REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 59

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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago

Part 35

 

M-But not just the one my friend can offer, purely based on your merit just coz he is my friend?

 

G-I will manage

 

M-You are avoiding the question

 

She looks down concentrating on the notebook

 

Maan stares at her for few moments

 

Then puts the ice-cream on the table where she was sitting

 

M- Fine do whatever you want. Go to Africa; live on ants or zebras...see if I care

 

G- [She clicks her tongue] Akhil!...emmm...Maan...

 

Maan stomps away ignoring her simmering with anger

 

She called him Akhil! He would never be anything close to a person like him

 

G-Maan! Maan!!

 

He slams the door shut of his room and locks it

 

Geet kya kare

 

Uthi fridge mein rakha le jaake ice cream...thoda taste bhi kar liya

 

Maan aaya 15-20 min baad bahar all changed into comfy workout clothes

 

M-I am going out for a while

 

He says to her and then goes out for a jog

 

G- Listen

 

M-What?

 

G-Any preference for dinner? Phir natak karoge

 

M-make whatever you want. I don't order people around

 

G-Tinda?

 

He shrugs

 

M-Sure

 

G-The ice cream is just yumm! Perfect hai...maine thoda khaya. Thanks

 

M-Whatever. Anything else?

 

M-Tum abhi khaoge yaa dinner ke baad doon?

 

M-I'll help myself

 

G-By the way...can I join you? Mujhe yahan akele andhere mein darr lagta hai

 

M-You jog?

 

G-I can start

 

M-ok... I'll wait go change

 

G-Isnt' this ok?

 

M-You need to be in loose comfortable clothes and shoes

 

G-My clothes are comfy and I just have flip flops and sandals

 

M-Alright, we'll go for walk instead then, come let's go

 

G-Come. Keep my mobile in your pocket, will you?

 

Maan keeps her mobile in his pocket

 

They go out

 

This time he walks a wide circle around the house

 

G-You had the lunch?

 

M-Yeah thanks for it, it was really good...everyone liked it a lot and oh! There was request for...kadi chawal and pulao too

 

G-o baba ye kisne kaha?

 

M-You don't have to make it. Oh! You know the guy from the sales, Shrenik?

 

Geet shrugs

 

M- You don't know him?

 

G-No...must be new

 

M-He's whiz... nice guy...

 

G-oh

 

M-And boss misses his slave... couldn't find his pen this morning under al the clutter on the table

 

Geet chup

 

M- So I gave him mine. He lost mine too

 

G- Hmm I guess he will learn.

 

M-He better, I like the pens I buy

 

G-Yeah he will learn...time heals every wound

 

M- He isn't wounded, just messy

 

G-You don't know him for 21 yrs ...I do

 

M-Yeah... he pushes you around, hurts you physically, emotionally...could have been doing that for the past 21yrs...I don't know I haven't known you two that long...and you are still sweet on him... you are right, I never can understand and truthfully I don't want to either

The story becomes more interesting

Geet still feel sad for akhil ... she was with him for long so it will take time for her to stop thinking about him 

Nice update..

Nice update.

Arrey yaar do something about Geet please. I seriously wanna kill Akhil and knock some sense in Geet. Poor Maan, bechara dikhta hi nahin isse