Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum - Part 8 INCOMPLETE - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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<font size="2">Viplav comes to thank Dhani when she suddenly rushes towards the bathroom by a sudden bout of nausea. Viplav holds Dhani's hair back as she vomits and soothes her back. She looks up horrified at Viplav realizing that she's pregnant!</font>
I blushed😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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DAZZ, thanks for this thread.🤗
I haven't read all the chapters and started with this one. Your writing is so good, I will have to go back and read all chapters.
You beautifully brought Viplav's elder brother in the story and I love all the details.. the food, menu, you come up with unqiue veggie items..
Vidhaan, Mahi, Madhav.. and then Vip, Dhani and vidhaa.. I visualized your story...

So, Dhani is preganant, again?? I better read previous chapters.. Awesome, DAZZ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda


Loved the progress of the story you had planned!!I Had guessed about Dhani being pregnant 😳 But would she inform Viplav??
Thanks again Dazz 🤗


Haha, that was obvious huh? 😆 You'll have to wait for the next chapter's subplot to see if she will or if she won't. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: zajedno

<font size="2">Viplav comes to thank Dhani when she suddenly rushes towards the bathroom by a sudden bout of nausea. Viplav holds Dhani's hair back as she vomits and soothes her back. She looks up horrified at Viplav realizing that she's pregnant!</font>
I blushed😳


I had thought of a beautiful scene at that time with the intention of ending Chapter 8 with a cliffhanger. I wish I still had the inspiration to write. 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: amivp

DAZZ, thanks for this thread.🤗

I haven't read all the chapters and started with this one. Your writing is so good, I will have to go back and read all chapters.
You beautifully brought Viplav's elder brother in the story and I love all the details.. the food, menu, you come up with unqiue veggie items..
Vidhaan, Mahi, Madhav.. and then Vip, Dhani and vidhaa.. I visualized your story...

So, Dhani is preganant, again?? I better read previous chapters.. Awesome, DAZZ...


Welcome to Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum, Ami! 🤗 I hope you're able to enjoy this story once you start from the beginning. 😳 I actually did a lot of research on good restaurants in Mumbai to come up with that menu. 😆 Yes, Dhani is pregnant once again and hasn't anticipated this pregnancy even in her wildest dreams. 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~



Haha, that was obvious huh?😆 You'll have to wait for the next chapter's subplot to see if she will or if she won't.😉


And when will you reveal that subplot Dazz 😳 Waiting... 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~



Welcome to Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum, Ami!🤗 I hope you're able to enjoy this story once you start from the beginning.😳 I actually did a lot of research on good restaurants in Mumbai to come up with that menu.😆 Yes, Dhani is pregnant once again and hasn't anticipated this pregnancy even in her wildest dreams.😉


I second Ami !! The detailing make it much more endearing apart from the characters we loved 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~


I had thought of a beautiful scene at that time with the intention of ending Chapter 8 with a cliffhanger. I wish I still had the inspiration to write. 😆

please find inspiration and write something for all of us who love your writing.
P.S. I have a feeling of awakening a forum, right?😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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A part of a scene I had penned down for Chapter 8. Since I've already given the subplots, I thought I'd share this little bit as well. 😳

She stared at the mangal sutra that adorned his wrist in wonderment. He had severed all ties between them on his own accord. What purpose did it serve to exhibit a remnant of their broken relationship other than eliciting painful memories? She peered into the depth of his eyes puzzled by the disarray in his emotions.

Vidhaan had observed the entire exchange between his brother and Dhani from a distance. He had always sensed a silent attraction between the two, but it was now evident to him that they were head over heels in love. Dhani's anger was justified, but he couldn't watch his little brother yearn for her love every second of every day either.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part Nine:

  • Dhani takes Suvarna and Rajlaxmi into confidence about her fear. They ease her anxiety and encourage her to take a pregnancy test to confirm her suspicion. They promise to support her regardless of the outcome. Dhani's test results are positive. Highlight Dhani's conflicting emotions - joy, fear, and apprehension.
  • Raj meets Munna who confirms the happenings of that day. Dhani had written a letter that was delivered to Ramdeen Kaka to give to Viplav, but was taken by Dashrat.
  • Viplav meets Dhulari and Indrani at their house and questions them about the letter. Dhulari expresses her disappointment in Viplav.
  • Vidhaan finally discloses to Viplav why he left their home all those years ago. Vidhaan confirms what Dhani had said about his grandfather five years ago. He tells Viplav of his mother's inappropriate relationship with his grandfather. Dadi comes to Mumbai and confesses to all of their Dada's wrongdoings with their mother's support and involvement. Viplav weeps at the declaration made by Vidhaan and Dadi about their very own family. He recalls how he had treated Dhani and how he left her when she needed him the most. He loathes himself for being so weak and falling prey to the lies around him.
  • He apologizes to Dhani for his mistakes and begs for one more chance to make things right by her and their daughter. He fills her part with vermillion and ties a diamond manga sutra around her neck. They reunite and Dhani shyly tells him of her pregnancy. Viplav is over the moon! He promises to be the best husband and father in the world to both their children. End story with kiss.

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