AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21 - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Thanks for updating it soon dear .

Wow such a Nice cute update ❤️. It was short one . Can't wait for ur next update

Thanks dear for appreciation, I know that this part is short... Actually I have decided to end th jealous plot in this part and In next part their will be some really Romantic AlaSmine scenes... Will update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

I was just chuckling reading the update. Aladdin bahut naughty hai. The shyari. U write beautiful shayaris 😉

I am glad that you like the part... Yes, no doubt Aladdin is notorious and love to tease His Nachidii... Thanks for the compliment...Writing Shayari gives the Stories a little muslim and urdu background... Which suits the story characters too..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

This was such a cute update
And yes!!!! Aladdin finally realized what Yasmine means to him...I hope he never leaves her again
Update the next part soon

Thanks dear, This realization came to him a little late but it came finally... Definitely not,after this mirza incident he will never even think of leaving his Nachidii alone...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Thank god!!!!!
It means i will stay alive and won't have to die!!!!😆😆

Yes dear, you will as stay alive at least till my stories are going...😉😉 BTW I will update next part by tonight or tomorrow... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Yes dear, you will as stay alive at least till my stories are going... 😉😉 BTW I will update next part by tonight or tomorrow... 😳

Great👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
😊😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 9

At Soheb's House

In the room

Yasmine pushed Aladdin away... And turned around probably hiding her blushing red hot cheeks... She composed herself and turned to face him but he was not there...

Yasmine - kalechor!!

Yasmine felt a hand wrapping around a bare waist... A sort of high voltage current passed through every part of her body... Aladdin brings his mouth near to her ear and whispered slowly...

Aladdin - Kitna gussa karti ho tum... Thakti nahi itna gussa karke...

Yasmine could feel his warn breath on her neck which no doubt was driving her crazy... But she possess a good control over her senses.. Aladdin noticed her expression and smiled..

Yasmine - Aladdin!! Hume Sone jaana hai..

Aladdin - Abhi toh koi ladaku bandariya jaise lad raha tha ab sone jaana hai...

Yasmine wished to kill him right at that moment but controlled herself

Yasmine - Aladdin chodo hume...

Yasmine punched him on his stomach...

Aladdin - ouch!!! Ouch!!! Itni jor se kon marta hai...

Yasmine smiled and was moving towards the bed...

Aladdin - yahi farak hai tum mein aur Shezaadi mein... Tum sahi keh rahi thi tum aur main dost ho sakte hai par mashooka aur mehboob nahi...

Yasmine stopped in midway...

Yasmine - matlab!!

Aladdin - matlab ki Shezaadi ko dekho kitni pyaari, masoom aur khoobsurat hai.. Unmein mashooka hone ki saari cheeze hai...

Yasmine clenched her fist, her anger was no peak...

Yasmine - shezaadi!! shezaadi!!! Bas yahi hai na tumhaare dil aur dimaag mein...

Aladdin - Haan!! Shayad issi ko pyaar kehte hai...

Yasmine - Pyaar nahi khwaab... Khwab kehte hai... Shezaadi sirf tumhaara ek khwaab hai...Tum uske sirf Rutbe se pyaar karte ho na... Tumhe shezaadi se pyaar na tha na hai... Aur na hog...

Aladdin was astonished to listen what her Nachidii think about him.. And his childhood love...

Aladdin - Nachidii!!! Kya keh rahi ho... Rutbe se pyaar... Main shezaadi ko bachpan se chahta hoon... Humaare beech pyaar hai jo kisi Ke Rutbe aur Shohrat par nahi badal sakta...
Yasmine made a face showing sge was least concern of his unrealistic talks...

Yasmine - Theek hai... Agar itna hi saccha pyaar hai.. Toh jao na apni pyaari shehzaadi ke paas.. Usi ke saath samy bitao... Mere saath yaha kyu aaye ho???

Yasmine decided to leave the room when Aladdin hold her hand behind...

Yasmine - chodo!! Aladdin... Mujhe jaane do... Mere yaha rukne ka koi fayada nahi...

Aladdin then asked a very odd question which confused Yasmine...

Aladdin - Tumhaara Asli naam kya hai Nachidi???

Aladdin voice shivered possibly due to anger...

Yasmine was confused and replied - yeh kaisa sawaal hai Aladdin... Sana naam hai mera bataya tha na...

Aladdin without taking second dragged her behind and pulled her close to him... His grip was hard and compelling... It was difficult to escape so all her efforts was in vein...

Yasmine - kya kar rahe ho Aladdin...

Aladdin- kitna jhoot bolengi shezaadi...

Yasmine eyes widened at the word shezaadi... How he come to know about the reality...

Yasmine - Shezaadi!!! Kon shezaadi... Hum koi jhoot nahi bol rahe...

Aladdin shook her with his both hands-kitna aur kab tak mujhse jhoot bologi...

Yasmine was still blanked but could not take risk to reveal the truth so she decided to stick to her lie...

Aladdin - aakhiri baar pooch raha hoon... Nachidi... Sach batao.. Varna.. Tum mera vo chehra dekhogi jo tumne apni zindagi mein soxha nahi hoga...

Yasmine - Aladdin meri baat suno.. Tum abhi gusse mein ho... Hum kal baat karte hai...

Aladdin - nahi Nachidii...mujhe sach janana hai vo bhi abhi...
Yasmine - kaisa sach.. Haan.. Iss shezaadi ke pyaar ne tumhe paagal kar diya hai..

Aladdin - haan... Sach kaha tumne paagal ho gaya tha mein jo ek anjaan kaalichorni par yakeen kiya... Usse apni zindagi ka sabse bada sach bataya ki mein hi kalavhor hoon aur kyu hoon... Aur usne mujhse apna raaz chupaya...

Yasmine cried seeing his anger and hatred for her and moved aback but he was not ready to leave her hand...This time his grip was even more powerful..

Yasmine - humara.. Haath chodo hume dard ho raha...
Aladdin - dard... Dard mujhe hua tha... Tumhaare baare mein sach jaankar...

Yasmine - hume nhai pata tum kya keh rahe ho...

Now Aladdin was furious and in rage mode...
Aladdin took a pocket knife and sliced the laces that held Yasmine outer black net covering on the top... Yasmine's hair were open lying on her shoulder...
Yasmine had never seen him in anger... She was shocked to see his bad side

Yasmine - Aladdin... Meri baat suno...

But this time Aladdin was too serious to focus on her talks... So he ignored her and get hold of her with his hands and banged her on the wall... He soon made her hairs to lie on right shoulder and looked at her left shoulder... There was a tattoo written in farsi which states - 'Yasmine, the princess of Baghdad'

Aladdin - Yeh nishaan...iske baare mein kya kehna hai tumhaara..

Yasmine know that there was no more scope of lying...

Yasmine - haan... Main hi hoon Shezaadi Yasmine!!!

Aladdin released his grip and moved back...

Aladdin - kyu... Kyu jhoot bola mujhse...

Yasmine - Aur kya karti... Ek Shezaadi ki zindagi mahal ke char deewaro mein khatam ho jaati hai... Par hume apni aacaam ki madad karni thi... Unki pareshaan iyo ko samajhna tha isliye... Hume yeh naatak karna pada...

Aladdin - mujhe sach toh bata sakti thi na...

Yasmine - nahi... Kya batati ki tumhe jis shezaadi se pyaar hai vo main hoon... Aur tumhe Yasmine se kaha shezaadi se pyaar hai na... Isliye tumhe nahi bataya... Socha jis din tumhe Yasmine se pyaar hoga uss din tumhe sab bata dungi...

Aladdin was still and silent for few seconds...

Aladdin - Nachidii.. Mera matlab sana.. Mera matlab Yasmine maine tumhe bachpan se Yasmine samajhkar chaha tha kabhi shezaadi samajhkar nahi... Phir laga ki shezaadi se acchi toh meri Nachidii hai... Aur aaj jab tumhaare samne ishaare mohabbat karna chahta tha toh yeh nishaan nazar aya...

Yasmine was silently listening to him...
Aladdin took out a box with a small metal ring not expensive but yet beautiful...

Aladdin - yeh angoothi apni Nachidii ke liye laya tha... Socha tha ki uske saamne aaj ishaare mohabbat karunga.. Par ab shayad lagta hai ki Shezaadi ko yeh angoothi kabool na ho...
Aladdin sat on his knees waiting for negative reply simply as No...

Yasmine eyes were filled with tears...she can't believe that she misunderstood his beautiful and pure love for his shezaadi and he was about to propose his Nachidii...

Yasmine - aur agar mujhe kabool ho toh...Haan main hoon Shezaadi par Tumhaare liye humesha tumhaari Nachidii rahoongi

Aladdin raised his head as it was an unexpected answer... Yasmine moved her left hand forwrd...

Aladdin - Yeh angoothi meri Nachidii ke liye...

Alladin made her wear the ring... Yasmine hugged him tightly, this time she put no bars on her true emotions...

Hope you like this part... I tried to plot the confession in the best way I can... You might be thinking how he come to know about the mark...Don't stress your mind I will tell it next part... Do like, comment and tell your opinion about the part... All comments bad or good are welcomed.. This time long part so long comments expected
Edited by 1973deepak - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow Wow Wow Dear what s burning hott intense confession ☺️❤️. I wish we will get something like this fir AlaSmine confession in the show too. Loveddd it . Plzzz update soon .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow!!!!!! Loved it👏😳 their confession and Aladdin knowing the real truth of yasmine👏👏 ...you have written it beautifully yr👏 you are amazing 👏
And plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
The confession is very beautiful. I can totally imagine the scenes. Hope in the show also they show such an emotional scene

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