Preeran(The Untold Love Story)

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Character Sketch:
Luthra family:



Bani Luthra: Elder Of Luthra Family.
Mother Of Mahesh Luthra. A loving Granny And a Positive Character.



Mahesh Luthra:Father Of Karan,Rishab and Ruchika.Loves His Wife So Much.Cute Bonding With His Children's.



Rakhi Luthra:Mahesh's Wife And Mother Of Karan,Rishab and Ruchika. Her Only Desire Is to Get her Sons Married.Secretly Desires for Preeta To be One Of Her Daughter-in-law.



Kareena Luthra:Mahesh's Widowed Sister,
Also Lives In Luthra Mansion.Hates Preeta And Shrishti.Can Go To Any Extent To Protect Her Family.



Rishab Luthra:Elder Son Of Mahesh And Rakhi.Renowned Businessman Man. Responsible and Caring Among All The Siblings.



Karan Luthra:Youngest Son Of Mahesh And Rakhi.Famous Cricketer. Flirtious Nature. Spoilt Brat Of The family.Loves his Brother More Than His Life.



Ruchika Luthra: Mahesh's And Rakhi's Daughter.Smallest Of All the Siblings.The Fashionista.Studying in London.



Kritika Luthra:Kareena Luthra daughter.
Simple,sweet,Ambitious and Innocent Of All.Pampered By Karan And Rishab.



Sameer Luthra: Son Of Rakhi's Sister Who Died In An Accident.Later Adopted By Mahesh And Rakhi.Karan And Rishab Take Him As Thier Own Brother.
Arora Family:



Daljeet Arora :Elder Of Arora Family.Loves Her Daughter-in Law So Much.Helps Her Both Grand Daughter Whenever Are In Trouble.



Sarla Arora: Mother Of Preeta And Shristi. Although loves Both The Daughters But Maintains Love-Hate Relation With Shristi Because Of Her Antics.



Janki:Servant Of Arora's But Treated Like Member Of Family.Loves Preeta And Shrishti As Her Own Children.



Preeta Arora:Elder Daughter Of Sarla. Sweet,simple,Responsible girl Who Dreams To Give Her Family All Happiness They Deserve.



Shrishti Arora:Smallest Daughter Of Sarla.
Childish,Carefree But Also Shows Maturity When Needed.Apple Of Her Sister's Eyes.
Other Characters:
Sanjana Khurana:Friend Of Kareena Luthra. Wants Her Daughter To Get Married In Luthra Family.



Sherlin Khurana: Daughter Of Sanjana Khurana.Greedy,egoistic and Selfish person Who sees Only Self Benefit.Helping Her Boyfriend In Destroying Luthra's.



Prithvi Malhotra:Enemy Of Luthra Family.psycopath,Greedy,Evil Minded Person And Sherlin's Boyfriend. Is Planning To Marry Preeta For Destroying The Luthra's.



Arushi Singhania:Preeta's Close Friend And A Divorcee.Looking For A Job.Wants to Be A self Made Woman.Ambitious Girl With Many Dreams.



Sahil And Samar Singhania:Twin Brothers Of Arushi. Looks Exact Same.People Always Gets Confused Between These Two.Doctors By Profession.Works In Same Hospital As Preeta.



Karanveer Singh: Rishab Friend And Business Partner Of Sherlin's Father Who had a Secret Crush On Sherlin.




Akshay:Kritika's fianc. A psychopath who promotes domestic violence and abuse.[/SIZE][SIZE=3][FONT=Arial][/FONT]

part 1




The story begins from Preeta And Prithvi Alliance Being Fixed And Rishab and Sherlin are engaged.
Preeta Enters The Luthra Mansion To Give The Good News...
Preeta:Hello Rakhi Aunty, Mujhe Aap Sab Ko Kuch Kehna Hai Infact Ek Good News Deni Hai.
Rakhi:Aaj Toh Bade Khush Lag Rahe Ho Puttar Jii. Bataao bataao Kya Good News Hai.
Preeta:Actually Aunty Mera Rishta Pakka Hogaya Hai Prithvi Ji Se Or Kal Mera Roka Hai.
Altough Rakhi Was Sad Thinking Preeta Will Not Be Her Daughter In Law But Was Happy For Her.She Smiled And Hugged Preeta.
Rakhi:Puttar Ji Tune Toh Bohot Achi khush Khabri Sunaadi Aaj Toh Meetha Banta Hai.
Rakhi Called Everybody Downstairs To Give This News.
Mahesh:Kya Baat Hai Rakhi Jii Bohot Khush Lag Rahi Hai.
Rakhi:Baat hi Kuch aisi Hai.Hamari Preeta Ka Kal Roka Hai.Mujhe Toh Khush Hona Hi Tha.
Karan And Rishab Was Shocked To Know This.Altough Karan Was Aware Of Preeta Alliance is Being Fixed But Rishab Was Clueless About It.
Rishab(POV):Preeta Ji Ka Roka!!!Aise Kaise Hosakta Hai.Maine To Unse Apne Dil Ki Baat Kabhi Nahi Kahi Hai.Ab Shayad Bohot Der Ho Chuki Hai
Rishab:Preeta Ji Aapka Roka Hai.Aise Achanak???Mera Matlab Hai Ki Yeh Sab Aapki Marzi Se Ho Raha Hai Na.
Preeta:Jii Rishab Jii.Prithvi Ji Bohot Ache Hai Or Maa Ko Bhi Bohot Pasand Hai.Maa Ki Khushi Mein Hi Meri Khushi Hai.
Karan(POV):Pata Nahi Sarla Aunty Ko Woh Bandar Kaise Pasand Aagaya.Mujhe Kya Rehnedo Is Kareli Ke Liye Wohi Theek Hai.But Mujhe Bura Q Lag Raha Hai.
Karan:O Dumbo!Tumhaara Prithvi Kuch Zyaada Hi Seedha Nahi Hai.Itni Jaldi Kya Hai Roka Karne Kii.
Karan Met Prithvi When Alliance Is Being Fixed...
Preeta:Tum se Toh Kahi Zyaada Ache Or Mannerfull Hai Woh. Or haan Unki Maa Chahti Hai Ki Shaadi Jald Se Jald Ho Isiliye a Roka Kal Hi Hoga.
Karan Wanted To Postpone The Roka Because he Had Doubt On Prithvi.But Couldn't Do So.
He Left For His Room Thinking Of Something...


Precap: Karan Ask Preeta To Stop The Roka.Preeta-Prithvi Roka Ceremony

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Part 2

After Karan Left The Hall Preeta felt Guilty For Talking To Karan Rudely.

Preeta(POV):Mujhe Karan Se Iss Tarah Se Baat Nahi Karni Chahiye Thi.Maybe Use Bura Laga Ho.Use bhi Prithvi Ji ke Baare Aise Nahi Bolna Chahiye Tha.Unke Saath Mera Roka Hone Waala Hai.Mai Khud Karan Se Baat Karungi.

Rakhi:koi Nahi Puttar Karan Hamesha Tang Karta Rehta Hai Sabko.Mazaak Mein Boldiya Hogaya Tu Tension Na Le.

Everybody Left The Hall Except Rishab And Preeta

Preeta:Rishab Ji Kya Aapko Bhi Lagta Hai Ki Prithvi Ji Galat Honge?

Rishab:Preeta Ji Mai Prithvi se Mila Nahi Hu But Karan Mil Chuka Hai Or Karan Aapka Bhala Hi Chahega.Mujhe Bhi Lagta Hai ki Sab Kuch Jaldi ho Raha Hai.Mai Prithvi Se Milne Ke Baad Hi Kuch Keh Sakta Huu
And He Left...

Preeta came to Karan room And Accidentally Falls But Karan Catches Her



Karan(POV):Koi Itna Simple But Attractive Kaise Hosakta Hai.Mere Liye Tum Bohot Special Ho Preeta.Yeh Mai Kya Sonch Raha Huu.Mujhe Kya Ho Raha Hai.Kahin Mai Preeta Se...
He was Interupted By Preeta's voice.

Preeta:Karan Kahaan Khoye Huwe Ho???
He Straightened The Position Immidiately!!!

Karan:Oh Kareli!Tum Dekh Kar Nahi Chal Sakti Kya. Har waqt Girti Rehti Ho.

Preeta:Tumhe Kisne Kaha Hai Hero Bankr Mujhe Bachaane Ke Liye.Jaa Rahi Hu Mai.

Karan:Aree..Preeta Suno Na..Mujhe Tumse Baat Karni Hai. Acha Baba Sorry Na.
Preeta was Suprised To Hear Sorry From The Karan Luthra...

Preeta:The Karan Luthra Or Sorry...Ok Kaho Kya Baat Hai...

Karan:Tum Mujhe Apna Dost Manti Ho... Manti Ho Na. Yeh Roka Mat Karo.

Preeta: Karan Yeh Tum Kya Keh Rahe Ho. Haan Mai Tumhe Apna Dost Manti Hu. Magar Isme Maa Ki Khushi Hai Mai aisa Nahi Karsakti.Aur toh aur Mere Paas Koi Reason Nahi Hai Yeh Roka Na Karne Ka. Prithvi Ji Bohot Ache Insan Hai.I am sorry Karan Mai Yeh Nahi Karsakti...
And She left...

Karan: Tumhe Reason Chahiye Na Preeta. Mai dhoondu ga Woh Reason. Mai Tumhaari Shaadi Us Langoor Se Nahi Hone Dunga Yeh Mera Waada Hai.

Next Day At Kumkum Bhagya Marriage Hall Preparation Was On Full Swing. Shristi Was Getting Preeta Ready...

Shrishti:Dii Duniya Mein Itne Ache Ladke Hai Or Aapko Yeh Prithvi Hi Mila.

Preeta:Or Ache Ladko Se Tera Kya Matlab Hai.

Shrishti:Ache ladke Jaise Karan Sir Or Rishab Ji

Preeta:Or Sameer??

Shrishti:Nahi Woh Toh Mera...
She realized What She Said And Changed The Topic.

Shristi:I mean Diii Mujhe Pata Nahi Q Yeh Prithvi Sahi Nahi Lagta or Sameer Bata Raha Tha Ki Karan Sir Bhi Aise Hi Sonchte Hai

Preeta:Dekh Shrishti Mai Jaanti Hu Kii Tu Meri Fikr Karti Hai But Tu Hi Dekh Maa Kitni Khush Hai Is Rishte Se.Sonch Unhe Kitna Hurt Hoga Yeh Jaanke Ki Hum Unki Pasand Pr Shaq Kar Rahe Hai.phr bhi Agar Tu Koi Reason Deti Hai Mujhe Toh Mai Yeh Rishta Tod duu gi.Bol!!!!

Shristi Couldn't Say Anything...

Preeta:Dekha.Ab Mujhe Ready Kar Jaldii Se. Or Prithvi Ji Se Ache Se Baat Karna.Ok!!!!!

Meanwhile Luthra's Arrive At The Function

Rakhi:Badhaaiya Ji Badhaaiya...Hamari Bachi Kahan Hai.Or Hamara Damaad Woh Kahaan Hai Hame Bhi Toh Milaao.

Sarla:Jii Jiii Bohot Bohot Shukriya Aane Ke Liye.PlZz Andar Aaiye.Preeta Tayyar Ho Rahi Hai.Or Prithvi Ji Aaye Nahi Hai Abhi Tak. Waise Karan Kahan Hai.

Mahesh:Woh gaadi Park Kar Raha hai. Tussi Hamari fikr Na karo Hum Mehmaan Thodi Hai.Hum Toh Hamari Bachi ke Roke Mein Aaye Hai.

Precap: Karan sees Prithvi-Sherlyn talking. Karan Doubts On Sherlin

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