby..it was a cute Girl baby.Then Geet was rushed for further treatment but it was too late.They declared her brain dead. They contacted Dev and asked him to arrive as soon as possible.

On the other side of the hospital some doctors were in great tension. A patient was in immediate need of a heart transplant but till now they couldn't find a donor.When they got to know about Geet's condition,they got a hope to transplant her heart to that patient.But for that they are in need of the her relative's permission.Everyone was waiting for Dev and when he came they explained the matter to him.Without any second thought he signed the papers granting them permission.While the doctor's thought how good he is..Dev was very keen in clearing the name Geet from his life.He didn't even ask about the baby once.When the nurse handed the baby to him..he refused to hold it saying that Geet and him got divorced and he had nothing to do with the baby.All were shocked to hear that..and soon left the place too saying that he can't take responsibility of the baby girl.And the only option left was to put the baby in the orphanage.

The heart transplantation was successfully carried out.And the patient to whom Geet's heart was transplanted was Maan Singh khurana..the King of the Construction world.He had no one in the name of family.For him only his business was his family.Adi,his right hand was with him and took care of all the procedures.When Adi got to know about Geet,he arranged for her last rituals too.His heart went out to the baby girl who lost her mom.He asked the hospital to take care of the little baby until he heard his boss's instruction.

It has been 3 weeks,Maan was all fit and fine.The doctor's gave him discharge and that is when Adi disclosed about Geet and her baby.Maan was deeply hurt by the news he heard and went to see the baby.The tiny little angel was sleeping peacefully her baby crib.All her expenses were taken care by Adi.The moment Maan stepped in,the baby girl opened her eyes as if she sensed something.She started to cry out loud. The nurse who was there with her took the baby to pacify, but the baby was not ready to quiten.It almost continued for 15 mintues..and suddenly Maan moved slowly and took the baby girl from the nurse.Adi asked him not to carry as Maan was advised not to lift anything.But who can stop MSK.Maan held the baby and cooed her and rested her near his heart and the next moment she stopped her cry.It was as if she was sensing her mother.She turned calm and her little eyes were scrutinizing Maan.Maan smiled at the baby and somewhere he felt his heart is more alive today.He gently moved to and fro and soon she slept in his warmth.Maan had no heart to part away from her. He himself was amused by his reaction.

He handed her back to the nurse and again a loud cry broke.Maan couldn't bear her cries and soon he snatched her from the nurse.Adi watched Maan wide eyed.The man who haven't carried a child till date is carrying her as a pro.Maan asked to call the doctor to know the reason for her cries.Doctor was also confused first.He asked Maan to handover the baby to the nurse again and the result was same..she started crying and when Maan took her again she calmed down.

"The baby is recognising her Mom's heart Mr.Khurana.When she is with you she is having a feel that she is with her mom.The little ones mostly hear their Mom's heart beat and voice more than any other thing when they are in the womb.She instantly recognised her mother's heart..the little one doesn't want to part away from you that is why she is crying when you handover her to someone or put her in the crib,said the doctor.

Maan was shocked to know the reason.He stared to like the baby at the first instinct itself.Unknown to him he felt protective for her and he couldn't bear her cries.He aksed about her father and that is when they disclosed about Dev and how the baby is now left as an orphan.His heart pained to hear the happenings and his anger for Dev increased many folds.

With a great determination, he took a decision.He took the baby girl in his arms and kept her close to his heart.Adi,take care of the adoption procedures.From now on,she is Mishti Maan Singh Khurana,my daughter!!And take care of that 🤬 Dev too.While others were shocked,Adi clearly understood his boss's words.

5 years later..

"You are late Papa!!I am not talking to you..Mishti ne aapki kitni wait ki..par aapne nahi aaya..Toh mai aapse baath nahi karoongi..katti katti katti,said an angry Mishti.Maan looked at his daughter with a smile on his face.His daughter looks adorable even when she is angry.Each day he is falling more and more in love with the little soul.She became his world now.The only person who can boss Maan Singh Khurana and make him dance according to her tunes is Mishti Maan Singh Khurana.

"Aww..my baby is angry with me.Sorry baccha..meeting thodi lambhi hogayi!!Sorry baby,said Maan and he tried to coax her.But it was not an easy task.So my Mishti will not talk to Papa..toh teek hai,Papa will give the ice cream to Mr.Teddy,saying this Maan moved towards her doll and as expected Mishti ran towards him and hugged him..Noo!!Mr.Teddy is having fever Papa.Aur Mishti ne aapko maaf bhi kiya...so give the icecreams to me..please Papa,said Mishti lovingly in her cute voice.

"First kiss,then ice creamsaid Maan and Mishti showered him with kisses and ran to get the icecream.Each time when Mishti called him as Papa,his heart swelled in happiness.It was as if he achieved the biggest thing in the world.The feeling of being the father to this little angel is priceless.

He got up and moved towards Geet's photo that was in their room.He creased her face and said,Thank you soo much for giving me our angel Geet.You have given the more precious gift to me.I promise to take good care of her and protect her from all the evils.I haven't seen you Geet.But I started loving you..I started to love the mother of my baby.I love you Geet!Maan loves you,saying this he placed a kiss on her photo.Maan aur Geet ki Mishti too love you Mumma,said Mishti and kissed her picture.She dragged Maan and both shared the icecream.Most of the time Mishti was keen in feeding her Papa and almost his entire face was covered in ice cream.

After eating icecream,both played for sometime and soon Mishti was sleepy.Maan made her sleep on him with her head placed over his heart.Papa loves you baby..,saying so he kissed her head.Mishti lifted her head and said,Mishti love you too...She moved little above and kissed his cheeks and came back to his heart, kissed there and said,I love you Mumma .Maan's heart started to beat little fast and then Maan said,Mumma is saying she too loves her Mishti .In all these years Maan had started understanding the language of his heart which is the voice of Geet.Soon the father and daughter hugged each other and slept.

It was their daily night routine.Mishti would kiss Maan's cheeks and say ILU to him and then kiss him above his heart and say ILU to her Mumma..because there is where her Mumma resides.This was their unique tale. Destiny played its part and now they were Bonded by Pure Love!!


THE END



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Close to my Heart

On the first night of the marriage, Geet was waiting for Maan like a true bride.to say the truth when he came to see her its only his first and last visit. She did not even see him well ... But everyone said, she is lucky ... so big house like some palace ..the are big name in the city ... just one boy ... Handsome ... tall ... like a prawn prince... you are very fortunate ... her friends were teasing her. Geet remembered everything and small smile adores her lips

Just then the door got opened and Maan entered inside locking the door behind. Geet got startle with the sound and came back to senses, As Maan walked near the bed, her pulse increased with his each step forward.

He took the chair and sat before her . Geet was mesmerize, she has seen lots of dreams about her future life with her Husband.


Maan started talking .Look , Geet, my marriage is against my wishes . I love a girl I was going to talked about this at home but Dadima had a heart attack ... when she came home from the hospital They decided to settle everything ... At that time I did not have the courage to tell them against their wishes ... and so I agreed to get married . I would never accept you .She only have her place in my heart . so you do not expect anything from me . you are free to go your way .


After finishing his speech, he spread his mat on the floor and went to sleep. Geet sat for a long time. She did not know what happened. She took out her own jewelries and looked at the ceiling. Why did he Married me ... "You are free", I can go back to my Place, 'My Home ', God had already snatched her parents from her in the childhood itself. Her relatives had brought her up , they got her Married, with what face she could go there, with her marriage they left a sigh of relief. That they got away from this burden.tears roll down from her corner of eyes.

They done all the preparations of marriage just in fifteen days. There was no fault of anyone's in this but her cruel Fate.

From childhood , she didn't got the chance to be pampered or even show her rights on others. Don't know have her destiny store for her in future. Babaji..kya hoga aage. Lost in her thoughts she went to sleep.

In the early morning , Geet woke up with the sound of prayers .


Geet got ready and without glancing at him once she went downstairs towards kitchen and started helping.


Annie , Maan's sister was teasing her

'Did the bride not go to bed at night? Look at the eyes how red they look. Geet did not answer anything. Dadima told her to take a black coffee for Maan. She went into the room with a his cup of coffee and came back after placing a cup on the table. She felt suffocated in that room ... Maan went to office ...


Geet came to the kitchen and started helping. Reva, Maan's sister was teasing her


In the afternoon, Geet was seating inside her room after her work done. While she was thinking something when Maan's Dadima came inside.

Geet beta, What happened ? She called her

And what is this , your cloths , baggage are still here down , keep it in the cupboard dear.

No, Dadima, let it be here itself. In the cupboard there are Maan's things.

What are you saying. It's your house now , Geet. You have the right on his cupboard, on this house, even on the people of the house .

Something was going inside Geet's mind.


Look , your wedding happened only in fifteen days and have to do it in a very simple way ...because of my health issues.there was no guest also..only the people inside house.

So both of you did not got the time to get to know each other . but you have fulfilled all your rituals .. this evening ladies are coming for muhdikhai .so you should take rest now.


Now it was all unbearable to Geet... her patients broke and she started crying in the arms of Dadima


What happened? Did Maan say something to you? He might be angry man but he is soft from heart.


You have got married him against his wish. Geet cried.her heart pinch with the thought.


Yes I know. dadima spoke and Geet was more than shock now.


She worked in his office. Her name is Samiksha. She is not a girl but a woman who is 5 years elder than Maan.she was married , her husband died in an ancient .she is such a witch , with her sweet words gets sympathy from people .Maan is too soft. He helped her lot at starting days. Few times she had even came to Mansion.

Don't what magic she had done ,only God knows, he started to behave as per she says. infact he pains her rent of flat.

From outside , we got to know that he was planning to married her, , I found you fit for him , so hurriedly I got you both married , my heart attack was just drama, so that he could silently married you.


That lady is very clever , so many people like Maan, got trap in her beauty , and behave as per she says.


But Dadima,he really do loves her . Geet responded immediately.


... But dadima he really loves her ... Geet responded immediately ...


Yes I know, but her love is not on him but on his estate.


Look, Geet beta, I am with you , just follow my words.


Now Geet felt the little life coming back to her.she left a sigh of breath hearing Dadima.


the next day Dadima told Maan , that Geet want to join college , she wants to finish her degree ... So when you go to the office, leave Geet to College and bring her back home along with you ... Maan had avoided but he did not have anything to do against his grandma's order..


Geet got ready , and Maan out the Car, Geet was very hesitant.


As soon as Maan entered his cabin , samiksha barge inside .


So you got married? Is she very beautiful ? Then what about the promise you have given me ?


Look, Samiksha , I have said her everything at our first night itself.because of Dadima's health I have to said yes for this Marriage.


If I had told about you to them then her condition may have got more worse. Keep patients for some more days.


To get a divorce , we have to be stay together for six months, as per the Law.

I am yours.


...


After Office , He went towards Geet's collage. She came and sat inside the car as soon she saw it.


Both were silent the whole drive. Nor she spoke anything nor he.


Maan was finding the reasons everyday to fight with Geet, but Geet listen to everything silently.


He always thought , Geet should argue and leave the house in anger.but Geet used to listen to his all scolding as if all fault is hers hers.



As usual, both of them were driving back to home from her collage.


When Geet felt sleepy .. her eyes turn heavy and soon she drifted to sleep on his shoulder. Maan was going to pushed her away but seeing her innocent face , his heart denied, it was first time ever he was watching her beautiful face so closed.

What is her fault , how rude I behaved with her but Geet never ever back answered him.why she is suffering this all silently. Just the Geet woke up suddenly and seeing how she was sleeping , she instantly got up and slip away from him. He didn't liked it.


At night after the work done, Geet CE in the Room and fell on the bed ...


"Geet, I want to talk to you , hearing maan's voice , Geet got up immediately ...


Look, you are very wise ..in just fifteen days you make this house as yours, even the people in the home. You are very nice


Listening to him , Geet thought that he would said that now I don't want any divorce.


But Maan immediately said that as long as you are here in this house, we should remain as good friends.


Small smile was just about to come on her lips but listening to him it got disappeared.


But now Maan was not like previous day's with her. The journey of them from collage to home and home to college was pleasurable for Geet now.


Days went by, weeks after months passed. Now it was five months of there marriage.


It was day of Geet's birthday. Dadima gave her birthday gift in the morning itself. It was beautiful blue sari.


Annie prepared her lovely bhabhi with doing her beautiful make up. Geet used to bound her hairs everyday .today annie asked her to let it free. Her hairs fell freely on her back , long brown silky curks has been left open today.


Geet looked at her reflection in the mirror and she blushed furiously.


Dadima asked Maan to take Geet to the movie today . Take her for shopping and let have everything she wished. Today is her days . Dadima literally order him.



Both went to the movie...Maan saw that

Samiksha was coming in. The main thing was that she was not alone, a man was with her .


he immediately called her ,

Hello Samiksha, where are you now? She replied, "i am at mom's place. She is not well.


Maan was thinking , did he really saw her or she was someone else. he went inside and looked at Geet who was waiting for him.


After the movie both maneet came outside, when Samiksha with that Man came face to face with them directly.


Samiksha was completely frightened seeing Maan. Maan placed his hand on the shoulder of Geet "Samiksha , meet her, she is Geet my wife.and Geet, she is Samiksha worked in my Office.just after introduction , Maan left from there taking Geet with him.


The way Maan has shown his right on her by introducing her. His hold on her shoulder , that thing was making Geet Happy.


On the other Hand , Maan was not his senses though.why did she lies to humans who was that man with her, just those thoughts were making him mad .

Spending all day outside , at night both of them return back to home.


Just then Maan's phone rang, Samiksha started just as he pick up the call,

Maan you are misunderstanding. I was going to my mom's place , but Manish my friend met me on the way, he gave me the party for he got promotion.

He just cut the call furiously throwing that in the room.

...


Here Geet was over the moon today,she told Dadima and Annie about the fun she had all day with Maan.. for the first time she was so laughing ..


Geet came to the room ... Maan was lost in some thoughts. Geet she was Samiksha .Maan said her again


Yes, You told me this. very innocently replied Geet. Samiksha, about whom I told you at the first night of marriage . Geet just then realized all things.


I saw her with other man.his fist was clinch hard in anger.


She loves you , Maan , do believe on her.there might be nothing as you feel.


You leave me at my home tomorrow, I will think further what I have to do.


What have you decided ?


I mean I will not come between both of you.she replied meekly.


What are you going do ?


I can't able to say this now, you leave me tomorrow at my maternal house.


...


Geet prepared for the next day ... for the first time after her marriage, she was going to her home, so Dadima gave her the bag full of gifts for her relatives.

Both of them sat in the Car.

Geet spoke suddenly , I will not come back, if someone asks, I will said that i do not want to stay in that house. She was shaking her voice was cracking while speaking .she really loved Maan .


She hoped one day , she would able to make place in his heart for herself and he would confessed that I love you. Just with that one hope she stay all this moths , but now she didn't succeed in making that place in his heart, so she decided to leave now.


After leaving Geet at her Home Maan return back to Khurana Mansion. At night unknowingly he called Her, Geet give me water. But immediate he realized that Geet is not here.he couldn't sleep. He never felt it before when she was here, but when today I am visualizing her, why I am missing her, he thought miserably.


When he got up in the mornings , Nakul gave him his black coffee. Annie came from behind to check on her bro and she looked at his face , just seeing his face she guess it all.


Bro, just yesterday bhabhi went to her home , and see your face in mirror. You loves her so much.


Maan didn't answer anything, standing before the mirror , he started to talk to himself. you fell in love with Geet. I don't know how , but then what is us with Samiksha. What I thought about her .

Is it sympathy , that's why I was going to marry her ? His eyes widen in realization.



So impatient ... so restless . I have never been so thirsty for anyone . But what will she say? God !! Why did I gave her permission to go... why did he let her go


...


Here, Geet was not happy without him, his anger, his voice, his frustration, that all she loved.



Maan could not control his heart now ... he straight went to Geet's place. It's been only two days that Geet was here, and Maan said to her relatives that dadima had called geet.

Geet didn't get what has really happened.


Once both sat in his car, restless Geet asked him , Dadima has told me to come later on, then why did you hurriedly came , is everything alright at Mansion. She asked worried.


No Geet, nothing is fine.he busted.


Geet got scared a bit , when she heard his outburst next, you are my wife , right ? You have show your rights on me atleast.

Why did you left all of sudden like that.


Geet was smiling in mind , what he has to say actually, why he is not speaking clearly. She thought and asked him directly.


For you to get your love , I was having only this solution.


Are you mad ? Do you know what was my state after you went. I was turning insane just in two days.when you were closed to me , I didn't realized it but when you went away, your lackness gives me pain in my heart.he pointed towards his heart.


Geet was overwhelmed with his confession, she rest her head on his shoulder today truly feeling as his Wife.


Once Maan cameto Khurana Mansion with Geet , Dadima and Annie started to laugh.


Both went inside the room , wanted to talk a lot today. Maan lock the door and we to towards Geet .he sat beside her on the bed. The moonlight was completed my from the window , Geet's curls were floating across his face soothing his senses.


He took her hand in his own ,her heartbeats raise quickly..

Geet, now I know that I can't live a moment even without you. It took time to realized Love but now you are mine.


Geet was having faith that one day she will win Maan's heart and today he himself was confessing it to her.


Drowning in her Hazel eyes he Tell her those three magical words of Love and she blushed furiously. Geet got up and went near the window.


Maan came from behind , taking her in his arms , he whispered huskily in her ear, don't go away from me now, stay like this forever close to my heart.

The End

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The much awaited Wedding
So here comes another special moment in our Maaneet's life
One of the most beautiful one!



At last the happy hours jingled and we all heard wedding bells of Maaneet.

That much-anticipated dream wedding which took place after they both suffering through multiple!

As Dhusht Dhanav weds his Mishty, Mr. Dreamy belonged to Ms.Hoshiyarpur Express.

It was very apt to the terms, "Dreams Do come true

Maan royally arrived in a white horse and took his princess to the mandap.

The Man whom the whole world fears, stood with his head bowed in front of his Mishti in the acceptance of her love.

Doesn't that leave us in awe?!

Soon they were confined in a divine relationship called Marriage.

With new hopes and dreams sparkling in these eyes, both took sacred vows encircling the fire, promising the bliss of everlasting love!

Maan's every motion ensured Geet's happiness. None of her innocent wedding dreams should remain untouched he made sure of it.

We could never forget that beautiful wedding scene where Geet was praying and Maan too petitioned to god by saying, "God, Please fill Geet's life with all the happiness. Whatever she is asking for grant it to her, dear god!

Whereas the naive in Geet never wanted anything more except to be in his warmth, always & forever!
Even When death would come closer, her last breathe should linger in the confinement of his arms, that's what she wished for! To die in his arms!

This much purity in both their hearts made us wanting to explore the beautiful corners of love itself. The selflessness, concern, devotion, inclination, sacrifices every shade was present there along with a lot of mischiefs and innocent nok jhoks!





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Maan Manofying His Geet
After Cherishing the sweet wedding moments
now let's cherish the thing which
Maaneet are known for, Ruthna and manana
But this time it was not innocent like before...
Something greatly was broken!


Was it Geet's Maan who've hurt her? Or it's the blindness of anger which possessed him that fateful day when Maan spat venom through his words.
More than Geet's husband, Maan was the cursed brother of Dev who couldn't see the why Geet forgave Dev.

Same Dev who nearly ruined Geet's life. But her big heart wouldn't think twice before forgiving Dev because she loved Maan unconditionally.

Seeing how the relationships in the family getting distorted, Geet was ready to forgive.

While blinded by ferocity, Maan returned all the love by calling her Honorless as she dared to forgive Dev!

After such a hurtful discourtesy Geet couldn't be in the same house. And repeating the history of leaving Hoshiyarpur, this time she decided to leave her newly found home!

Abandoning all her hopes, dreams, promises, love everything she left Maan. The only thing accompanied her was loneliness and her incessant tears.

As they say, Love finds a way and where Maaneet's love is abundance it's ought to melt all the fire of anger and misunderstanding.

Maan's love grew even stronger with the absence of his Mishty. He realized his haven is missing and to get her back he was ready to be dishonored repeatedly.

Changing his looks as the driver of Geet's maternal aunt, Maan started his mission of Manofying Mishty!

It was not long that Geet melted fiercely. She could never see her Maan who never bow down before anybody was going through so much of insult just because he dishonored her. Hurt her by his mere words! But where there is love, scars often heal!

The shattered Geet completely broke when she read Maan's yearnful letter.

All his words only detonated how incomplete he is without her ray in his life. Wasn't her soul desolated the same without Maan?!

Geet grew restless while reading the letter as her hazels longed for his presence.
Just when he spared a single glimpse for her, forgetting everything Geet ran in the arms of her beloved, clinging to find her safe haven! And with that, they made bittersweet memories of reunion.

Distance had already increased the lingering, love, and devotion to such an extent that Maaneet couldn't wait for long to be united as one.

Their awaiting consummation gave wings to all new love and new dreams. Pushing all the viewers to the edge as well!!







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Sanam Re


Part 1



Dear Maan

" Kaise ho aap ? Hum thik hai aur Dadima bhi . Thora diabetes bar gaya hai . Medicine nehi leti na , bohot careless hai , aap phone karke acche se daat dena. I heard you stay alone there , please take care . I saw in TV, too much mosquito..dont take those thing lightly. Last year in my hoshiyapur our neighbour Kanu chacha died because of dengue. Please be careful . Dadima said you never take care of your health n food. Acchi baat nehi hai . Thik se khana and please always eat home made food . If possible give me your servant number , dont worry I won't trouble him much . Hey Babaji I forget to tell you , yesterday dadima admitted me in xyz university . It's so big , I am very scared . Hope I won't disappoint dadima . She also trustee there , I want to make her and you proud . Stay healthy and dont over work , aapko bohot miss kar rahi hoon , jaldi aana ... Aap aao ge na "
yours Geet


Maan folded the letter and kept it aside , Adi was looking at him curiously. " sir letter "

" hmm " he answered without much interest ..

" In this age who sent those " Sasha muttered but Maan heard it and choose to ignore .

" you both go and prepare for presentation ... I don't want to see the mistakes you guys did last time ...am I clear "

" yes sir " both nodded and literary run to finish their job . But Sasha couldn't stop from asking about mystery letter " what do you think Adi ? Kisne beja hoga ... again those crazy models "

" pata nehi .. Maan sirnever open those letters or cards .. he seems too serious while reading it . "

" hmm lag toh raha tha ... But jo bhi ho..she is odd who sent stupid letter now " Sasha said laughing own but Adi didn't join ... He still trying to understand the mystery letter thing .

At evening

After finishing work Maan picked up one file to complete at home just when he notice her letter , without giving another glance he went out . He went to lift but stopped and came back . Without thinking much he picked up the letter and kept in his pocket. Coming back home he put it in his drawer and went to change .

At dinning table he was eating just then remembered her words ' eat healthy food ' he felt little bit irritation ' why I'm thinking those ' He abruptly got up and went to his room . Just then Mahesh came with his coffee ..

" sir I want a day off "

" why? "

" I need to go to Chandigarh..my wife is sick and "

" ok go " Maan didn't let him complete and have him day off , Mahesh thanked him went out .. He then became busy with his work forgotten the world .

Next day suddenly realise he have to do breakfast out as Mahesh gone . He ordered sandwich after reaching office ... as he was about to take bite her words came back ' stop it Maan... she is no one stop listening to her ' . He shrugged those thoughts and ate quietly .. Few days gone and he completely forgotten her letter n those concerned words too . This is The Maan Singh Khurana. .. biggest businessman of India... His life's one air making Khurana empire world's best , and his life resolve only around his business world .


Part 2



Dear Maan

" Hope you are alright , I'm good but my last week was very bad , ek dum khadosh wala bad . University students are so different from my village . A little bit problem to adjust but I am trying , Dadima giving me good tips even Nakul kaka, Maya di sab bohot help kar rahe hai.. oh ho I forgotten yours Mini mousi came yesterday . She is nice but strict . I know she didn't like me much but I'm trying . And don't worry about Dadima ..her suger is in control now . Actually i t was my fault . Last week I made rasmalai , after eating it Dadima's sugar gone high and that happened. But now dont worry i wont let her eat sweet thing much . you please take care of your health , about home dont worry, I will take care ... missing you.. Jaldi aana..aap aao ge na ... "

Yours Geet


Maan looked at her letter for few moments . Was ready to grab the phone to call her to stop this but then realised he can't do it . Because he was the one who told her not to call him as he is very busy man and his naive wife only following his order . He closed his eyes to control his frustration . He feared this , he feared after marriage someone will start expect thing , which he can't give ... he can't give no matter what ' love care affection company ' he can't give none to his partner .

That's why he told his Dadima clearly he won't marry in his life. But his Dadima didn't listen . He can't blame her fully too . It was situation demand . He went to Hoshiyarpur for his Dadrji barsi , there happened all those thing which changed his life for good . But no he is clear about his life , he can't accept her or say he can't accept anyone, give anyone as his Partner right . His all emotions died , how can he make other person happy . He looked at her letter in his hand...

" this is mistake all mistake , hope Geet tum samajh jao ge... and you will move on . Don't expect anything from this relation . " he again kept the letter aside and got busy forgetting everything ...


Geet looked the mess before her and smacked own forehead " hey Babaji kya kiya Maine... ek assignment ke liye pure room ko kharap kar diya... Maan hota toh room ke halat dekhke heart attack aajata unhe.. "

she smiled as soon as remembered Maan. Her husband her pride . She went to bed side and picked up his picture . A small tear drop , " aache ho na Aap... main toh baara changa "

she picked up her mobile to call but stopped herself ..she can't defy her husband , she can't disturb him . " Aap kab aaoge? " she knows the answer he won't come still her heart hopes he may . She can't blame him too ... He married her he saved her life what more she can't except from a stranger who is now her husband .

She was an orphan, brought up in Hoshiyarpur.. Her family mainly her uncles never loved her or even gave respect . They always considered and treated her as burden . Still she was surviving because her darji always said something good will happen, someone will save her from this torture called family. And that day came too but not as she expected it would .

She went to nearby village fair and there few goons started following her ... it was turning dark and she was running aimlessly. They caught her and just then she thought her life gonna over , Maan came as her saviour but due to fear she fainted .

Next day unexpected happened and she found herself in Maan's arm in a small cottage. Her full family saw her in that state and misunderstood her . For her family respect is everything even before anyone's life and Geet tarnished that . She knew may be she saved from those goons but her family will kill her but then miracle happened Maan married her to save her life ...

Maan protected her from them . She not naive to understand rich guy like him never tie with a girl like her . But still to save her he did that . No one in her life did something for her , Maan was the one who first time gave her respect as human as girl and as wife. She will always indebted to him . It was not hard for her to fall for a man like Maan. Who slapped her cousin brother who dared to say bad thing about her character. Who married her infront of whole villiage , who threatened her family not to contact her ever again .

First time she felt she not alone ..finally her darji word come true ... Her Prince did here to take her away from everything . But life is not fairytale, her husband told his decision in their first night itself..

" don't expect anything from me . You can stay here as long as you want but I can't give you my wife right . I have nothing to give you other than this house. We are not meant to be , this relation mean nothing . Better you remember it always . Don't worry i won't force you to stay with me . You are free to go . But you don't have to go back to your villiage . Stay here i will take care of every thing just never interfere in my life "

He stayed only for 3 days after their marriage then went to Mumbai for business leaving her with Dadima . His those word did hurt geet but she can't be selfish . Atleast he saved her life , he gave her new life away from old tortures ... He gave her Dadima who loves her so much . she will always be his wife even if he never accept her , she won't complain . She will always wait for him ...


~ Scroll Down for Next Parts~


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