Adiya Os : Alvida

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Adiya Os : Alvida


As per Aditya's instructions Noor came to the lake side with Zoya.

"Noor hume aap itne rath ko yaha kyu lekar ayi hai...abhu ko agar pata chala hum itne rath ko bahar nikle hai tho"

"Aapi aap isse place ko pehchanti hai"

She looked around it was the same place where she had bid goodbye to Aditya last time. It was nostalgic. Suddenly her eyes were filled with tears. She controlled her emotions and turned around to look at Noor.

"Aap hume yaha" before she could continue she heard a familiar voice behind.

"Noor ko maine kaha tha tumhe yaha lane ke liye"

She turned around in the direction of voice. Aditya Hooda was standing right behind her. But today he looked different. Neither there was smile on his face nor he was angry.

"Hum chalte hai aapi" her thoughts were disturbed by Noor voice.

"Noor please mere ek akhri kam kar dena" before Zoya could react or say anything Noor nodded and left.

"Aditya aap yaha kya kar rahe hai...aap ko pata hai na kal humara nikha hai" she frowned.

"shh" he kept finger on her lips. "I know kal tumhari shadhi hai...aur mai tumhara jadha waqt nahi lunga"

He moved a step behind and moved his hand forward for handshake.

"Congratulations for your engagement..sorry mai aaj nahi aapaya"

She kept starring. "Are ayese kya dekh rahi ho...mere Best friend ki engagement hogayi hai...wish tho karunga na"

She neither moved, nor did a say a word.

"Ok let me come to the point...Zoya please Arshad se shadhi math karo"

"Aap phir se shuru hogaye"

"Meri bath tho suno...what I mean is...abhi math karo"

"Kehna kya chahte hai aap"

"dekho main janta hu tum ye shadhi sirf issiliye kar rahi ho..kyu ki tum mujh par gussa ho..Arshad is good guy...shayad tumhare liye bhi tikh hai...but use shadhi karne se pehle ek dusre jan lo..ha tumhne sahi suna...maine bahot socha isse bareme and I realized may be Arshad is right for you..but don't be in hurry because of me...maine yaha tumhe sirf good bye kehne ke liye bhulaya hai...and I thot ye location perfect rahega"

Zoya had nothing to say. She kept starring at him. He moved his hand forward again.

"Ms Zoya Siddqui...sahi mahinye mai shayad humara safar yahi takh tha...abh ye math puchna ki kya hum dubhara nahi milenge..kyu ki isse bhar uska jawabh Na hoga Zoya..aaj ke badh Aditya Hooda tumhare zindagi se humesha ke liye chala jayega"

Her eyes were filled with tears.

"and ya..ye tumhare liye...tumhara wedding gift" he handed over a envelope to her.

"Aaj se Zosh officially sirf tumhari company rahegi...maine apne sare shares tumhare nam kar diye hai...abh mera Zosh se koi lena dena nahi hai"

She was not ready for it. She had no idea what to say or how to react.

"Are kuch bhi nahi bhologi...kamse kam thank you tho bhol dho"

A lone tear made a way out. She was about to say something when she heard someone walking towards them. "Arshad aap yaha"

"Ha Noor ne kaha hume aapko pick karne ke liye" he turned towards Aditya "Aap phirse Zoya ko tang kar rahe hai"

"Calm down Arshad..Noor ko maine hi kaha tha tumhe yaha bhulane ke liye"

"matlabh hum kuch samje nahi"

"Mai yaha tum donho se ek sath mafi magna chahta tha...jho huva use bhul kar nayi shurvat karte hai...so what say Mr Arshad Habib ...friends??' "Hi...I am captian Aditya Hooda " He forwarded his hand. Arshad was bit reluctant but eventually he gave in.

"Meri Zoya aaj se tumhari...iss ka khayal rakhana...aur ha kabhi isse koi takleef pahuchi tho yaad rakhana mujse bhura koi nahi hoga" he laughed.

He turned around towards Zoya.

"Mai humesha se tumhe khush dekhana chahtha ...agar tumhari khushi isse mai hai tho yahi sahi"

He smiled at them.

"Chalo abh mujhe niklana chahiye...vaise mujhe bhulna itna asan nahi hai..lekin koshish kar lena...good bye Zoya this time for forever... Alvida"

He kept walking until his shadow had disappeared.

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Edited by Whispersoflove - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
It was so heart wrenching
I m in tears right now😭
Will comment in detail later
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sad one...
It looks like Aditya has just lost all hope to get his love
Yet he is ready to leave if it happens to be where Zoya's happiness lies
Beautiful
I liked this version of their story
Maybe of Adi takes such step then zoya realizes his importance
Nice one
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
This was so Heartbreaking
I am in tears feeling like I am losing my love
But I think Adi should really back off in the show may be tab Zoya ko realise ho ki how much he means to her and how much she loves him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Beautiful os. .. Loved it.. Hope we see something like this Zoya stops Aditya from going...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
You made me cry! 😭
If something like this happens in the show then Zo would definitely realize what Adi is to her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is heart wrenching 😭😭
Beautifully penned
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😭
Edited by sim.07 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was quite emotional...lovely os dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it
Edited by Prizi - 7 years ago

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