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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: snehatara

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Episode 1 :

Introduction of partha Galli. The top view is fantastic. We see a knife being moved from here to
there as if someone is going for a kill and then we see a girl cutting a pumpkin. Mehek is revealed
with star in her eyes tasting her food. She is cutting onions, carrots etc and all the while is singing a
lullaby. Puts chewing gum in her mouth to avoid tears while cutting onion. She is cooking poha and
few more dishes, may be vegetable rice too in the cooker. Everyone at Sharma Niwas an looks like
Mehek Madam is cooking in the wee hours. Mehek's cooker whistle acts like a rooster in waking up
the house hold. Nehal gets irritated and closes her ears with th epillow.Bread toast, partaha and
many more dishes are ready. Then she prepares honey, lemon water for her PD who is awake and
flirting with Dileep Kumarji and greeting her late husband. Mehek wishes "Good morning PD" and
PD wishes her back. PD asks her why she is awake and turning her nights dark when everyone
can feed their stomach. Mehek tells that she is not doing so but is just killing her time. Chachas go
to their shops and chachis look after the house chores and she can atleast do kitchen work. PD
tells her it's me who has to do this preaching and not Mehek's and asks Mehek to talk as per her
age. Look at you, you have darks circles beneath your eyes, go and sleep. Mehek goes from there
to her room, switches her light off and sleeps.

In the morning, Sharmas are at dining table. Ravi Chachu is brushing his teeth and yelling at Mohit
who is in the bathroom to come out fast.Asks Mohit to take some medicine for constipation everyday before sleeping. Mohit yells back he'll do it from tomorrow.

Kanta chachi is setting the table and sneezes. Jeeven chachi who's reading newspaper there asks
her is she took medicine. KC complains that entire household is smelling of paint and these two
three tablets will not work. Mohit comes out and RC rushes in. Mohit naughtily says there is no
water inside. RC comes out and says couldn't he have told him earlier and takes a bucket of water
inside bathroom. JC tells KC to go for jogging along with Manasi and Nehal daily and she responds
saying this is such a big house an her exercise happens everyday moving here and their with her
daily chores.

Dadaji is cheking his BP time and again, PD taunts him saying he knows hos BP is normal and why
is he checking it so many times, BP will increase or what. Dadaji comes to JC tells him that he's
worried that his Doc has educe his medicine and what if his BP suddenly increases, what he has
heart attack and then JC will be an orphan. PD comes there and tells him that he needs medicine for his brain and not BP meaning he has gone mad.

Manasi Chachi and Nehal come back from jogging and Manasi chachi complains about Nehal's
reverse way jogging. KC questions Nehal why does she jog ulta. Nehel says it's for her Glutes. KC
doesn't understand and PD shows her what are glutes. Everyone is shocked.

Dadaji is sitting on the dining table but is not eating anything. KC comes there and tells him that
she has prepared and serves him. PD stares at him. Mohit comes there and JC asks him to come
to the shop and PD tells him not to keep the newspaper on the dining table. Mohit asks for his Custard. Mehek comes there and gives Mohit his custard, tells him she had prepared it for him early in the morning and kpt in the fridge. JC taunts this looks less like a house and more like a farmayishi geet maala and taunts Mohit. KC tells JC should question Mehek not Mohit as she is the one who gets up early hours and prepares everyone's fav. dishes. PD tells KC and others it gives happiness to serve others and not by just taking from others always. Mehek is about to eat bread
and KC takes it away and tells Nehal to take Mehek with her for jogging so that her weight can be
reduced.

KC gets a phone call and she speaks to Pammi. Tells the family that Pammi is coming with her
husband and her son Ajay to see Mehek in the evening at 7 om for dinner. ALl the males try to
reason out and ask KV if they can push it to tomorrow. KC asks why but no one gives correct reply.
PD tells KC that there is cricket match between India and Srilanka. KC warns them to be at home
by 6 pm after closing their shops and even Mehek to be back by 5 pm and that this rishta has to be
fixed today. Orders Nehal to call beauty parlour wale and get Mehek ready so that her dark circles are not visible.

RC receives Pammi's family who have reached PG in their car. Asks them to park it and walk in the
galli as their cannot get insie the PG. KC comes and sees that JC is not ready. Shouts at him to get
ready but RC tells KC that they are cooming to see Mehek and not him and his pyjama. Nehal is
getting ready and Manasi chachi comes there and asks her to eat talcum powder, perfume, cream
etc etc so that she'll look beautiful. Nehal proudly says she'll not go through all this and hers will be
Swayamwar. The groom will come on TV and telecast like a reality show.

RC is boasting about their Sharma Niwas calling it a Mahal. Pammi's family is welcomed by KC
who hugs Pammi and tries to hug her hubby too in her anxiety. Ravi chachu clears his throat and
stops her from hugging him. They come and meet PD and see DK's photo and are confused. Ask PD if Dileep Kumarji is their relative. Dadaji clarifies that PD is DK ji's big fan and thet used to stay in same lane in Rawalpindi.


Pammi asks Ajay to bring out his chain so that it's showing and thay all look around the house
trying to measuring it up. KC tells yes it's an old house but it is their own. KC comes to get Mehek
and is stunned looking at Mehek looking pretty and just like her mother. hHe is left teary eyed and
hugs Mehek. Tells Mehek she has kept the tray ready and asks her to bring it. Nehal brings the tray
and Ajay stares at her non stop and has lovey dovey feeling. PD sees this and tells him that it's
wrong number and she is Mehek's younger sister. Nehal asks Ajay how he's is in a very intimate
way.

Mehek comes there with hr chachis and is introduced by KC to Pammi and family. Ajay compares
both sisters. Mehek greets Pammi and family Manasi chachi asks Mehek to show Ajay their Roof
and have breakfast there and questions Nehal why did she bring the tray. Nehal feigns innocence
and says she was just helping.

Mehek and reach reach the open area and Ajay is having tea. Ajay asks Mehek since how many
years she is working at Taj. Mehek tells since two years. Ajay gives her a pendant to Mehek says
no. Ajay tells her that it's of 24 carat and his dad got it in customs ride. Questions Mehek if she
knows senior management. Mehek is confused and tells what senior management, Ratan Chacha manages everything. Ajay asks is she calls him Ratan Chacha and if her Ratan Tata chacha can
give him a job. He has done MBA and if husband and wife work in same place, it's beneficial.
Mehek tells she will speak to Ratan Chacha and even tell JC to talk to him. PD used to tell her that they two used to share lungis when they were young. Tells him she calls him Ratan Chacha since
her childhood when Ajay is surprised at her calling him Ratan chacha. Questions him what work
he'll do in their small hotel, Ajay cuts her and says, no it's a very big star hotel. Mehek clarifies it's
not Taj hotel but a small dhaba of Ratan chacha in which she works. Ajay gets irritated and tells her
that her KC told his mother that Mehek works in Taj hotel asks her if she has plan to work in a
star hotel.What her her future plans. Mehek innocently tells who has seen the future and yes she had applied for a 5 star hotel but did not get it.

Ajay questions if she sees TV serials and tells her that the heroines dream of becoming IAS, IPS
and cricketers. Mehek replies everybody's dream is different and tells she likes cooking and eating
and that's her passion and hobby which she has learnt from her mother. Ajay says even his mother
cooks, so what if he has to get married to a girl who is like his mother. He wants a working girl who
is career oriented and ambitious and not some homely girl who cuts onion and pours out her tears
in kitchen. Mehek tells him if they chew bubble gum while cutting onion there will not be tears. Ajay
is super irritated, takes the pendant and goes away.


Thanks sneha for this written summary of first episdep . It was like visualising it again 😊 . . h
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lima great effort 😃 & Sneha ,mind blowing, there is a strong visual description to your writing 👏
Sharmas & their presence starts to seep through the audience mind in the first episode itself, the characters are well etched & strong with a chronological order in hierarchy intact, especially women characters, PD Kanta & of course Mehak 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ms.nitya12

Lima great effort 😃 & Sneha ,mind blowing, there is a strong visual description to your writing 👏

Sharmas & their presence starts to seep through the audience mind in the first episode itself, the characters are well etched & strong with a chronological order in hierarchy intact, especially women characters, PD Kanta & of course Mehak 😃

thank you nitya❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Thanks Nitya and Richa.😊 The flow just went on with the flawless characters who looked so real
and loved writing it.⭐️❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What I liked in .first episode was the simple and Realistic frame they gave to this episode . Like chachu and Mohit fighting over bathroom , dadu ka cribbing , kanta chachi complainiiinig about how she has to do all work. And Mohit and meheks bond . But my favorite was mehek genuine innocence. And love for everyone in house. Without any expectations and. Always happy to feel nature . She was simple Indian girl but with a unique and beautiful way to see world through eyes . She was sweet and still strong . She was simple and still captivating. She was ordinary with special heart winning traits.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great job Lima dear.. Keep on going

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