qayamat se qayamat tak! updt prt2 pg 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well this is my 1st ever fan fic..i read soo many butiful ones so i cudn't resist my self 4m ritin 1...so i thought id write 1 myself...

this is like all other ff's bout AR..AA..n RM..well we hav sapna evry1 else also...

character sketch!!

RIDDHIMA GUPTA:--> daughter ov simran nd shashank gupta... same as the DMG but a lil mre confident n chilled out..caring ,sensitive,homely..all the qualities of a perfect daughter is in

ridzi..

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ANJAILE GUPTA:---> same as DMG but a lil bit sweeter...

very caring sis ...loves her parents vry close 2 her mom

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ARMAAN MALIK:--->

the total cool dude who every1 2 hang around with...girls drool over him nd a total big flirt..

but also caring and considerate 2wrds evry1...

wants 2 b a cardiologist because his brother died 2 heart disease n lak ov medication...

he also comes 4m an affluent family n gets watever he wants....

he lives withs his parents ...mom's a fashion designer...n dad's the director ov a big shot company...

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ATUL JOSHI:--> is the only son ov OMI...he's a funny guy..literally a girls best friend

and a total comic character..

he wants 2 be a doctor 2 fulfill his dad's dreams....

passionate bout evrythin he sets foot into..n cares 4 evry1 makes friends in minutes...

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SAPNA SHAH:-->

a caring nd sweet girl wh hails 4m a typical gujju family...

decided 2 becum a doctor jus get rid ov marriage..n ofcourse

wants 2 help evry1....

but luves her family a lot...n is a gr8 frnd

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il introduce some other characters l8r...

INTRODUCTION

first day ov school....anjali nd riddhima jus moved into mumbai after their dad ws appointed the head ov sanjeevni-prestigious hospital ov bombay....

so 1st day ov skool as usual evry1 is nervous nd 1st day is the wrst day...

morning 7:00 am..

** alarm***

anjie throwing a pillow at her sis...

anj:ridz..alarm..band karao..!!😔

simi(mom):ridzi ...anji beta uto skool ke liye taiyaar ho jao..varna l8 ho jaoge...pehle hi din l8 janeka erada hai kya..ooto!!!

ridzi now wakin up n realizin 1st day ov skool is vry nervous as usual n is tensed as 2 wat 2 do...

rid:...di ooto...varna l8 hojayenge....

sayin this goes 2 take bath...

meanwhile

simi comes 2 the room n attems 2 wake up anjie...

anjie wakes up n hugs her mom...simi kisses her n say gud mrning baccha...nervous ho...aaj pehla din hai...

anjie:mom chill...anjie n nervous no ways im gonna rok asusual...aap apni chotiwali se poocho or deko kahin who nervouness ki vajah se bathroom may behoosh n padi ho..

both ov them laugh loudlyšŸ˜†šŸ˜†

were as rizi makin her usual annoyed face..šŸ˜•

ridzi: very funny di!!!

wishes simi gudmrnig she 2 geta a hug n kiss...simi pushes anjie n the bathroom n tell them 2 make it fast...

aft 20 mins both sis r ready 4 skool..

at the breakfast table...tryin 2 eat...

now shashank cums down wishes evry1 mornin anks them hw they r feelin...

rid:.papa i dont wanna go...im so freaked out!!.all new ppl...wat if i dont make frenz...

papa:.dont wury beta bas 2yrs only...(dy r in 11th)...im sure ul make new frenz..even if u dont u hav anjie.. rite?😊

anjie:chill ridz its ohk...y do u fear when anjie is here..in a bossing tone!!šŸ˜‰

achaa cholo lets go....

simi hugs all 3..wishs them gud luk...

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this ws the into cum prt 1...hope u likd it..

plz leave some comments so that i can rectify my mistakes..

thanx😊

dont mind if my hindi is bad!!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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A very G8 start. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Plz continue soon will be eagerly waiting 4 ur next part. 😊
yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow aynee lvd d prt angie ws so chill lke alwys nd ridz sme as dmg........cont soon.......
yachna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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tht was great..plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi aynee,it might be your first atempt but while reading it does not seem you are a beginner in writing FF..this was really god like the sister bond too good,very cute...i hope the rest of the characters are introduced later,pls continue soon..i will be waiting for the next update
Zafirah
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey dis into
sounds great
really gd
by da way hw old r dey
update soon
nizma šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
great start! šŸ‘ 😳 continue soon! 😃

ā¤ļø Sanyaa
aynee thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u all 4 ur comments...
il update soon... 😊
333360 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyyy!!!!!!!!!
jst red yr ff
its really gud
yr a realy gud riter
hope u cont soon and wen u do
can u plz pm me
luv u loadz n take care
ash.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!!
Its a great start sweetiee!!
plzz cont soon hun..
n pm me..
wud luv to read da nex part😳

Lotssa luv:HIRAšŸ˜›

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