MehRya OS : Kahi Unkahi...- Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for penning down this shot SCG...😉
It was so emotional..
Glad that in your story the reason for Shaurya's betrayal has been justified..
Loved reading it..keep them coming
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shaurya is a transformed character here, hiding his sickness and that he hasn't long to live
from Mehek, creating situations to hate him and move on in life. Recipe chor who thought
he had everything he wanted and no one can touch him had to learn the lesson a hard way
that destiny has its own say in our lives. Mehek may hate Shaurya coz of what he portrayed
himself but once she gets a hint of what made him do it, will not even think twice to be back
in his life, taking care of him and surrendering herself for his welfare, that's Mehek for you,
totally selfless and sacrificing. ❤️
On the whole, a very painful story and you did make a mark with this first chapter. Thanks for
penning it down SCG.⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter

Thanks for penning down this shot SCG...😉
It was so emotional..
Glad that in your story the reason for Shaurya's betrayal has been justified..
Loved reading it..keep them coming




I think Shaurya was highly butchered in that track. I mean who thought that the shrewd businessman will be a recipe chor.
Thanks for reading btw, I'm still waiting for your update 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehatara

Shaurya is a transformed character here, hiding his sickness and that he hasn't long to live

from Mehek, creating situations to hate him and move on in life. Recipe chor who thought
he had everything he wanted and no one can touch him had to learn the lesson a hard way
that destiny has its own say in our lives. Mehek may hate Shaurya coz of what he portrayed
himself but once she gets a hint of what made him do it, will not even think twice to be back
in his life, taking care of him and surrendering herself for his welfare, that's Mehek for you,
totally selfless and sacrificing.❤️
On the whole, a very painful story and you did make a mark with this first chapter. Thanks for
penning it down SCG.⭐️



Thanks for such amazing words Ma'am ❤️
BTW you still haven't read I guess my last One shot 😉 ll be glad if you see that too whenever time permits 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetChilliGirl



Thanks for such amazing words Ma'am ❤️
BTW you still haven't read I guess my last One shot 😉 ll be glad if you see that too whenever time permits 😃


Can u please bump it for me, pretty please.😛😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really wished that cvs show us some logical things why shaurya just run away from marrige... a big hotelier will do all this just for a recipee book was total a unbelievable thing for me...i really wished cvs justified that bt alas..
Thanks for sharing this emotional os with us...enjoyed reading it... keep writing on mehrya
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

I really wished that cvs show us some logical things why shaurya just run away from marrige... a big hotelier will do all this just for a recipee book was total a unbelievable thing for me...i really wished cvs justified that bt alas..

Thanks for sharing this emotional os with us...enjoyed reading it... keep writing on mehrya



Makes could have shown something sensible. I mean Shaurya was a bloody businessman. He didn't need that recipe book for God's sake. He had all the money to get the best chef in the world but he decided to be a recipe book chor. Like seriously. That was huge let down. Anyway, thanks so much 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was an emotional os Sweety...
I wish they showed a valid reason for Shaurya dumping Mehak in the last minute but they showed him as a recipe chor...I think they wanted to show us that this guy can stoop too low to attain fame even if it has to break a girls heart. His character was too extreme either he was too rude and angry or full on majnu mode .
But here Shaurya is matured. He wants his Mehak to be happy...
Thanks for the update dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: josejen

It was an emotional os Sweety...
I wish they showed a valid reason for Shaurya dumping Mehak in the last minute but they showed him as a recipe chor...I think they wanted to show us that this guy can stoop too low to attain fame even if it has to break a girls heart. His character was too extreme either he was too rude and angry or full on majnu mode .
But here Shaurya is matured. He wants his Mehak to be happy...
Thanks for the update dear..



Yeah but I never got it how a mere recipe book can get him business. He had all the money in the world and could afford any of the best chefs of the world but he chose to play with emotions. That was the reason I never liked him in the first place. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a bunch for giving your time into this. 😃

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