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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

First things first...I love the songs you choose to depict the story...😊

Brilliant choice...👏

Maan is in full Romeo mode...Haha...Love this version of Maan...😆

How all his restlessness flew away with just her glimpse was so dreamy...

Geet becomes a kid along with kids...maybe that is what attracted Maan the most about her...

her childishness and laughter bring about a smile on others...she is a sweetheart...

If only Maan would have seen or followed them then he would have realized that she lives in his neighborhood itself...haha...it would have caused him less trouble(that we saw in the next part) hehe

Geet is so fun...loved how she teased Aayu on the seesaw...Well, I do the same with my nephew and so I can totally relate to her...hehe

obviously, Maan is not able to sleep...full lover boy...

Loved his determination to find out her name...😳

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

This is so unique

These OS are related but can read individual too

So connected yet can read as one shot

You are amazing writer

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Love the every song you using on them

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi there!! thanks for sharing this!

tremendous OS! superbly written!

Liked Maan's reaction when he saw her for the first time! lovely song! he is smitten with her and admires her!

hope he soon gets to know her name!

Thank you dear😊

He gets to know her name in the next part... Which is "Raste me hai... Uska ghar!! "

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: taahir004
Just came across your third story already in just few minutes
wow you certainly on a roll

😆

These are already written. That's why speedy updates 😉😊

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: taahir004
Beautiful OS

He cannot stay away from the park as her mischievousness
has attracted him

He is in love ...after all😆

Love makes u do crazy things.

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Oh it's part of raste mein

Yes 😊

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Endgame
Lovely one
Fallen for her at first sight itself
Maan gone now
He doesn't even know her name

He will know her name in next part... Do read it if u want to know more.. 😉😊

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Paheli nazar ka pyaar
He is following her , wonder if she noticed
He is in Romeo mood which is cute not scary
Jaha piya waha mein 😳

Geet ka Didaar ho gaya... Maan ko pyar ho gaya na. . Isiliye😉😆