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RETURN TO LOVE!!


PROLOGUE

A story about 2 individuals...who have a bitter past and what happens when they meet and slowly start developing new feelings for each other? Will their past allow them to trust in love once again? Will they return back to LOVE once again?


PART 1


Its past evening and deep within the woods..a young girl..runs for her life as few men chase her. Those men have covered their head and faces with turban cloth and armed with sharp swords and want to take her life mercilessly..She could see a tent and a burning fire log few feet away from the tent...that light gave her some ray of hope ...but she reached there just to invite herself with a silence... She hopes someone is around for sure and calls for help... and unfortunately no body showed up to help her...and she runs further from there as far as she could until the time she reached the edge and couldn't run further and this is the end of the cliff.. She is Panting heavily whilst turning to look back and those men are nearing to her at a full speed...but still she considers this life as a blessing from her Babaji and shots a quick prayer with her teary eyes...Babaji...This life is a blessing by you. If I remember right, I have never harmed anyone or done anything wrong in my life...If its true, then, please save me... "BABAJI...PLEASE HELP ME. Just then, she hears a sound of a vehicle and it seems to come from a road that's not that far away from the shallow mountain cliff she is standing...and she saw a jeep passing... This was the only chance she could take to save her life...if at all possible...She scream out loud...HELP...

The person who is driving heard her voice and initially shrugs it off to be his imagination..but he hears it again...

HELP...PLEASE HELP...

He hears a girl's voice again...and he tries to trace the direction of the voice...and finally found a girl waving calling out for him...PLEASE HELP ME...and he saw someone shut her mouth from behind and carried her away...

Oh my goodness..this girl seems to be in danger...wonder what that man would do to her...she has called out for me and I must help her at any cost...

Incidentally its the same spot where he has set his tent...he had just left a while ago as he had to buy few key things as few of his camping friends would join him in an hour and they were about to have a get together...he had to arrange food and other necessities...But now, he is getting back to his tent...he knew the path to reach there thro jeep... he takes a U turn to reach out to this girl ASAP...hoping on hope that she is safe...


He parks his jeep near the tent and first he reaches the spot where that girl had called out for him and from there he moves around. His heart is throbbing against his chest as each and every sec passing by, he is not finding that girl... and in few seconds...he got to hear some movements and then he makes a smart move without making any sound and making that gang alert... and slowly he reached the spot and what he got to see has literally terrified him...the girl is on the floor and surrounded by few men who are masked and holding swords in their hands..He was seriously wondering what kind of bravery are they showcasing? These many men and attacking one woman with such harmful weapons?

One of the men take a lead and comes close to her... seems to be the team leader of the gang.

You made a big mistake...NO...A sin by running away like this... now I give you one chance and that's it..you are coming with me.

Veerji... (Brother)

The man who came to help her stands still hearing her adressing this team leader as "Veerji...so her own brother is planning to kill her? Are they trying follow a honor killing now? He makes a move ahead and whilst listening to their further talks..


Only Daarji would understand my pain...I will come back to home tomorrow morning...please trust me for once. But I will no way go back to that place as both men in that house lusts on me..please dont send me back there.


This so called team leader doesnt even allow her to talk further...his anger over takes him and he strikes the sword on her hand...


AAAH...The cut is deep and its really not bearable...

the person who is hiding a little away got to watch this...and clinches his fist... he increases his pace now...

You better come with me...I have to drop you back before daarji comes..

She is now determined to value her pride and self respect over her life...

Kill me...but I will not go back there..

His anger now over powers him and he takes his sword high to kill her this time..He was about to strike on her and his hand was pulled by a force and couldn't continue further...and not knowing what has happened...he looks at his hand...and finds a stranger who is holding on to it..

Who are you? What are you doing here?

He didnt care to owe an explanation.. Leave this girl..

You better care for your life and dare you get into this...

I said leave this girl..

This time, the team leader tries to attack this man with the sword in his hand...but that man twists this TL's hand and gives him one punch on his nose and simultaneously barges on the fellow men who started attacking him... and at one point, he hostages this TL and rests a sword on his throat and threatens the rest all men to throw their swords and other weapons...Once they do, he sets his hostage free taking away his turban.. and all of them run for their lives..

He hurriedly wraps all the weapons in the turban cloth and throws it away behind one of the dense bushes nearby...what if these goons make their return to the same spot to find their weapons and start attacking this girl as well as him?

Once done, his all focus is on this girl...She seems to be unconscious...he gently pats on her cheeks...

Excuse Me...

She slowly opens her eyes...for a moment she is terrified and her teary eyes got glued to this stranger ... he is not one among those men for sure but still she finds herself now at a mercy of a stranger

Are you ok?

His this question clears all her doubts...he is not here to harm her but help her...She could sence the genuine concern in his tone...That's it...She didnt know how to react and she gets up and hugs him tight.. she has no one whom she could trust or share her grief..He felt really odd.. he too didn't know how to react... but soon he too gave in to her hug positively and gently rubbing on her back assuring her that she is fine and safe...


and she once again drifts into unconscious state. He notices that she is severely wounded... he carries her towards his tent that's far away from this spot...

He carries her all the way to his tent and lies her down gently. He takes his First aid box which is a must to carry for him when ever he is camping...he cleans the wounds with cotton roll filled with dettol drops and then applies ointment..The wound in her hand needed seems to be deep...he again treats it and puts a band...just then he looks at her salwar pant covering her knee area is soaked in blood...he has no other choice...but he has to treat the wound underneath it...he lifts up the pant with his shivering hands..and treats the wound in a similar manner and and covers it with a band..just then she hugs him again in her subconscious state...please...dont send me back to that place..those monsters ...will...eat me alive..please..please..


He is really wondering what is this girl saying...where she doesn't want to go and whom she is referring to as monsters? She gains her conscious and slowly looks at him deep into his brown eyes...those eyes were also lost in her.. " she is so beautiful...innocent and pure.."


They are still glued to each other and could feel each others loud heart beats...Her eyes slowly starts giving him a terrified look...she scans herself in the position she is..and immediately moves away from him and cuddles in a corner..He could understand her state and gives her assurance that she is safe here.

Dhekho...darne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain...you are safe here...

Her hazels slowly scans the surrounding and finds no body else apart from him..he seems to be genuinely helping her..but still how far she can trust a stranger when she has lost trust on her own people?

He takes few step and again she moves away from him and cuddles herself...he could understand her vulnerable condition. To make her feel comfortable, he gets her a glass of water...She really needed it as her body drained off its energy in every drop of sweat while she was running for her life...she doesn't think much and grabs and drinks in one go...

Do you need some more?

She nods for a NO...she still has doubts on this stranger and she is now staring back at him with anticipation of his next move.

Trust me..you are safe here...

She is really wondering...did this stranger really manage to beat up her cousin brother and his gang of goons who practice violence in name of religion, culture and customs? No body could even dare to pass by them..and he has beaten them up all single handedly? ..She slowly gets up and walks few steps and peeps outside the tent to reconfirm that there none of those goons are around..she again scans at this stranger and her heart votes her to trust him...She takes a sigh and walks back into the tent...and just then, she notices ointment on her wounds and a band on her knee...

She doesnt know how to thank him..but she has to...

Ji..Woh..Thank You so much..

He really wonders...She seems to have pretty decent English accent compared to many girls he has come across in this region. Must be well educated...

Its Alright.. Actually, after you voiced out for me from this cliff, I was worried if I could make it on time here...but I made it..

Geet again looks up and thanks her babaji..now, she is clear that her babaji is always there by her side and that's how she got this stranger's help.

But dont take them lightly, You dont know about those goons...they can go to any extent...I am really worried if they come back..

Trust me..they will not dare to..and I am fully prepared to face them even if they come back... He takes the fully loaded gun..and keeps it with him in case he needs further protection..

She gasps and her eyes widens in shock looking at it... and a smile touches his lips looking at her reactions.. He recalls he never smiled in his recent past...

She notices that he too has some wounds on his hand... she doesnt think twice nad pulls him to sit down.. making him wonder what is she up to...

What are you doing?

You see..even you got hurt..

Its ok...I am used to these wounds..

She glares at him for a moment and continues to do what she has decided...She found the first aid box and she slowly treated his wounds..and applied ointment..

That's it...done...

She doesnt talk further over it...He looks back at her and lost..he is getting drawn in a very strange feeling... After being cheated by a woman with whom he seemed to be madly in love, he never gave into these thoughts and feelings again but wonder what's happening to him today? as if some unknown connection with this girl...But his own past doesn't permit him to give importance to such useless feelings. He is glad that he could save someone's life and dignity and he is strictly forcing himself to maintain the limits.

Thank You he doesnt appreciate anyone so easily and here, he couldnt hold on to himself to thank her...Seriously wondering what's happening to him. Also he wants to help her with which ever way possible..

I think I better leave now...

What? Are you crazy?

Dhekhiye...I have already troubled you enough..

Will you shut up?

His tone had pitched high and She stares back at him with a startled look

Where will you go at this point of time? Its not going to be safe for you.

But.. she tries to protest and he stops her instantly.


I know you are not comfortable here but think about your safety first...those goons would never come to this spot but they might be keeping a watch on the path.

She is lost in her deep thoughts and definitely doesn't seem to be convinced.

Be rest assured that I will drop you back in the morning..where ever you want me to drop you.

Her daarji will be back by morning and her cousin brother will take a lead in poisoning Daarji's mind and brain...She is really confused... She is neither able to accept or deny to continue to stay back here...but its very true that she feels protected in this place and with a stranger's presence..she is forced to choose over a stranger than the people who are known to her ever since she has lived her life..Really feeling weird with the situation she has got into...but why she has began liking his company?

She came out of her engrossed thoughts when he called out for her again...he gives her a set of track pant and T-Shirt. She looks back at him confusingly..I guess you need a change...sorry...this is all what I have.

She looks at herself and YES...she definitely need a change...her dress is either torn here and there and stained with mud or blood. She quietly takes it and changes after refreshing herself..

Just then, he gets a call from one of his camping friend..

Hie...where have you set the camp?

He completely forgot that his friends are on the way...But now, he doesn't want them to come over here and as this girl is already terrified and fears her condition if she gets to see this many strangers...also, somewhere deep he feels possessive as if no one else should be here..only him and her...but he is in state of self denial due to his past.

Hey Listen...Rajat...I got a call from home..I am packing back all my stuff and leaving right away...Sorry guys..will make it some other time...

Rajat feels very odd listening to him as he has never called off any of the previous camping programs.

Is everything fine?

Hmm..yes...nothing to worry. Once again sorry.

Hey...dont feel sorry for all this? There's no problem what so ever. I am also carrying all my camping equipments and tools with me..so, me and my friends will set the camp in some other location. So, no issues yaar..you carry on and will catch up some other time..

Thats cool..so, enjoy and will see ya next time. Bye..

She happen to hear all this and appreciates his kind gestures within...also feels sorry for spoiling his program

He happens to turn and lost in her..even with this simple track pant and shirt..she looks "se*y and attractive...Her curves appears even more prominent...and her hair let loose now... he is drawn to her unknown to himself...


She caught him looking at her and she turns away...That's when he realises that he had been gaping at her and he snaps away and waks himself within thinking about the words he is describing her with...

Few moments passed...the night was getting chiller... but he is used to it...he changes into track pants and black tank tops and got busy preparing for some ready to make soups and noodles...

She was sitting little away from the fire log covering herself with a blanket which he gave her a while ago. She is all lost in her deep thoughts about where to go and what to do further..She has no clue for what will happen even in the next moment...and her thoughts distracted he called out for her and she looked at him...without her own knowledge she lost in him seeing him in his track pants and tank tops..she gulps..goes breathless seeing his well toned muscles and abs ..


She was lost in a stand still moment where she got to glance his clear and pure handsome features.. His close proximity is sending some unknown shivers down into her...She came out of her trance when he called out for her again and that's when she got to notice the hot mug in his hand..

Please have a hot cup of soup...you will feel better.

Thank You

Naturally, a dimply smile touches her lips while addressing his kind gesture and takes it without any hesitation as she has been really hungry...

This was the first time he got to witness her beautiful smile..he takes his hot mug of soup and sits little away... but invariably he was all the time glaring at her.. She was glowing even more under the fire...Moreover, she seem to be far far relaxed now.

May I know your name?

He is curious to know... and to that matter even she is equally curious to know more about him.

I'm Geet...

She was about to add her surname but withheld for so many reasons...He could sense that.and she shoot the same question back to him..

And Your name?

I'm Maan..

He too didnt mention his second and sur name..as he preferred to keep it as simple as she did.

Both complement each other's names within their thoughts thinking to be a "Sweet Name"

But obviously not voicing it out..

(Author's note: So, finally, they know each other's name...so lets address their dialogues tagging their respective names hence forth... but wait till next chapter 😉 )


TO BE CONTINUED...😊

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Tumhe haq hai


She felt someone's presence beside her. On instinct she turned her head to look who was it? Her breathing hitched seeing him so close to her all of a sudden, unexpected. she did not even knew that he was present in the function.
He was looking at the front, she wondered if realised that it was her beside him, so close to him. When did he came by the way? Did he just came
Or Was he present all thorough out?

Did he saw her too? She felt her heart beats going higher with the thought of him seeing her dancing a while ago! An instant blush crept on her cheeks with the thought and imagining his reaction on seeing her performance. With that,She immediately averted her gaze and tried to focus on the dance performance going on at the front.

Though she tried to be as much unaffected as possible but those nervously fiddling fingers of hers we're her give away! Her breathing was way too faster than normal. She could feel a strange kind of restlessness in her self.

Her palms turned sweaty with the anticipation of the unknown.. But the major reason was, his being so close to her. And She could not even move away from there... It was as if he had bound her with invisible bounds.

She did not knew what to do? How to manage her senses, which were on extra alert having him so close. She could not concentrate on the performance. Her total attention was on him only.

What would happen now? Will he do something? And as if he had heard her, she felt her heart stopped!
He slowly, very slowly touched her left hand's fingers with his own... Then gradually slipped his fingers into hers, interlacing them together.

She was so stunned feeling his touched for the first time. She felt a shiver ran thorough her whole body. Heat imitating from the whole being, colouring her face and body with that pink tint. That heat caused, not only her palms but feet to turn sweaty too! And that tingling feeling was all over her being.

She gulped hard, swallowing that knot in her throat, half scared of someone finding them like that! But somewhere relieved for the darkness around them cause of those dim lights.

At first few seconds, she panicked with all kinds of thoughts, of right and wrongs, of decent-indecent ect.

But then she dared a glance at him... To find him already looking at her, waiting for her. That look in his eyes was her undoing!

She forgot everything else in that one look. Everything faded away, what remained was him and her... And their feelings for eachother.. Which they both knew were true and everlasting.

Chocolate brown one's gave that assurance to the Hazel one's which they sought for desperately. And in return she too secure her tight grip on his fingers, promising the rights he has silently asked for!!

Tumhe haq haiii...

And exactly a year &half later, he did claimed her publically and Officially.,. By making her Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana aka.." Maan ki Geet" Forever!!









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QUOTATOONN




Location Mumbai

Sanjeevani Hospital. In the great rush in parking area Three cars quickly stopped and the men from One cars and third cars quickly come outside and march to second car that was between these two cars . seeing all around one of man knock the door and stood aside.

After one mins a black shoe that first come out and soon the man standing out and looking at Hospital door and slowly slowly his all features start showing. His long legs that cover in black pant to his Abs filled body that can be see in his fitted black shirt and as he shove off his fashionable specs the muscle of his arms shown how muscular he is. As he hold his specs one of man come forward and man look at him and pass his spec to him and slowly his all face features start showing Yes he is non another Maan Singh Khurana.

In short MK killer machine for his rivals in the underworld Mafia..

Taking deep breath while worry can be seen on his handsome face he quickly walk further to enter in hospital while all his men walk behind him and seeing them entering all peoples in reception area start looking at them while one Doctor come to him. Mr MK Maan stop hearing him and looking at his right side men who said something in his ears.

Maan noded raise his eyes brow and doctor said still scaring from this living death man . She is fine now. Actually when she and listen this maan start walking to direction and so as doctor and another men and doctor continue Actually She came on right time if she come 2 or 3 mins late she may loose her life but..maan stop hearing him and looked at him angry.

Doctor wipe his face with hanky while maan show his big eyes and index finger to him like saying never utter this world. S..shee. fumbling he said She take one bottle full sleeping pills and now we have take out pills from her body but we have to take her under observation for at least 24 hours and have to monitor her. Listen this Maan make fist but control showing any emotion and start walking again while doctor to accompany him and on reaching near ICU gate Maan finally turn to look at doctor and Said you may go know. Doctor again wipe his perspirations filled face and noded and go out then he looked at his right side Man said Adi.. to which the person noded and he left inside and after some mins a nurse seeing to coming out. Nurse look at him and another men. Adi open the door from inside and Maan lonely went in while Adi to stop at door .

As he work some distance he saw a girl sitting outside of a room and crying. He go near her and kept his hands on her shoulder and as girl turn and looked at him fresh tears come out from her eyes and she at once stand from her seat and hug maan and mouthed Maan bhai.. Geet Didi.. she just could not say further as again she start crying.Maan broke hug and looked at her and seeing him looking at her the girl said while crying. Wo.. mein. Jab sham ko ghar ayi or Geet didi ke room mein gyi thi wo mujhe bed pe ...Maan close his eyes tight. Mumma . Papa. bahar gaye hue hai. Geet didi ki marriage ka invitation. Maan turn his face right side listen this.

Mein. Kya kahugi ab unko. Geet didi ne aisa kyun kiya...kyun nahi socha unno ne mere apke hum sab ke bare mein. Maan bhai.. kyun.. saying this girl just fell down on bench and maan looked at Adi from behind who at once approach him and give water bottle to girl.. Drink it Pari.. said maan .

girl look at him and she take two-three sip. Dnt worry she is fine now. Said maan as he saw her compossing. Doctor told me she is fine now so do not worry. To hear this girl noded.. Maan look at his watch which showing 9 Pm in night. Tumne kuch khaya?? Listen nothing in return Maan said Adi take her to canteen . Bhai mein nahi. Go. Pari. I will be there. You go.. pari noded and looking at maan and once taking glimpse from the door hole she walk to opposite direction of Maan.

Fighting with so many emotions Maan at last open the door and walk in taking slow steps. The emotions that he hide outside from all start coming seeing her lifeless lying on bed with machines and wires. He wipe tears as he sit beside her n caress her pale face. Why you did this Geet?? He ask while caressing her right cheeks while his eyes only stick to her. Seeing her opening her eyes slowly.

Maan caress her forehead and looked at her only to hear because I love you and I cant accept anyone except you. Listen this a tear fall out from his eyes and so was she crying. Seeing him crying Geet try to wipe his tears but maan hold her hand. Why u did not understand Geet. How many times I have to tell you You have no future with me. Your Father has choose really good boy for you . He will make you happy. Accpet it the soon you will realize the more it will better for you. Said maan showing his back to her.

As he have not guts to tell a lie to her . Than Its better I die. Said geet meekly but in strong determination making maan to turn and looking at her. Are you out of your mind Geet? Ask maan no no shout on her . I will die maan. But I will not marry someone else. Seeing her crying so loudly maan could not control more and he at once hug her while geet to hug him tightly and mouthed I only love you maan. I only love you and hearing it he only hug her tight.

After two days. Maan and geet both taking their pheras , dress up in traditional in the presence of Adi and Pari when Pandit ji ask Maan to apply sindoor on geet mang and while applying some sindoor it fell down on geet nose to which geet smile and maan wipe it with his hanky.

Later he tied mangalsutra on her neck and pandit ji declare them as Man and wife. Didi.. Pari happily come to them and he hug geet and then Congrats them. Aap khush hai na ab didi. Ask pari to which geet smile and noded in yes.







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Wedding Anniversary


Part 1


"My husband has got so clumsy these days. I mean it's actually true, after a few years of marriage everything really becomes bland like grass!" Suneeta squealed twisting her lips in distaste.

"Ask me. After three kids now it feels like more of being with a sibling!" Sameera was not far behind in the troops of trolls as everyone laughed out loud, focusing towards a quiet Geet, "Geet you are not saying anything? Not done. Won't you share your bit of the gossip??"

"That's what I am thinking. Maan is. Um, let's say different!" Geet slowly molded her sentence while those scrutinizing eyes solidified at her.

"Oh, could it be that finally, we found someone who's marital excitement is still running! Aha. Consider us J Geet!" As all their giggles echoed, Geet was deeply contemplating the equation she is having with that man of her dreams over the years!

It was definitely nothing like these ladies described. Even to this day, he doesn't leave her before making her blush like beetroots!

But then thinking more acutely she found the variations of their relationship has definitely been changed. The hot-tempered passionate man that she married was gone somewhere in all the chaos of family life!

Also, the adventure that she was lured into was heavily missing. Maan is milder & teasing over the years! They bicker quite a lot now. But underlying she knows he loves her!

Now that she is thinking her mind was rolling into sadness. Undesired sadness.

She heard the door click as a tired Maan entered while loosening his tie.

A deep kiss landed on her forehead, "Mishty. I am home!" She recollected these days he more often kisses on her forehead rather than those hungry kisses on the lips like the initial days of their marriage.

"Where is Pari? Gudia kaha ho? Dada is home!" Didn't even ask how that lonely wife is, instead goes straight towards their daughter's room!

But this is how it is been since last few years! Why is this irritating her now?

An innocent Pari ran to her loving father like a little tornado and hugged him with her small hands as Maan scooped her lovingly, offering the chocolates his princess demanded.

Adoring his daughter for a few moments he sent her off as this was the time for his bath and Geet has to prepare the servings of dinner.

Just like every other night when Geet was finished with all the household chores she regarded Maan was making their daughter sleep with utmost love and care. He is simply the best father there was not an ounce bit of doubt about it!

A pondering Geet placed herself in the bed as Maan too returned after tucking Pari with the fairies of sleep.

"Umm. Mishty!" His strong muscles engulfed Geet's petite frame pretty easily as he mumbled sweetly into her ears, "I love you."

For some reason, those words pricked her turmoiled heart!

"I. . . love you too Maan." Whispering back she felt the bulge poking on her legs.

It ignited her desires instantly as she craved more for her husband's warmth.

Unaware, an innocent Maan was talking in his slumberous cute voice, "You know Geet our Pari is getting naughtier these days. Every night she needs to hear new stories. Just like you! And see it's already past 12 due to that.

God knows if I'll be able to wake up at 6 for my morning exercise or not! Got an important meeting with Gurgaon client tomorrow 11 sharp!
Please wake me up wifey?"

"You. You are going to sleep right away?" Of course Geet felt immensely disappointed. And her erratic hormones did the job of fuel excellently well.

"Hmm. Jaan. Good night." With that leaving Geet in her huge pouts a vigorously sleepy Maan turned to another side to doze off.

He didn't even plant a single kiss on her lips?

It's comprehensible he must be exhausted but isn't he tired every day? She is tired too. But how can you be tired of love?

Furthermore, her ovulation hormones wanted a lot more, disremembering it's just the other day when he made love to her.

The next morning Maan woke up pretty late. Or course Geet didn't even bother giving the wake-up alarms to him.

However, he got ready at a blazing pace.

"Areh. Where are my car keys? Geet? Have you stolen my car keys again? You little thief!" Geet scrunched her eyebrows hearing all his teases.

She couldn't describe what came at her that she thundered like that in a rude tone, "I am not a thief. Just mind your words. I have no wish to take those rotten car keys. Mujhe aur bhi zaroori kam hote hain!"

Being a bit startled with her unsavory words, Maan smiled weakly, "Woah! Chill! I was just joking Mishty. Why are you so grumpy haan? My baby didn't sleep well last night? Kisi bade se macchar ne kata kiya??" He followed her like a child to pull her in his embrace.
Only that can calm his little angry blizzard.

"Why do you even care?
See here are the keys. And you just need an excuse to call people thieves!" Shoving the keys in his hands she fired a glare of irritation, "Now why are you staring at me like a buffoon?"

Though confounded yet Maan ventured to keep the environment light with his soft teases, "Oho. Aaj toh meri Jaan subhe subhe badi gusse mein hain. Consider your hubby scared! So kuch bolne se Pehle thoda dar ko bhagana padega na??" He tapped on her nose with endearment, proceeding tp wrap his arms around her belly.

But the unyielding wife in Geet tried to push him away by hissing again, "Maan. Harwaqt majak accha nahin lagta. And now don't disturb me. Let me finish cooking. Warna phir you only will yell why the breakfast is not ready!"

"Mishty. Kiya huwa hain? Naraz kyun ho itna?" Sounding anxious, Maan noticed she was not even looking at him.

This could only suggest his Mishty is quite mad. But what could possibly be the reason? Everything seemed to be ok last night!

Is this one of her mood swings?

"Look at me when I talk to you."

"Shuru ho gaye orders. Nahin dekhna mujhe. Jao jo karna hain karlo!" She kept making Rotis adamantly.

"What the hell woman? Why are you testing my patience in this early morning? Just tell me what's wrong. Why are you sulking?" Clenching both her arms, Maan pinned her next to a beam. His watchful eyes noticed every wriggling movement Geet made to free herself from his clutch.

Still not meeting his eyes! Hiding something in those hazels?

"Wait a second is it because I slept yesterday? You wanted to have sex wifey? Just should have given a hint." Quickly shot a glance at his wristwatch, "Umm...Now time is short but will have a quicky one ok." Instantly moving her stole away Maan dipped his nose on her neck planting kisses and unzipping his tuxedo.

Meanwhile searching for the knot of her Pajama as well. His swift hands were roaming all over her sensitive body, making her almost moan which she kept buried inside her throat with a lot of struggle.

Hoisting her up by both her bottoms, Maan hastily placed her on the kitchen slab while standing in between her legs.

Geet got marveled at the instantaneous hardness her passionate husband could deliver in such a precise time.

As passion crested darker inside Maan's eyes, he leaned towards her parted lips to shower his innumerable kisses.

But got appalled when Geet's feeble palms pushed him away and her furious growl echoed in, "You men.. Gggrrr... Disgusting!
Don't touch me! You didn't even bother to ask if this is what I really want. Aur sidha shuru ho gaye?
Everything starts with sex and ends with sex for you haan? Do you think this low of me?" It was such a mixed feeling for her to control her desires and utter those venomous words!

After seeing that baby face of her astonished husband she got even more disconcerted.
What is even happening in between them?
Why can't he understand her? Why can't he simply love her? Or he doesn't love her anymore? This must be a mere duty for him!

Seeing her hazels threatening to spill salt water, Maan spluttered, "What? Low? No? What's wrong if my wife wants to have sex with me. Tumhe kiya ho gaya hain Geet? Why are you not telling me clearly?" Desperation piqued in his vocals as he sought to calm her down!

"Kiya ho gaya hain? Aapne aapko mera pati keh rahe ho? Aapko yaad bhi hain maine kal kaunsi color pehni thi?" She asked with a broken voice, her eyes churned lava.

"I was tired last night Jaan." He concealed his sadness in his nervous smile, "I thought you read me like an open book Mishty. You understand me the same right?" Didn't even let her ken how shattered her words have left him inside.

"Tired? Do you ever discern when I too get tired?
Am I not a human? Or I don't have that same right as you?" Controlling her heavy breathes Geet paused briefly before seething back, "You! Do you even remember what are the last meaningful words you have said to me? Or expressed that you love me?"

"I thought when every night I sleep inside your cuddle that tells you enough about my love." Maan softly brushed his thumbpad on her puffed cheeks, still standing in between her slender legs.

Her cheeks were burning with temperature as Maan wanted to absorb all the tensed heat from her. He loves this woman so much. Yet he is unable to keep her happy these days. There must be ample complaints which are unsaid. Let them come out today.

"Jaan...?? Don't you understand how much I love you?!" His intense voice invoked goosebumps but Geet kept hiding under her anger.

"Main kiya karti hoon din bhar jab aap office mein hote hain? Kuch bhi pata hain aapko?

When I call you and tell you things you just hum from the other side. I am sure you don't even listen to a word I say.

You won't even kiss me on my lips like before. What do I do? Throw myself on you again and again?
Aur phir ekdin aap hi kahenge Geet besharam ho gayi hain!!

Pehle toh phir bhi you used to tell me about your office projects but now? You come back home, have shower, play with Pari, feed her, make her sleep and then you too go to sleep!" As she naively oozed all the fire by her words, Maan kept listening each word attentively letting her spill all her agony.

"In the last twenty days how many words have you spoke to me? Let alone days tell me about last few months?

Is this how a marriage works? Where no excitement or passion exists! Only burdens of duties! Am I merely a duty to you now?

Can you remember the last time you spoke something passionate to me? All the time you are just teasing me. Am I a joker to you? Whom you can only make fun of anytime for your personal entertainment? Is it because I am not so brilli..." He could not let her finish saying further as his fingers pressed deep on her inferno diffusing lips, "Sssuhh...You are too much angry right now Jaan. Tumhi ne mujhe sikhaya hain gusse mein nahin bola karte. We tend to say all the wrong things often when we are angry.
And I am sorry. I am so sorry if I made you.."

"Sorry toh kehna bhi mat. Nafrat hain mujhe ye jhute sorries se."

"Jaan. All the teasing I do is just to make you smile. Everything I do that's for your happiness. I didn't realize it was making you upset. Please forgive me.
When you are angry like this I can't even focus into anything you know it Mishty!"

To increase the difficulty of the situation Maan's phone buzzed loudly as she glared furiously.

Taking the utmost sad sigh of helplessness he picked up, "Yeah...I am coming. Just give me one hour." With the left hand, he kept Geet's adamant frame immured in his loving arms.

Finishing the call he moved towards Geet and cupped her cheeks, "Baby. I have to go. When I'll return tumhari sari shikayat dur kar doonga. I promise!" Leaning to kiss her lips which she obstructed by moving sideways, "Don't.
Mujhe aur koi bahana sunna hi nahin.
Jaiye aap." Shouting madly she started running towards their bedroom as Maan followed her desperately.

He saw she throw herself on the bed, burying her face on the pillow like a huffed child!

Desolated, Maan pleaded by pulling her stiff frame in his arms, embracing from behind, "Please let me hug you. You know I can't leave without that."

"Oh, You will leave without it all right." Won't even mercy a glance at him!!

"At least let me see you for the last time." Trying to take a peek, Maan lovingly parted the hair that covered his fuming wife's beautiful face!!

"No. I don't even want to see your face Maan! Just go. I don't want to hear another phone ringing." Seething vehemently, Geet took another pillow and put that on her head, anticipating Maan's obvious exit!

He loves his work more than anything and she knows all this coercing is a mere temporary illusion!!

Proving her right, Maan's footstep faded out within a few minutes!!

Even then Geet couldn't hold her tears at the disappointment that Maan still went to the office. He still didn't have that heart to cancel his meetings and for one day give his long dued attention to his sulking needy wife!!

The saddest part is that tomorrow is their wedding anniversary and Geet could take an oath that he didn't even remember that or cared the slightest!

Who remembers some petty anniversary after all this years of getting married, right??

It was 2 Pm at the noon when Pari was playing around and a desolated Geet was browsing all the channels with her drowsy eyes!

"Mumma...Mumma. Woh dekho file..Led led..And smoke..." Pari's baby voice pitched high as she clapped towards the television.

Breaking the chains of thoughts Geet noticed the news which said there was a huge fire burning in the Dx complex building. She quickly remembered this property belongs to Maan's Gurgaon client!

Isn't this the client he was having a meeting with?

Her heart churned with fear as she grasped the fabric of her attire. Not wasting a second more she dialed Maan's number.

To her worst fear, it went straight to the voicemail.


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Wedding Anniversary


Part 2



"Mumma.. Kyun lo lahi ho. Kiya huwa.." Pari confusingly witnessed how her mother hugged her tightly before breaking into a howling!

Savitri came running hearing Geet's wailing, "Daadi maa..Maan ka phone nahin lag raha aur yaha news mein aag...
Agar unhe kuch ho gaya...
Mujhe Maan ke paas jana hain! Abhii..." Regretting most about the last memory she retrieved where her loving husband tried to hug her and she jerked him off!

Jerked him like some strayed animal of the street! Or even worse!!

That sadness in his face would haunt her forever if she can't find him soon. Right at this second to be precise!

"Maan. Kaha hain aap. Please abhi isiwaqt mere paas aaiye. I am so sorry. Main phir kabhi aapse jhagra nahin karungi. Call me please." It's the tenth voicemail that she sent on his number.

Desperate, she called at his office and everywhere to know where he is.

They could only inform her that yes there was a meeting fixed and they have not got any update from Maan yet! After the fire broke in it was a land of chaos. She must wait for any latest information.

Soon the noon slipped into the darkness of night, Geet wandering around the streets in the search of the love of her life!

Sobbing into the corner she wiped her endless tears for the umpteenth time, defeated brutally.

Her mind refused to form that cursed thought that those blurry hazels would not see his beautiful face again. Or hear his innocent voice when he read stories to their only child!

What will she answer to her little one? Why is her Dada not here to make her asleep just as usual?

This must be the way almighty is punishing Geet for complaining in vain! That too for such a loving husband who worked hard for his family only!

When did she become so vague in her neediness which didn't let her see the selfless love Maan always bestowed by his presence.

No matter how much tired he is, the smile he had on his face every day when he would see both of them, as if his whole world beamed.

His love never faded rather it grew stronger with each passing day. It's her who's the selfish blind one!

Suddenly someone muffled her guilty screams from behind while tying both her hands as darkness clouded on the visions. Before she would even say a word two men escorted her towards a big Jeep.
Suddenly someone muffled her guilty screams from behind while tying both her hands as darkness clouded on the visions. Before she would even say a word two men escorted her towards a big Jeep.

As terror stupefied Geet, her petrified soul tried it's best to project a scream of Maan's name, only to be carried out as a helpless groan through the thick cover.

Within 30 minutes or so that jeep stopped. Geet heard the footsteps coming closer as her breath stuck in her throat. She remembered Maan's warning to never roam around the streets alone carelessly.

Her mind was preoccupied with Maan to such an extent that she didn't even measure what these people might do to her.

But soon she felt an arm snaking around her belly. This is not how the first time she was picked up in the vehicle.

She wriggled at her best, unflinched that adamant kidnapper scooped her his arms and started walking in pin drop silence!

Geet's eyes burned with the abundance of tears she shed as her mouth was freed from the cover.

But before she would even form a word that man put his own familiar hands over her mouth. Standing behind he removed the clothes covering her smooth shoulders. He started planting kisses all over her neck and shoulders as she cried in anguish.

Suddenly when he stretched his huge palm on her stomach, trailing his other hand towards her bosom, Geet whimpered, "Aise saza diya aapne mujhe!! Kamse kam aab toh mujhe aapke seenemein le lo..." A lamenting whisper took his name, "Maannn..."

"So my Mishty knows..." He retracted his hands and tightened his grip on her petite frame.

"I know each of your touches Maan...Your breathing...Your warmth, perfume.." Geet struggled to move, she was dying to get a glimpse of his greek features, "Aur sabse badi baat. Aapke bina koi aapki Mishty ko aise nahin chu sakta naa.."

"Then why are you crying..." Speaking calmly, Maan wiped all the tears tainting Geet's puffy cheeks.

"For being such a bad wife...For hurting you...
I thought I will never see you again...But why did you punish me like this Maan?" Her tears were in the incessant wish as she whimpered the answer herself, "I deserve it...aur saza hain tohwoh bhi dijiye...Just let me see your face Maan... Please!!"

Ignoring her begging Maan articulated, "I was busy in my meeting at xyz.
That's why my cell was off. Then I received your voicemails and understood that you thought I had the meeting with Dx. So all just clicked right then and there!

However, I made this surprise plan ages ago. To take you away somewhere for our wedding anniversary. Only you and Me. Without a single disturbance.

You think mujhe khayal nahin rehta ke main waqt nahin de paaraha hoon meri Mishty ko?? Tumse zayada I need to spend time with you."

"So? You will kidnap me? Make me believe that you have met with some accident? Do you even know mujhpe kiya beeta ye puradin?"

"I hope you will not hate this word Sorry but am sorry for making you worried...
Though you only said there is a lack of excitement in our marriage? Getting kidnapped by your own husband shall fulfilyour quota of excitement I reckoned!
But. Are you still complaining? Not to be forgotten that I instructed you to never roam alone on the streets. I guess this was a perfect demonstration of how vulnerable things can get and cost you ample!"

"Aap bohot burey hain...I am a fool don't you know it?? Why take my rubbish talks so seriously? And now taunting too? As if this whole day Punishment wasn't enough?
Please at least now let me see your...your face...Maan..." Her sobbing ended up in hiccups as Maan immediately freed her, "Hey...Hey Mishty??..Ok, ok I might have gone a bit overboard. Itna nahin rotey...Come on I am all yours!" He cursed at himself seeing her feeble state.

After all the bitter complaining, making that naive realize was one thing but he could never see her in such extent of agony.

Just as Geet's yearning eyes focused at Maan's loving expressions, she planted ample kisses all over his face. Not sparing an inch from her boundless love!

"I am sorry..So sorry...Maan, Never do this again to me...I don't need any excitement..." She spluttered in one breath during the intervals of those endless kisses, "Srif aap chahiye mujhe...Aapka ye chehra kabhi meri aankhon se door mat karna...Warna I will... " And Maan silenced his crazy wife instantly by kissing those moving petals, "Ssshhh... I love you too.
Happy wedding anniversary Jaan. Congratulations to me, mainemeri pagal bakbak karne wali chalti phirti disaster ko itney saaljhel liya!! Bravo Maan!! You did well son!!" Winking playfully at her with curving his perfect lips in a beam which lingered on hers!

"Haww...Dusht Danav...! Happy Wedding Anniversary. But because of your Dusht Danav harkatein couldn't even get you a Gift." She landed a weak punch on his hard chest while a playful and passionate Maan jerked her by groping her waist.

Whispering intensely, he sent chills down, "Here's my gift, You.
I will unwrap you right away without a single complaint. Come baby.
Waise ek baat bata doon, I loved that green dress you wore last night... And this red one making you look like a seductress." Another teasing jerk and she could hear the quick unzipping of her Kurti!

Of course he remembers what she wore last night!

"Oh no, Maan. Let me at least get freshen up before you kiss me."

"And there you complained why won't I kiss your lips after returning from the office with all the dust and pollution!
However that's not the only reason I kiss on your forehead. Do you know why I do it?"

She cutely stared inside his eyes waiting for the answer!

"Because I feel my love has been getting deeper for you! I love you way more than what I did yesterday. And Tomorrow would be a lot more than today, Geet!" Rubbing his forehead next to hers, Maan murmured with immense love as Geet pressed her lips profoundly on the top of his head.

The very next moment scooping her up in the bridal style, Maan directed towards the lavish washroom while their night waited to render endless!

Three days later.

"Can you believe my husband! He straightly went to the office without any meal. I cooked with so much heart. Specifically his favorite dish. Aab sara khana waste!
Sometimes it makes me doubt if he is having an affair at the office or not! Always in a hurry to reach office! As if double promotion ka laddoo bant rahe ho!" Waiting for the bell to ring, Seema expressed her displeasure in a turbulent nature.

"These men are always so heartless. Nobody can help it, it's in the DNA!" Suneeta shared her side of expert opinion!

"Seema. " All the ladies turned to witness Geet standing with her jaws clenched, "You should be more concerned that he was hungry and didn't even eat something. Why don't you pack the food and take it to him." She pasted a bitter smile towards all the roaming eyes.

"Geet. Wow. Seeing you after days. And you should take Seema's side..." Sameera couldn't hide the sourness sipping via her voice.

Gritting through the teeth, Geet sought the best to remain composed, "There is no side. Sameera.
Being his wife Seema is on his side only." A mocking smile took place on her lips reflecting upon the irony, "You people sit and bitch about how your husbands behave. Count all their breaths. If they come close oh only physical. If they are not interested oh maybe having extramarital somewhere!

I know they are not perfect, rather far from perfect. Almost like babies who need constant pampering.
Always tired, boring and everything.

Are we perfect though?

When was the last time you all did something special for them?

Like getting a makeover and surprising them? Most importantly always that same question, shaadi ke baad unka pyaar kam ho jata hain.

But do you love him the same? Are you not trapped in the household chores or this stupid gossiping so much that you forget to confess your love as well!!

Pyaar jatana srif kisi ek ka kam nahin hain na! Dono taraf se pehel honi chahiye!

Those men who are rotten forget them, at least don't doubt who are not and ruin the peace in vein! If you think he is cheating on you, go to his office and check rather bidding all the respect and secrecy of marital bond in a place like this.

Most importantly be a little positive!

Well, Pari is here...Have a good day all! All of them gaped at Geet's walking frame as she kissed the little Pari & escorted her towards the car with a satisfied smile adorning her face after all that earful!!

But definitely didn't want Seema to fall stupid like herself by all the provocation. No relationship is perfect but the imperfections make it real and savoring.
Only trust and respect should be there while love would find its own way to sustain forever!

At home.

Maan, as usual, walked all tired and worn out, loosening his tie.

This time Geet smiled in advance before he would beam like the sun. Rushing towards his tired frame she didn't hesitate a second to engulf his lips in a deep smooch!

"Umm...Jaan...Bahar se aaya hoon...Dirt hain...Let me get fresh then won't even let you breath my sexy wife!" As he tried to pull away from the kiss, Geet was not in the mood to let go!

She leaned in and smacked on Maan's rough lips once again, her fingers trailing on his shirt buttons. Breathing laboriously Geet was finished unbuttoning Maan's shirt revealing that perfectly toned body to drool for! Her eyes dazzled with love and desire as she loved that raw cologne muddled with the redolence of her husband.

Cutely hesitating before tracing her fingers on his tuxedo, exactly then he lifted her up in his arms, "Ye kiya kar rahe hain aapMaan..Neeche utariye na. Pari dekhlegi toh kiya sochegi...Oh no!! Please close the door... "

That mischievous glint inside his beaming dark browns raised her heartbeats even further, making her cheeks taint with the red blush, "Come on, mother of my kiddo and still feel shy to unbuckle my tuxedo wifey?
However, you shall know, My angel daughter will be very happy knowing how much dada adores mumma...

Since Time is so short... Let's utilize and take shower together..What say, sexy mommy??" Those big eyes growing with dark passion are more than enough to make her naive heart flutter like a teenager!

"Ohh?? Kitna besharam hain aap...Mere Dusht danav hubby...But I love your all shades Maan! Love you so much!!" Captivated, Geet saw how lovingly her crazy husband got busy opening her hair!

"Me more!" And he nuzzled in her fragrant heavy silky locks which he loved caressing more than anything!!


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Maaneet's love story is far what we can safely claim to be far from typical. Yet its the tale of an ingenuous love that overcame all the hardships.
No expectations from each other. Just unconditional and pure love.

Trust, faith, honesty, understanding, passion, possessiveness, sensuality, lingering zest, divinity, integrity, sacrifices, selflessness everything was itched in their unconditional love...

And as their symbol of love..Junior.MSK too arrived in their life..

Humara pyar, humara rishta..
Humehsa kayam rahega!
Ek misaal banker...
Ki mohabbat ho tho sirf Maan Geet jaisi!
Aur jab tak mohabbat karnewale rahenge...
Tab tak Maan Geet ki dastaan unki zubaan mein rahegi!!

Those words are indeed true...❤️



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