To love or not to love(fanfic)(finished)

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To Love Or Not To Love
Ashi & Yuvi are a couple now.They are in the shed spending some time together.
Yuvi:Ashi,babes, kal tum kya kar rahi ho?
Ashi: Kuch nahin,kyun?
Yuvi holds her hand & says:Phir hum kal bahar chale.
Ashi: OK.
Looks at her watch.
A: Yuvi, bahut late ho gaya hai,ab mujhe jana hai.
Y: Nahin, thodhi der aur ruk jao.
A: Nahin,Yuvi,I really have to go. Vrinda worry kar rahi hogi
Yuvi ignores her words & just kisses her.
A: Bas, ab jaon.
Y: No. plz 5 more minutes. Just 5.
A: OK, I love you.
Y: I love you too.
He kisses her again & goes on kissing.
A: Bas, Yuvi bahut ho gaya. Ab I'm going.
Y: Ashi,mat jao.
But Ashi's already gone
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 2
Yuvi is still in the shed,thinking about his lady love. First he remembers all the good times he spent with Ashi,then he remembered all the bad times, the time Ashi had slapped him, pushed him in front of the whole class...& now she had just gone so abrubtly not even letting him finish his sentence. He gets a bit upset & then angry.He thinks,Fine. I'll show her.I'm not that desperate for her.
He walks to his room in anger & slams open the door .
Sid is there.
Sid: Yuvi,kya hua? Ashi ke saath phir se ladai huee kya?
Y: Nothing,dude.Tum nahin samjho ge.
Sid: Batao to sahi.
Y: Ashi mere baare mein care nahin karti hai. Vo mujhe jada importance bhi nahin deti.
Sid: Oh, dude thats bad. Par mere pas bahut achi news hai. Mein kal do hot chicks ke saath bahar ja raha hon.
Y: Good for you. Wait a sec.,tumne do kaha ,na. Mein bhi tumhare saath chalunga.
Sid: Aur Ashi ka kya?

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kaisa laga? Hope this is not boring 😭 😭 😭 .Plz guys read & reply.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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omg...how romantic....plz continue....plz do it fast...cant wait here 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow..its nice.....conti....its so romantic 😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Too good! 👏 👏 👏 Please continue soon!
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Part 3
Y: Ashi,vo mein......kuch nahin.
Meanwhile in Ashi's room Ashi tells Vrinda about what had happened.
A: Aur Vrinde ,meine us se kaha ki stop karo par he didn't listen to me. I mean once or twice its OK but if wants to kiss all the time,I'm sorry I'm not cool with it.I mean,I love him & shayad I was rude mein usse bina bye kahe chali gayi ,par he should understand haina? Mein abhi usse sorry kehkar aati hoon aur usko sab kuch batati hoon.
She leaves the room.
In Yuvi's room Sid & Yuvi are discussing their dates for tomorrow.
Sid: Yuvi,tumse Ashi gussa nahin hogi kya?
Y: Jis chiz ke baare mein usse pata nahin hai vo us chiz se gussa kaise ho sakti hai.
Just then Ashi enters his room....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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gr8888 !!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzz continue ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!
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kaise chiz now dun test ma patience nemore 😉
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Part 4
Sid:(whispering)Oh-uh. Yuvi, tum ise handle karo ,mein yahan se ja raha hoon.
Y:(whispering)Kitne ache doost ho.
Sid leaves & Ashi comes in.
Yuvi panics ,thinking that Ashi had heard everything about the dates.
Y:Ashi,mein sab kuch explain kar sakta hoon.
A: Nahin,sweetie,I understand. Meine tumse bahut rudely behave kiya na. I'm sorry.
Y:(confused) Kya?
A:Haan, abhi to shed mein jo kuch hua .Uske liye I'm sorry. I really love you .Bura mat mano par tum kuch jada hi kiss karte ho. I mean its like ki hum dono aur kuch bhi nahin karte.
Y: OK, I'm sorry,waise Ashi tumne kuch bhi nahin suna haina.
A: Nahin,tumlog kya baat kar rahe the.
Y: Nothing, nothing.
They hug & Yuvi thinks: ab kya karoon?

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