Ishra OS : Sudha VS Ishitha

Hi All,

A quick OS. Saw todays precap.. I wanted to write this.. this will be a smart end but knowing our CVs.. smartness and them don't come under the same frame.. so here I go...

This is before Simmi coming to the room. Ishitha is on the call with MR. Chopra.

Ishitha : jee, Mr. Chopra, aap tasveer bejiye. Main dekthi hoon ki agar koi social media app se unka naam ya koi aur details mil saktha hai kya? Vaisa muje umeed nahi hain par try to kar hi sakthe hain. agar bte thode acche dil ke honge to hum samjenge..

Mr. Chopra : haan Ishitha jee. Main abhi 10 minute main photo bejtha hoon.

As Ishitha is cutting the call, Simmi barges in and locks the door. She is worried.

Ishitha : kya huwa Simmi.. itni tension mein kyun ho? Kya huwa?

Simmi : Ishitha, main abhi neeche bhai se mili.. Uss Sudha ne Rohan aur Karan ko kidnap kar liya hain. Usne bhai ko akele bulaiya. Aur bhai chale bhi gaye.. unhone meri ek nayi suni. Aur vaise sudha ne kaha ki agar police wahan aayegi to vo karan aur rohan ko maar degi.

Ishitha is shocked :kya.. kidnap.. rohan aur karan ko.. raman akele gaye hain. Tumne unhe jaane kyun diya.. vo sudha ji bahut khatarnak hain.. kuch bhi kar sakthi hain.

Simmi : ishitha. Bhai bas bhag gaye. Kuch suna bhi nahi.. vo phone speaker pe tha to maine sun liya..

Ishitha quickly walks away with her mobile and car keys.

Simmi says a silent prayer : hey mata rani, bacha lena charo ko.. ab main kya karun.. maine bahut takleef pahunchayi hain sab ko.. ab karz chukane ki baari.

Simmi calls the inspector. She quickly messages romi, abhi and bala to meet her at the park park without informing anyone at home.

Meanwhile, ishitha is driving the car in full speed and she hears the phone beep. She thinks she should see it .. what if it is a message from Raman. She opens the message and is shocked to see it.

She brakes the car and double checks tosee if the message is true. She is shocked to see the message. Her world is shattered and she determines to take the problem head on. She quickly calls Simmi and tells to bring the cops.

Simmi :ishitha wo maine already unko bol diya hain. infact bala, romi aur abhi are reaching there. Main ghar mein sab sambhalthi hoon.

Meanwhile Raman has reached the place and sees Karan and Rohan suspended. Sudha has told him to finish the full bottle. He is shocked to hear but does it as the remote is in her hand.

Meanwhile, ishitha reached the place. She saw Raman in a very bad state and Sudha threatening him to finish the bottle else she will get karan and rohan dropped from the height.

She walks towards Sudha and ina very tensed voice says : Raman

Raman : ishitha thum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Chale jao yahan se.

Ishitha : nahin Raman, aaj nahin.. main apko akele iss aurat ke saath nahin chod sakthi

Sudha : welcome ishitha, wo dekh tumhare dono pyaare damaad latak rahe hain.. Ab tum decide karo kya karna hain.

Ishitha: kya matlab, main decide karungi?

Sudha : mere bhai ne atmahatya ki thi.. lekin Raman kumar bhalla atmahatya nahin balki apni biwi ke haatho marega..

Raman and ishitha are shocked and Raman understand why Sudha made him drink the whiskey.

Both Raman and Karan scream for help

Karan : ishima, hume bachaiyiye.

Rohan : nahi Ishima, Papa ko bachaiye..aap dono yahan se chale jayiye.

Raman : Nahi, ishitha badi mushkil se dono betiyaan kush hain. tumne dekha na subah kitne kush the.. main nahi chahtha ke meri wajah se dono betiya apni zindagi kho de..

Rohan : nahin papa. Aap dono chale jayiye yahan se..

Raman : nahi ishitha. Tumme humare betiyo ke liye ye karna hoga.. just shoot me.. ruhi aur aliya ke bare me soch. Jaldi kar..just shoot me.. zyaada sochna math. Just aim. Just shoot. Ishitha.. socho math. Just shoot.

Sudha : haan ishitha. Just shoot. Main bhi to dekhoon ishitha kya decide karthi hain. apni zindagi ya apni betiyon ki.

Ishitha takes the revolver and closes her eyes.

Raman : ishitha, I love you.. main har janam me tumhara hi rahoonga.. bus chala goli.. I love you

Ishitha : I love you too Raman. Main aapke bina kaise jeeongi.. sab ko kya jawab doongi.

Raman : ishitha, bus shoot.

Ishitha opens her eyes with determination. That look scares Raman.. it has a spark,fire and he is sure she is upto something.

Raman : ishitha, kuch mat socho. Bus shoot me..

Ishitha quickly turns and fires towards karan and rohan. Sudha screams : nahin, ishitha, chod de unhe.

Raman is shocked..

Ishitha : kyun,, aap hi ne tho kaha tha ki main decide karungi.. to maine decide kiya. Maine mere suhaag ko chuna.

Raman : ishitha, ye tum kya kar rahi ho

Ishitha : muje bas 5 minute dijiye. Her eyes had confidence. Raman knew she was upto something.

He decided to keep quiet.

Ishitha : sudha ji maine decide kiya hain ki main apne suhaag ko bachaongi. Maine waise bhi aliya ka suhaag ek baar ujaad chuki hoon. Dusri baar sahi.

Sudha : ye kya keh rahi ho ishitha..tum apni betiyon ki zindagi barbaad karogi.

Ishitha : kyu nahi.. aur waise aapke itne pasine choot rahi hain. parivaar mera hain.. to decision bhi mera hi hoga.

Raman : Ishitha, ye tume kya ho gaya.. ye kya keh rahi ho.. kya kar rahi ho.

Sudha : haan ishitha, maine suna tum apne bachon se bahut pyaar karthi ho.. tum ye karogi.

Raman : ishitha, chup chap mue shoot karo.

Sudha : ishitha, jaldi socho, remote daba dungi.

Ishitha : maine decide kar liya hain.

Raman : ishitha, ye kya bakwaas kar rahi ho.

Sudha is all shivering and scaring and trying to persuade ishitha to shoot raman.

Raman : ishitha, agar usne remote daba diya to anarth ho jayega.. jaldi shoot karo muje.

Sudha is trying to build pressure and says : haan ishitha, tumhare paas 10 second hain. Raman ko shoot karo varna main remote daba dungi.

Raman : ishitha, wo daba degi.

Ishitha screams : nahi, nahin dabayegi. Wo dono uske bte hain. rohan aur karan sudha ke bte hain.

Raman is shocked at the revelation. Sudha, rohan and karan are wondering how ishitha go to know..

Raman gathers himself and says : ishitha kya keh rahi ho?

Ishitha : haan Raman, muje abhi raaste mein patha chala. Simmi ne kaha ki apko phone aaya aur aap yaha aa gaya. Main aa hi rahi thi aur muje Mr. Chopra ka message mila. Wo hume beto ke photos bhejne wale the.. ye dekhiye..

She gives him the phone.

Raman sees and is very angry. He grabs the remote from her hand and says ab main dabaungo.. bolo remote dabana hain ya goli se udana hain. choice tumhari.

Just then the cops come with all of them. Ishitha has briefed Simmi about the whole thing.

The cops come and Raman says : haan boliye sudha ji.. choice kya hain. remote ya goli..

Sudha is surpised. She does not know what todo.. she says : inspector, arrest kariye in dono ko..ye log mere beton ko maarna chahthi hain

Inspector : maine sab suna sudha ji.. par ye dono to kaushalya ji ke bte hain. aap abhi sabke saamne sab sach kahiya aur phir hum inhe chod denge. Abhi and Romi have hid the media people behind their cars.

Sudha in a moments blurts out all the truth and the entire confessionhas been live telecasted.

Ishitha says : ab in papers pe sign karo.

Sudha : ye kya hain..

Ishitha :yeh wahi 51 percent ke papers hain. sign karo aur apne beto ko le jaon.

Sudha signs on the papers and the boys are released. Meanwhile, aliya and ruhi come there and hear thewhole story.

Raman is worried for his two girls and he and ishitha approach them with tears in their eyes. The two girls run to them and hug and cry..

Ishitha : am sorry bachchon. Muje nahi patha tha.

Ruhi and Aliya : its ok papa and ishima. Jo ho gaya so ho gaya. Hum theek hain. we are fine.. jab itna pyaara parivaar humare paas hain to hume kaisa darr.

They walk towards karan and rohan and give them a tight slap.

Humare paas jo hain wo thum soch bhi nahi sakthe. Tumhari maa ne tumhari zindagi barbaad ki .. tum log marne waale the.. par hamare paas ek aisa parivaar hain jo hamare liye jaan bhi denge.. ye humara parivaar hain..

Good bye!!!

They all walk hand in hand..

Nice Os

Superb os dii
Thnx for the pm

Thank you for the PM dear... I am very glad that you are taking up all the contemporary tracks of YHM and presenting them in a more refined and logical way... The subtle melodrama you ran in parallel, Simmi's reactiveness stood out for me... Should have happened in this way, Simmi instead of keeping mum, would have been better off if she told the truth to the family in first place... The conversation between Ishra, where Raman wants her to be his partner in the upcoming births as well, shows the essence of Ishra, which has been missing in the show... Also, Ishita vents out her guilt and anger when she proclaims that she is ready to kill her SIL as she had already done it once...

The climax is worth reading as well.. How Sudha was made to confess before live TV and got back their company. However, it's too early to happen in the show... And finally Aliya, Rooh give their piece of mind to those scumbags and walk away, instead of being humiliated and ill treated..

You should have not ended it so soon maybe should have run it in parallel with the show, just give it a thought if possible. Thank you once again

Awesome update

fabulous os dear
loved how there was logic in the plot
and u executed the whole scene really well
continue writing more such oses

Nice Os.