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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Savera84
Is an update on the way?
If there is, I enjoy my long weekend even better.
We celebrate labour day on the first Monday of October every year. Weird, but that is how our state has decided.
Cheers...

Yep! Working on it!! 😊

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Savera84

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Great.

As much as I want to read the update on the weekend, but, definitely not above and beyond your schedule and satisfaction.

So, please post it at your convenience.

Cheers...

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Savera84
Great.
As much as I want to read the update on the weekend, but, definitely not above and beyond your schedule and satisfaction.
So, please post it at your convenience.
Cheers...

Aww...

I promise you will read it this weekend!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

I am at a party. I will read and post my comment a bit later.

Cheers...

Edited by Savera84 - 7 years ago

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Arshi67

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

I really like the way you have Arnav and Khushi wanting to try and know each other. Learning about the mundane as well the profound. Learning of the "simple" side of ASR. The way you juxtapose it with the smoke and mirrors that defines Shyam and Anjali's relationship is lovely.

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Lily30

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Loved chapter 5
Anjali starting to doubt Shyam, good as easier to separate lies from truth.
Arnav taking care of Khushi.
Eager for the next part.

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Savera84

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Nice update. The day or should I say their life after the truth revelation has started on a very good note. I read this update while having my own steaming cup of coffee.

Shyam still thinks he can get away? He was working on a case over night? What a pathetic lie. Did he forget that he stopped going on trips and he stopped disappearing at odd times from Shantivan since Aakash's engagement?

Anjali should question him all this. Not rely on Chote to fix the mess in her life.

Cheers...

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gprs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

A pleasant update..

I like how you started the day after..Her lingering doubt on his return, his guilt not only for leaving her at that moment,Feeling the subtle new things, much needed most deserved care for Khushi and the normal simple coffee-Khushi's musings on Arnav's unspoken caring moments

Anjali-better late than never..It's good to see her analysing the situations and the person..

Thanks for your early morning time for us..

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tinken

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

I would like to see a logical Anjali questioning Shyam and finally taking a decision on her own please! No telly drama of Arnav slapping Shyam and uttering filmy lines. This story is much more grounded .😊

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