SS: Relationships defined. - Page 2

Beautifully written and a beautiful way to potray a relationship that had so many emotions for each person involved in it.

Thank you writing such a beautiful story. Hope you write another one soon!

Anam

I loved it lots. Really great, dont end it. Cont. soon.

excellent 👏

You are a wonderful writer and I really like the way you potray the feelings of every character....

Bani closed her chapter, but I hope you'll start another 'chapter' for us 😉 😊

A nice story. You penned everyone's feeling well. One must know how to move on in life. Very true....one needs to live.

hey hun.. great SS.. bani is finally strong.. yes yes yes.. finally i get to see a strong bani and not a mahaan bani somewhere.. although being strong and answering back for urself and self dignity is wat i call the real mahaangiri.. lol.. great part hun.. i hope we get another part for this SS.. 😉

Originally posted by: phool527

hey hun.. great SS.. bani is finally strong.. yes yes yes.. finally i get to see a strong bani and not a mahaan bani somewhere.. although being strong and answering back for urself and self dignity is wat i call the real mahaangiri.. lol.. great part hun.. i hope we get another part for this SS.. 😉

Hi, actually this was going to be the end. BUT some ideas have come up after the response i received. I am in a quandry, do you guys want to see J anB make up?

or a completely different story that has no Ganga and second kid. ?

please let me know😊

thanks for the comments about my writing style. I have been writing since I was in school. never published a single story though,as i felt it was not good enough. this forum allows me to indulge myself.😉

dear, That was soo well written & unique presentation!! Very good to see strong Bani like this, D**n meera care JW.... 😳 😳 Thank you soo much for the lovly SS. 😃

Please write more..Can't wait for so good SS. 😉
Keep up the good work 👏
Raisa

Beautifully penned SS, lenmed.
👏
You portrayed everyone's emotions very well.
I hope you write another ss soon.

V...

I like the last sentence, "It angered her to think that she had spent so much of her young life on "loving" and not living."

fabulous 👏 👏