ShraMan SS: Being Loved - Chapter 14 - Link updated - Page 24 - Page 17

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_365

If only feels!!

When you don't plan or plot rather choose to work on the issues. This is how it should be.

Word! I agree!

I never thought Ramnath Malhotra would act like a daily soap saas or take a cliche bollywood Ameer Baap route by throwing blank cheque or feeding lies to his son.
His love for Shravan had to precede over his hatred for Nimmo or his own fears! Alas!

Same, you know during the whole plane crash episodes and after, esp when he had asked Suman her opinion, I was sure that he will be playing cupid between them...So naive, we were...

Shravan getting those vibes, the changed dynamics between his two most favourite people was so natural, yet they never showed it.
It was always Shravan looking at one of them at a time, though he could have easily looked at the two simultaneously.
The setup of the show was such. Otherwise, what's the point of showing a family- friends setup (except that it helped Preekar) and Ramnath-Sumo interaction's since ep.1.
He should have noticed something was a miss. Alas!

He should have, but Ramnaath had always been so smart and Shravan had been so invested in his own emotions that it could have happened, but yes, I agree, Shravan should have at least noticed something...
Even in most of the fictions I have read...it's about the phases.
One phase will be about ShraMan than the next will be about Ramnath or the vice-versa.
It's such a pleasant change to read about Nimmo-Ramnath-Sumo in the same chapter from Shravan's perspective. We don't think in tracks.

I glad you think so...

A/n... holi episode can't agree more...he was disappointed with himself and afraid for his son.
He knew the impact of his discussion - No Nirmala in Shravan's life. And than ruining the happiness of his son is so...

Very nice update.

Thank you for the comment and thank you for liking it so much! 😳

Thanks for the p.m.


In blue... 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

The fluff lover in me has some demands. Can we get a hug like a really tight bone crushing hug? And I really want to read a confession from you, I have never read one, I can only imagine how dreamy that will be. *heart eyes*


I will see what can be done! 😳
AHhh, God, don't expect too much... ☺️ I am angst lover, I can't promise you that much mushy, fluffy confessions...And anyway, bhi kafi time hai confession ke liye...😆


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Posted: 6 years ago
A/N:- I am trying to finish the writing the chapter but writing a party scene is more difficult than I expected. Please be patient with me... As always, I am thankful to all of you who are interested and are waiting for the next update... Thank you .. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Take your time!
Waiting!😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally, done writing the chapter, would be updating in an hour or so...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
Add/send buddy request to this account if you want me to send you a PM whenever I update! 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey!

Amazing update!
Filled with emotions and cute banters 😃
And So Shramanish!😳

First of all This Ramnath.. I am in a dilemma whether I should be happy that instead of acting impulsively and trying to seperate them.. he is trying to understand their relationship.
But like this asking an outsider to judge their relationship without their knowledge and consent. Doesn't go well with me.
Though I have a feeling for the greater good... this might turn out well.

Shraman scenes in the party are lovely 😳
And I quite like Jhanvi.
She seems quite mature.

Shravan doesn't want to provide clarifications on their alleged relationship status 🤣
Sumo ab toh catch the hints.😆

Sumo staying at MM... interesting... Ramnath asking her to say ...hmmm ... I really want to like him suddenly😆
Now you stay good.. ok Ramu 😛😆

Aww! Pushkar style Slumber party 😆
Shraman are left alone 😳
Their scene is beautiful!
That letting him help!❤️

I really like how their relationship is
developing in this story.
Really looking forward to next one!
Loved reading this one!

Do continue soon

Apoorva

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: akrocks77

Hey!

Amazing update!
Filled with emotions and cute banters 😃
And So Shramanish!😳

First of all This Ramnath.. I am in a dilemma whether I should be happy that instead of acting impulsively and trying to seperate them.. he is trying to understand their relationship.
But like this asking an outsider to judge their relationship without their knowledge and consent. Doesn't go well with me.
Though I have a feeling for the greater good... this might turn out well.

Shraman scenes in the party are lovely 😳
And I quite like Jhanvi.
She seems quite mature.

Shravan doesn't want to provide clarifications on their alleged relationship status 🤣
Sumo ab toh catch the hints.😆

Sumo staying at MM... interesting... Ramnath asking her to say ...hmmm ... I really want to like him suddenly😆
Now you stay good.. ok Ramu 😛😆

Aww! Pushkar style Slumber party 😆
Shraman are left alone 😳
Their scene is beautiful!
That letting him help!❤️

I really like how their relationship is
developing in this story.
Really looking forward to next one!
Loved reading this one!

Do continue soon

Apoorva


Thank you, Apoorva... I am so glad to hear that you found the update of your liking I was and am worried about this one... I am glad that you approved... 😳

Ramnaath is confused himself with what to do. But let's see what he does, I am sure he has something in his mind...

Haha, yes, he even said 'thank you' and smiled... The man is ready already with the rose and the latter, he just needs a hint from the other side... 😆

Yes, slow but steady enough, I am liking developing their relationships like how we would have loved to see...
Thank you, Apoorva... 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Suman Tiwari you stupid, stupid girl! How many more hints do you need?!!! Oh the way you write them, I fall in love all over again...❤️

But I do need ShraMan moments next time!!!

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