Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum - Part 8 INCOMPLETE - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

A part of a scene I had penned down for Chapter 8. Since I've already given the subplots, I thought I'd share this little bit as well.😳


She stared at the mangal sutra that adorned his wrist in wonderment. He had severed all ties between them on his own accord. What purpose did it serve to exhibit a remnant of their broken relationship other than eliciting painful memories? She peered into the depth of his eyes puzzled by the disarray in his emotions.

Vidhaan had observed the entire exchange between his brother and Dhani from a distance. He had always sensed a silent attraction between the two, but it was now evident to him that they were head over heels in love. Dhani's anger was justified, but he couldn't watch his little brother yearn for her love every second of every day either.



Aww seeing Mangalsutra on the wrist would be very emotional for Dhani and soften her stance a little towards Viplav 😉 And Vidhaan observing them is 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

<font size="3">Part Nine:</font>



  • <font size="3">Dhani takes Suvarna and Rajlaxmi into confidence about her fear. They ease her anxiety and encourage her to take a pregnancy test to confirm her suspicion. They promise to support her regardless of the outcome. Dhani's test results are positive. Highlight Dhani's conflicting emotions - joy, fear, and apprehension.</font>

  • <font size="3">Raj meets Munna who confirms the happenings of that day. Dhani had written a letter that was delivered to Ramdeen Kaka to give to Viplav, but was taken by Dashrat.</font>

  • <font size="3">Viplav meets Dhulari and Indrani at their house and questions them about the letter. Dhulari expresses her disappointment in Viplav.</font>

  • <font size="3"><font face="Helvetica"></font><font face="Helvetica">Vidhaan finally discloses to Viplav why he left their home all those years ago. Vidhaan confirms what Dhani had said about his grandfather five years ago. He tells Viplav of his mother's inappropriate relationship with his grandfather. Dadi comes to Mumbai and confesses to all of their Dada's wrongdoings with their mother's support andinvolvement. Viplav weeps at the declaration made by Vidhaan and Dadi about their very own family. He recalls how he had treated Dhani and how he left her when she needed him the most. He loathes himself for being so weak and falling prey to the lies around him.</font></font>

  • <font size="3">He apologizes to Dhani for his mistakes and begs for one more chance to make things right by her and their daughter. He fills her part with vermillion and ties a diamond manga sutra around her neck. They reunite and Dhani shyly tells him of her pregnancy. Viplav is over the moon! He promises to be the best husband and father in the world to both their children. End story with kiss.</font>



Finally Vidhaan and Raj helped Viplav out iof bubble and also made Dadi confess!! can imagine Viplavs loathe 😕
Ending plot was so sweet! Typical Vidha 😳
Thanks Dazz 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda


Finally Vidhaan and Raj helped Viplav out iof bubble and also made Dadi confess!! can imagine Viplavs loathe 😕
Ending plot was so sweet! Typical Vidha 😳
Thanks Dazz 👏


Thank you for allowing me to entertain you with my incomplete story, Avani. You've been my biggest supporter which honestly means a lot. 🤗 Stay tuned for the next chapter which is the epilogue. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~



Thank you for allowing me to entertain you with my incomplete story, Avani. You've been my biggest supporter which honestly means a lot.🤗 Stay tuned for the next chapter which is the epilogue.😉


Yay waiting for the epilogue 👏
All thanks to you Dazz 🤗 for such an endearing story from the point where IKRS and our favourite couple were torn apart never to be seen together again :(

Edited by AvaniVrinda - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Epilogue:

  • Viplav has Dada Ji, Kanak, and Tripuari all arrested on charges of embezzlement, extortion, arson, and attempted murder. All three are sentenced to life imprisonment.
  • Vidhaan brings Dadi and his father to Mumbai to live with him away from the memories of Benares.
  • Viplav and Dhani purchase an apartment in the same condominium building as Vidhaan.
  • Suvarna adopts a baby boy and makes the decision to be a single mother. She explains to Abhi that she's willing to be his best friend, but not to expect any more from her.
  • Happiness at 5th month of pregnancy. Vidhaan does Dhani's check up.
  • Happiness at 7th month of pregnancy. Write romantic scene between Viplav and Dhani.
  • Birth of Vaani Tripathi
  • Viplav, Dhani, Vidha, and Vaani are on vacation in London. Viplav is the doting father to two girls as Dhani looks on proud. Viplav sees Dhani staring at them from a distance and winks at her. She laughs and joins them as they roam together on Oxford Street in the light snow enjoying the Christmas atmosphere.
  • End chapter with the song Tum Se Hi (Jab We Met).
Edited by ~DaZZ|ing~ - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

<font size="4">Epilogue:</font>



  • <font size="3">Viplav has Dada Ji, Kanak, and Tripuari all arrested on charges of embezzlement, extortion, arson, and attempted murder. All three are sentenced to life imprisonment.</font>

  • <font size="3">Vidhaan brings Dadi and his father to Mumbai to live with him away from the memories of Benares.</font>

  • <font size="3">Viplav and Dhani purchase an apartment in the same condominium building as Vidhaan.</font>

  • <font size="3">Suvarna adopts a baby boy and makes the decision to be a single mother. She explains to Abhi that she's willing to be his best friend, but not to expect any more from her.</font>

  • <font size="3">Happiness at 5th month of pregnancy. Vidhaan does Dhani's check up.</font>

  • <font size="3">Happiness at 7th month of pregnancy. Write romantic scene between Viplav and Dhani.</font>

  • <font size="3">Birth of Vaani Tripathi</font>

  • <font size="3">Viplav, Dhani, Vidha, and Vaani are on vacation in London. Viplav is the doting father to two girls as Dhani looks on proud. Viplav sees Dhani staring at them from a distance and winks at her. She laughs and joins them as they roam together on Oxford Street in the light snow enjoying the Christmas atmosphere.</font>

  • <font size="3">End chapter with the song Tum Se Hi (Jab We Met).</font>



Aww another girl Vaani 😉 Nice name again portmanteau of Viplav Dhani 😳 And London !! Mishal fav place you chose Dazz 😃
Suvarna adopting and not accepting Abhi's is understandable but sad that his love would be incomplete!
Even i had thought once Viplav knows about his family he will buy a place in the same apartment !!
Thanks Dazz!!
PS : Even with just the subplots this post got one of the highest views in short time 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda


Aww another girl Vaani 😉 Nice name again portmanteau of Viplav Dhani 😳 And London !! Mishal fav place you chose Dazz 😃
Suvarna adopting and not accepting Abhi's is understandable but sad that his love would be incomplete!
Even i had thought once Viplav knows about his family he will buy a place in the same apartment !!
Thanks Dazz!!
PS : Even with just the subplots this post got one of the highest views in short time 👏


You're welcome, Avani! 🤗 Occasionally some love stories are incomplete and for the better. Suvarna and Abhi's scenario is the same because I didn't feel Suvarna was capable of falling in love again a third time. Haha, was it that obvious that Viplav would relocate in the same building? 😉 I also forgot to include in the epilogue the inauguration of Mahi's second boutique - Mahi T Couture in South Mumbai. Dhani was to take charge of that boutique with a new staff while Mahi, Suvarna, and Rajlaxmi managed the original store. Did I get that many views? ☺️ I wish our silent readers would contribute to our forum to increase the activity here. Silent readers, are you listening? 😛

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