Arhi FS: WRY!! Complete & A/N pg 149 (NEW)

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That was a fab opening N. Arnav a pianist and one whose clearly at the bottom of his career. And I LOVED how you have contrasted the age gap and personality of Arhi... They are lovely. 😊

Btw, I have a feeling an MU erupted and Arnav let go off Khushi 😕

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Posted: 7 years ago

What a timing? As I said on the Blog, just got back home. Congratulation for the new story. Will be back with a comment later.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Is it a Four Shot or Five Shot?

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KRISGEET

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi N

Loved the concept here. As promised you are back with a different flavour. I wouldn't have thought arranged marriage plus separation is the theme here.

So Arnav is a renowned pianist who had reached his zenith in his yesteryears (probably when he was still married to Khushi) and now he is finding it difficult to get audience for a concert. Loved that Sheetal seems to be a positive character.

Arnav Simmons & Khushi Gupta. An intercaste arranged marriage in Indian Scenario, hmm very interesting.

From the update it looks as if Arnav had seen and liked Khushi and his mom approached Khushi's father for her hand for Arnav? Was it a marriage of convenience for Khushi? Well her reply to her MIL that she didn't think she had to love him 'that way' looks interesting.

Was sad to know that Arnav had heard this convo between his mom and his wife. He probably got married as he had started to love Khushi but maybe Khushi was in it for the benefit of her loved ones. Did Arnav know this reason when he married Khushi?

So many questions in the first part!!!

Khushi is now 29 and Arnav 40. At what age did Khushi marry? Her dialogue with her MIL seems to be immediately after her wedding and at that time looks like she was much much younger. Did Khushi's reply sadden Arnav and did he start putting his heart in an impenetrable box that even Khushi's changing feelings couldn't give him courage to start accepting the fact that Khushi had started loving him?

Or was it someone or something else that threw a wedge in their wedded life?

Anyway Arnav's insecurities seem to have pushed Khushi further and both seem to be standing at two parallel shores with no idea when the twain shall meet.

Thanks for this lovely concept N. Only sad feeling is that this is not an SS but only a Five or a Six Shot.

Anyway we are ready to accept whatever you write for us.

All the Best! Waiting for the next shot when you are ready.

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