IshRa SS : Hidden Love Part 3 on pg 36 Teaser on 41 june 13 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
hawww ishu cheating raman
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52
Happy belated bday to ur lil sis
Congrats to u for completing one year as a writer correction as wonderful writer & also for new story
You deserve it..
Loved ur writing style..
I will again say this that I'm ur fan..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Interesting prologue
Seems ishu cheating over Raman
Continue soon

PS - Title is so good..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
heartiest congratulations to u for completing a year
interesting prologue
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Indeed Congratulations are due to you
you have achieved and well done to you
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Happy Belated Birthday to your sister

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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Prologue is Captivating

So Ishita probably steals from Raman
but somehow I feel Subbu must have made her do so
will be waiting for story to unfold
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations harshu
Nice prologue
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hlw frnds finally I'm here first part of this story & this part dedicated to "Shreya ,Amu and Sahiba Di who had asked me to start this story very soon ..




Part - 1



Subbu was packing his stuff when doorbell rung he went & opened the door & found Aryan standing there


Subbu - Aryan tu ish waqt yahan u know na we have to return from here tonight..


Aryan - i know yr & my packing is done btw subbu kaha hai yr tu kabse phone try kr rha ab Jake lga..saying he comes inside &subbu closed the door


Subbu - WO actually ish hotel mein thoda network issue hai tu ye chodh or bta phone kyu kiya?

Aryan - as u don't know..


Subbu - what?..


Aryan - arey yaar stop ur drama & give me my cheque..


Subbu opened his bag & take out the cheque & handled him le tera cheque ab khush


Aryan(smiles)- ha yaar BTW where is our next show?


Subbu - nothing fixed till now..


Aryan - bur u had informed us yesterday that u have lots of show in a row ki hume relax karne ka bhi time nahi milega & now u r saying this..he asked in confusion..


Subbu - actually shows to kafi hai but payment ka chakkar phas rha hai & you know na subbu ko paison ke baare mein koi tension nahi chahiye isiliye Main humesa unhi parties ke show leta hu Jo payment dene mein aana kani na kare.


Aryan - hmm that I know for you money matters more than anything ..


Subbu - ha because money is key of all the door in ur life..


(Subbu is a well known dancer he has his own dance group(Subbu,Natasha,Aryan,Sangy,Kabir & Swati) & they perform every month in different-2 cities all the group members are good friend of him but they are not aware of his real face & intention..)




Aryan - OK now going will see u in the evening..


Subbu - OK or ha inform them to meet me at 6pm on reception late na ho koi qki humari flight 8:30pm ki hai...Aryan nodded & went from there & then informed all other members about timing of their flight


Day passed speedily & all gathered on reception & greets each other when Natasha noticed that Tanya(Main female dancer) is not present there


Natasha - hey subbu where is Tanya?..hearing this subbu's face turned pale while others member too noticed this & asked the same


Swati - ha yaar Tanya kahan reh gyi ? Show khatam hone ke baad se WO dikhi nahi ..


Sangy - ha dude she is fine na?


Subbu - she is not here ..


Aryan - then where is she?


Subbu - she returned back to her city as she has an important work..


Natasha - don't mind subbu but it's so strange that after our all shows the main female dancer suddenly disappeared stating that she has work or she don't want to perform etc etc always lame excuses..


Subbu gets angry "so what can I do in this kya main unhe gayab karta hu he didn't realizes what he said but kabir interrupted "arey guys he is right uski kya galti agar har baar female dancer ek show k baad chali jati hai may be the thinks that after this show they had became a big star & wants to work in other groups & after all humara dance group hai hi best that we have became a Star specially Our main dancers all are noy much convinced but didn't argue further meanwhile their taxies arrived & all settled in it while subbu & kabir went together


Subbu - thanks yaar kabir you saved me warna aaj toh..


Kabir - it's ok yaar but u have to be more careful this time I interrupted & sort out the things but ye baar nahi ho Sakta..


Subbu - I know I'll be careful from next time ..


Other side Swati ,Natasha,Sangy ,Aryan was in another taxi


Natasha - guys don't you think that something is fishy..


Swati - ha yaar kuch to hai warna har baar sirf main dancer hi kyu humara group chodh ke chali jati hai ..


Sangy - ha dude & that to without meeting & informing us..


Aryan - ajeeb to mujhe bhi lagta hai but we don't have another way except to believe subbu..


Natasha - hmm wo to hain ..like this they talked for something & soon all reached airport & take their flight for Mumbai after 3 hours they reached their & check in a hotel..


Kabir & subbu has stayed together in room while Natasha & Swati in one room & sangy and Aryan shares a room..


At night subbu & kabir were drinking in a bar


Kabir - so subbu when is our next show?


Subbu - next week but before that we have to search for another new lead dancer of our group..


Kabir - hmm but one week is a small time for this as we always present a best dancer who is more beautiful than the previous one..saying he winks & both starts laughing


Next morning all group members gathered to have breakfast


Swati - subbu hum kahan practice karenge ?


Subbu - I had booked another room in this hotel on 7th floor & that area is good for our practice as their is no noise ..


Natasha - ohh that's great but what about our main dancer itni jldi wo kaha se layenge?


Subbu - that's leave on me I'll handle it you guys just start do practice from evening.. All nodded & went from there while kabir & subbu headed toward their next destination a club both reached there & ordered their drinks & starts enjoying it when suddenly a group of young girls entered inside the club & they all starts dancing when subbu's eyes fell on a girl who is dancing so well her dance moves showing that she is an awesome dancer he was trying to saw her face BT didn't as her back is facing his face


Kabir saw him & asked "what happened subbu? Kya dekh rha?


Subbu pointed toward that girl "look at that girl in blue dress how well dancing she is he said looking at her


Kabir - hmm yrr but uska face nahi dikh rha ..


Subbu - hmm that's what I'm trying to see I hope she is more beautiful than her dance moves so my problem get solved.. Suddenly she turned making him stop his breath for second she is looking so beautiful like a diva she is wearing blue dress with beautiful earrings & done very less make-up still shinning like a star..


Subbu was so mesmerized seeing her beauty & now he wants her as a main dancer of his group


Subbu - she will be the main dancer of my group.. he said smiling wickedly


Kabir - waoh bro don't you think tune kuch jyada jaldi hi decide kar liya I mean it's depends on her that she wants to join our group or not..


Subbu(laughs) - don't talk rubbish kabir you know naa me that if I want something I'll get it by any cost & no one has dare till date to deny me you just wait & watch kaise WO ladki khud manti hai..saying he went on dance floor & joined those girls he starts dancing those girls gets impressed by his dance moves & starts dancing after sometimes they climb down from floor & starts drinking when subbu comes to them


Subbu - hello girls I must say you all dance so well & specially you can I know ur name ms. ..he said pointing toward that girl


She smiles "BTW you too dance so well I really enjoyed hii I'm ishita arora


Subbu - ishita nice name I'm subbu..then he introduced with other four girls too


Ishita - don't know why but I think I had seen you before..she tried to remember


Subbu - actually me & my dance group does shows in many cities so may be u had seen me there..


Ishita - ohh yes "JHANKAAR DANCE GROUP ..he nodded


Ishita gets excited "ohh godd I can't believe that I get chance to meet you & sorry I didn't recognized you actually this club's lighting


Subbu - hey it's alright..


Ishita - you I always wanted to share dance floor with you & today I got that chance.. She said with so much excitement meanwhile kabir to joined them & subbu introduced him with ishita & her frnds they starts talking


Subbu - ishita you are an amazing dancer why don't you try to make it ur profession..


Ishita - sometimes I tried but didn't succeeded..


Subbu - would u like to joined my group as a lead dancer..ishita & her friends were so shocked hearing this & saw each other


Ishita - u r kidding na?


Subbu - no I'm not while I'm very much serious about it so tell me ur decision & koi jaldi nahi hai achhe se soch lo & if u want to join just give me a call here is my card..he give her his card & take leave from there


Precap : Raman's entry..


That's all for now hope you all liked it for early update hit like button & leave ur feedback..


Love

Harshita



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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Awesome chappy
Update soon
Hope she'll be safe

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