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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 20
Maan nani showed geet mirror
I hope geet realizes n ask forgavness
She still have time want maaneet to sort their diff out
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Posted: 6 years ago
Sorry fr late reply.not keeping well.story has taken a sharp turn. Relevation abt maan being orpan. He is so emotional. Geet acts so irresponsibly. Her behavior has led her loose the most precious thing in her life. She insulted maan in front of all .Janki not going to forgive her.
It's not her fault. Never let your child 's'confusin into a big mistake. Rano never told geet the her letter being hide by her own father. She never cleard geets doubts. Now wen geet is being shown mirror by a rite person her all misunderstanding r cleared ND now she has left nothing to count.

From maan's gesture I can guess he loves geet a lot. She shud be given a chance.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teaser
Now maan seems to prepare. And janki taking reins in her hand.
Waiting for full update
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Posted: 6 years ago
awesome update
jaanki ne thapad mara geet ko yeh sab bakwas karrne ke liye
geet ke papa ne kaha usske letters maan tak pahuche hi nahi unnhone rakh liye the but geet nahi maan rahi
omggg maan ka accident all are worried
loved maan's naani kya aaina dikhaya geet ko woh koi hoor ki pari he kya jisseke liye maan trap kare maan khud no 1 bussiness man he woh chahe tho ladkiyo ki line laga de


nice teaser
sab geet ko ignore karr rahe he jese woh exsist hi nahi karrti aur jaanki ne lawyer ko bulaya he divorce ke liye

waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago


Awesome n wonderful update
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Posted: 6 years ago


Geet now understood who is Maan and got a reality check
Maan is back from hospital
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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 21






Janki went to her room only to find maan in sitting position he was talking to adi. Janki went toward him and first thing she did is to snatch phone from him and instruct adi that he is going to rest completely till he didn't get well.
A but mam
J- adi if I remember we don't hire employees that didn't take care thing for even two days.
A I get it mam. I'll take care of everything.
M- maa voh
Janki glared him causing him to shut up immediately
J- you better take rest.
Maan nodded in yes
M- i'm sorry
I didn't meant to hurt you.
I I
Janki sit beside him
J- I know you didn't meant to hurt us. But by hiding things you hurt maan.
M- maa
J- i'm your mother maan & you have no need to hide your problems from us.
Maan look downward knowing very well she is right
J- family is meant to be this only where all supports each other In hard times and share happiness in good time.
M- i'm sorry
J- I didn't need a sorry maan . I need a promise that after this you won't repeat your this stunt. I want you to share your problems with us.
Maan look at his mother before smiling finally and nodded in yes.
J- now take rest here.
Maan nodded in ok and janki get up placing a kiss on his forehead. She left to talk to Ram as they need to talk to maan. It's his right.
...
Nxt day


Ram made maan stay in his room. Firstly because of geet & second they were scared.
He won't hesitate to admit he fear losing his son. They knew very well he loves them more than anything or anyone but still what if he decide to leave with them?

Whole khurana family were more than tensed & scared somewhere.
...
Rajveer look at the head in anger
Ra- why they didn't replied till now?
I want to meet my son.
P- you said you will talk with them
H- i'm sorry but due to some mishap we need to delay the matter.
Ra- what happened?
H- your son meet with an accident yesterday night.
Causing both of them to look at her scared .
P- what happened with him?
Is he fine? I want to meet my son now!

Head look at them angrily
H- i'm sorry but you need to wait.
He is fine now. And why are you scared for him so suddenly?
You didn't thought about him when you left him alone to die..
Ra- HOW DARE YOU!
YOU KNOW I CAN SUE YOU FOR TALKING BULLSHIT.
P- Raj please I want to meet my son.
Ra- we are going to meet hik today itself.
I don't need your help anymore. Just few hours and i'll find where he is .
Rajveer hold hand of pallavi & left from their making a few call to find about the family who adopted their son.

...

A whole day passed but geet didn't able to get courage to go & meet him. She fid try few times but every time her own words hunt her back. Nakul come only to meet her as he passed her food. Geet felt ashamed when even he looks at her angrily.
She come to know that he is back. She thought that she will ask forgiveness when he will come in their room but that never happen . Whole night he didn't come back to their room.
She thought atleast she should ask for forgiveness for insulting him in front of guest. She tried to call her parents also but they never picked up her calls.
She can't stay inside she have to go outside. She thought but every time her courage left her .
Soon she hear knock on door. Nakul was there
N- maaji is calling you outside.
Geet nodded and followed him.
...
Savitri & Rohini was waiting for geet to come they need to talk to her about children. Soon they saw her coming after nakul.
Geet stand their as they both look at her with hateful gaze.
S- I didn't call you here for just keep standing like this. Rohini told me that you didn't want to get married and secondly you want to study further.
Geet nodded in yes
S- we were not aware that you don't want to get married otherwise we have never chosen you for my grandson.
Savitri said now felling angry at her & on herself too.
S- maan told us that you want divorce. It's fine than stay here until you deliver babies after that you are free to go. Yash have talked to lawyer already and soon you get divorce papers in your hand.
Geet look at her stunned.
S- you may go now.
Geet unable to form a single word before her and turned to leave when savitri stopped her for a moment.

S- don't think i'm doing this because I feel something for you. You didn't do good by dragging maan in all this. You know we want something for my grandson who help him to open up further but what you did to him i'll never forget. But it's not your fault it's mine fault that I choose someone like you for him.
Rohini place her hand on savitri shoulder composing her before she did something in anger as now her emotion taken over her practical side.

S- just never come before him. You know what?
You are still here because he want his children safe. I hope you can do this and I'll take care of your future expenses.
Geet look at savitri dumbfounded. She never raised her voice on her but today hatred in her eyes for geet was something she didn't even get what she did so wrong?
Agree she accused him for wrong reasons and did embarrass him but for this so much hatred?

...

Maan look at his parents as they made their way inside room. He look serious wht happened suddenly maan wonder.
R- we want to talk to you maan.
M- ji papa
Anything serious?
If it's about geet then
J- it is not about geet maan.
It something you need to know. It's your right to know.
M- kya hua maa
R- I it's a about y yoo ur Biological p parents

Janki held Ram arm tightly as she fear about losing him & so was Ram. But it's his right if he wants to
Maan his eyes turned cold suddenly scaring both of them.

M- w what about them?
R- they want to meet you. They are here to take you back. We too come to know about it yesterday.
But then

His eyes soften as janki come toward him holding his hand
J- we just want to let you know as its your right.
We w ee
M- do you both want me to go with them?
R- no maan!
You are our son & we can't share you with anyone.
It's just if you want to meet them or want t to g iv
His voice fumbled as he continues

M- I don't want to meet them.
He state firmly
M- they don't matter for me. Neither I want to know why they left me, nor i'm interested to know their name . I have a family and parents .
Janki & Ram hug him in order to console him & themselves.
R- still maan if you want
M- no dad I don't want to meet them.
He state firmly
M- they don't matter for me but you both do.
...

J- kaka please move maan belonging to the upper master bedroom.
Y- maa papers are ready. We will get them by tomorrow.
J- good.
Janki nodded

Geet watch the scene in front of her scared. Janki never looked toward her and maan he was nowhere in sight. But she got to know divorce papers are ready.

She don't know what to feel happy or sad?
Happy because she is going to achieve something that she always dream of.
Sad because she have no one by her side.

...


NXT - Meeting


UPDATE DEPENDS ON COMMENTS. IF I GET LOW RESPONSE I'LL MAKE UPDATE PRIVATE

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome part...
Maan don't want to meet his biological parents...
Want to know why Maan's real parents left him...
About Geet i think she is dumb...
Waiting for more...
Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
nice update
it looks like geet is slowly realising her mistake
loved maan reply to his parents
lets see what happen next
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Posted: 6 years ago
I'm not 1st😆😃
Edited by Keepdreaming - 6 years ago

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