ShraMan SS: Being Loved - Chapter 14 - Link updated - Page 24

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

I made the big mistake of reading through the update and I don't know what it is but I am missing EDKV so much aaj kaal, it hurts and now I read "I know for that fact she won't be that kind of mother for her children."
And I want to cry. Shravan Malhotra was so pure and his love for us Sumo was so understated, why did they ruin it? How can you ruin something like this?
I'll come back when I'll have read the whole update.
I realized that I never asked you what's your name! I would love to discuss the show with you <3

Edited by KitkitMkb - 7 years ago

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Aur.HajnalPM

@Aur.HajnalPM

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Add/send buddy request to this account if you want me to send you a PM whenever there is an update! 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
I made the big mistake of reading through the update and I don't know what it is but I am missing EDKV so much aaj kaal, it hurts and now I read "I know for that fact she won't be that kind of mother for her children."
And I want to cry. Shravan Malhotra was so pure and his love for us Sumo was so understated, why did they ruin it? How can you ruin something like this?
I'll come back when I'll have read the whole update.
I realized that I never asked you what's your name! I would love to discuss the show with you <3

Same...I have been thinking about Shravan these days too, and... 🥺

@bold:- Word, I agree and I don't know. I don't know how could they change it into what it was shown, especially in the last chunk of episodes...I personally feel wronged and bitter about it, and I know, it really feels like a real heartbreak, a heartbreak we all are trying so hard to forget about but we can't move on from...

Haha, no worries, I don't know your name so it's only fair... Name is Seher now you have to tell me yours. And about the discussion, anytime, you want! 🤗

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Hey!!

Beautiful Update!!

I was eagerly waiting for this one.

Shravan missing Nirmala cause of Kamini and Pushkar's bond🥺

Shravan's sibling!! Sigh!...I always wanted him to have one.

Ramnath's outburst ...he is surely digging up his own grave by all this.

Uff!! I want this scene and these dialogues with Ramnath in the show.

That scene was wonderfully written...I could literally visualize it all.

Make her Worthy ...Now what's cooking in this man's mind??

Loved reading it.

Do continue soon.

Apoorva

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Beautiful update.

Shravan missing his mim, feeling guilty fir that. Thinking he us disrespecting his father. Hus cinfessconti hus father. An astute man who realized what's un hua sins heart.

I like 4his version, if he works towards making his son happy by ensuring sumo stays by his side.

Hope to read the next update soon.

Thanks for the pm

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

If only feels!!

When you don't plan or plot rather choose to work on the issues. This is how it should be.

I never thought Ramnath Malhotra would act like a daily soap saas or take a cliche bollywood Ameer Baap route by throwing blank cheque or feeding lies to his son.

His love for Shravan had to precede over his hatred for Nimmo or his own fears! Alas!

Shravan getting those vibes, the changed dynamics between his two most favourite people was so natural, yet they never showed it.

It was always Shravan looking at one of them at a time, though he could have easily looked at the two simultaneously.

The setup of the show was such. Otherwise what's the point of showing a family- friends setup (except that it helped Preekar) and Ramnath-Sumo interaction's since ep.1.

He should have noticed something was a miss. Alas!

Even in most of the fictions I have read...it's about the phases.

One phase will be about ShraMan than the next will be about Ramnath or the vice-versa.

It's such a pleasant change to read about Nimmo-Ramnath-Sumo in the same chapter from Shravan's perspective. We don't think in tracks.

A/n... holi episode can't agree more...he was disappointed with himself and afraid for his son.

He knew the impact of his discussion - No Nirmala in Shravan's life. And than ruining the happiness of his son is so...

Very nice update.

Thanks for the p.m.

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago

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Periwinkel_98

@Periwinkel_98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

that was one awesome update...loved it very much.

hey I'm new here just came across your amazing SS and it kept me hooked...totally love it...

Do continue as soon as u can...waiting to read more...😊

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

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Posted: 6 years ago

#158

For the love of a beautiful story😳

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 6 years ago

#159

The fluff lover in me has some demands. Can we get a hug like a really tight bone crushing hug? And I really want to read a confession from you, I have never read one, I can only imagine how dreamy that will be. *heart eyes*