Nandini at Kunal's house for navarathri

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This idea came to me today as I was watching SBS.
Nandini decked up in her usual splendor for her Kunal.beautiful baali,big bindi,open hair and a violet saree that accentuated her beautiful curves.All for her dear Kunal.Kunal had called her yesterday and told her about the navarathri pooja he is having at his house.The tense situation is still going on.He was feeling suffocated there.It was his family, his deeda,his mamma and Mauli.He could not bring himself to say his Mauli.They were all his but Not his.He badly wanted to see Nandini.His heart yearned for her.She was too good.She to stayed away from him,though it was killing her.They talked on the phone every day.They texted every hour as promised.they were in their own world.
He was fed up of not seeing Nandini and on an impulse he asked her to come to the pooja.Nandini was shocked.she was very much afraid.She said magar,how can I come?Everyone hates me.They dont want me there. Kunal,I will stay here.But Kunal said,is their hatred or my love more important to you?if you can see beyond all these petty hatred and the magnificence of my love you can come.
So there she was the most beautiful Nandini,ringing the doorbell of Kunal's flat,waiting for someone to open the door,wringing her fingers.
The door opened...

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madlal thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha05

Waiting for the update!

Thank you,Ayesha.will get to it soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice

Ab Kunnu ,,apni nandu ko le jaye uske ghar aur they live happily afterwards 😆


Dulhania ,apna dulha le gayi--Navratre per

Sorry TM--I am not disrespecting your writing..yeh bi aise hi aa gaya dimag mein aur main rokh nahi payi khud ko isse likhne se
same way--jiase Nandu--bahut roka bas apne aap hota hi chala gaya😆


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabyata

Nice

Ab Kunnu ,,apni nandu ko le jaye uske ghar aur they live happily afterwards 😆


Dulhania ,apna dulha le gayi--Navratre per

Sorry TM--I am not disrespecting your writing..yeh bi aise hi aa gaya dimag mein aur main rokh nahi payi khud ko isse likhne se
same way--jiase Nandu--bahut roka bas apne aap hota hi chala gaya😆



liked your ideas too.I want Kunal to yearn for Nandini as he is deeply in love with her.He has taken Mauli out of his life.I don't know why he is still at home.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I don't a green this plot story is sound good but not Ku NAL,s flat its must to celebrate in nan do,s home for her happiness we want to see both expression
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: amnajaved

I don't a green this plot story is sound good but not Ku NAL,s flat its must to celebrate in nan do,s home for her happiness we want to see both expression

This story bnb is gearing towards Nandu and Mauli.their feelings abd confrontations is what I am looking for.

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