Bang-on fabulous 😊 I was so intrigued & drowned in reading every emotional aspect of how Aditya & Zoya expressed their sentiments. This was logical & an apt way to convince each other about their feelings. Aditya being the sweetheart of a friend (Oops! Azeez Dost 😛) he is to Zoya, fulfilled his responsibility of defining what living life to the fullest means despite of every issue Zoya had to face & how Zoya had been strong through the journey of betrayal. One thing I couldn't help but notice in your writing was how true the fact is that Aditya had been that light in Zoya's life, the knight in the shining armor literally to save her from every problem she had to face & how they became so close in the process. Reading these points made me remember many memories entangled with their past. What they used to be & how they are now 😳 I so wanted this story to be an emotional battle in their minds only, no other drama, nothing else. These two in some peaceful privacy of his room, away from the worries of the world, thinking only about themselves n simply speaking their mind to eachother without any hesitation. I m glad I could convey this intention of mine to you readers aptly. Both Adi n Zoya have been a light in eachother's lives in their own way and that exactly I tried to write.
Zoya's cute antics of following Adi & climbing up to his room 😆 Some strong guts she has thanks to Aditya. Haha, yeah, she's strong Zoya now!😆 Interesting but where he explained to her about how she survived through & how she is an independently strong woman now 😃 That letter revelation to Aditya was just perfect 😆 I thought that was the best way I could make her confess. n there were many reasons behind it...Zoya mein Adi ki atma dikhayi deti hai toh why not this?😉 Then, it is Adi who helps her in every situation, indirectly, he only helped her to express her feelings. Till now, Zoya's beauty n her innocent nature have attracted Adi the most, I wanted to show Adi spell-bounded by her smartness. And the last, I wanted to show Zoya's teasing side as well. I hope I could get this all in a single scene.😊How cute it was that he was in for a major surprise & totally liked how they promised to each other.You gotta write more on Aditya & Zoya for sure because you've that talent in you to grab the entire attention of the reader & here you've just done a top notch job 👏
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