Samaina FF : Yeh jawaani hai deewani part 6(Pg 4)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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The story is very much different from show tracing the lives of youngsters and their difficulties facing in today's world like social networking, ragging, bullying and things related to them. I have added some new characters here from one of my favorite show Paravarish 2 if anybody watched it before. Basically the plot revolves around this all teenagers who step up into real world during college and face new challenges. Amidst new relations form friendship and love grows.


Location : Mostly all of them are from different places but will meet soon on same college.


Characters


Sameer Maheshwari : Hailing from very rich family Raised by nanaji with good values and upbringing. He is still pampered a lot by his parents with the privilege of only one child in whole family. Resides in Delhi with his family


Munna : Best friend of Sameer and Pandit. He loves to chill and carries great sense of humor whole time making fun environment


Pandit : Similar to Munna, he is another part of Sameer's life and can do anything for them. His ambition is most likely adventure and hanging out


Naina Agarwal : Shy, introvert who is very studios with dream of becoming a big writer. Her only ambition is to achieves something before settling down in future. Raised by her chachaji and chachi after her father's death (No Rakesh, Tai or Taaaji). Resides in Ahmedabad


Preeti Agarwal : Beauty with brains who carries spark with her. She is no arrogant or jealous to anybody and becomes shield to Naina at times. Least interested in studies


Rest of all are same Swati, Kamya, Hema, Rohan Arjun, Shefali and Vishaka




Couples of this story


Sameer Naina

Munna Swati


Here is the tuff competition for me right now. I am still in dilemma with this four and I want to leave this on readers as story goes forward

Rohan-Preeti-Pandit-Kamya



Teaser


"Yes yes, Chachiji, chachu, Preeti, Arjun bhai, I came first again sweet voice echoes in whole house with papers in hand

Bela : what happened dear, why are you shouting

Naina : I came first again in school and now you just see how any college reject my admission

"Thats such great news, I will distribute sweets in whole colony today dear Bela gets happy

Part 1 : Pg 1

Part 2 : Pg 2

Part 3 ; Pg 2

Part 4 : Pg 3

Part 5 : Pg 4

Part 6 : Pg 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the concept especially the title of your story
Just a little bit confused about characters but that will be overcome when i'll start reading your updates
Good going 👏
Update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting concept. But there are too many characters and couples. I am confused 👎🏼Maybe you start of with 2 couples and gradually increase once your readers familiarize with rest of the characters.
Just a thought. But I hope you update fast and don't forget to PM me.

Good luck.👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Looking forward to this one.. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you guys for such good response. Sorry for confusion with too many characters. But I promise the updates will give you more idea of story with all couples and bondings 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Keep going. I want PreeHan plz...😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice cs and lovely title. can you please put rohan n hema's pic?I duno them.I prefer preedit
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1

Ahmedabad


Naina and Preeti waits for their 12th standard results desperately.

Bela : you didn't get ready, come on hurry up today are your results

Naina : I am ready from past one hour but Preeti is praying in temple continuously

"Bappa please help me, if today I don't get good marks papa will not let me go to college please please save me Preeti starts singing

Naina : how much will you pray come on hurry up (drags her out)

Preeti ; you stop it, I know you are topper and you don't need god's blessing

Naina : if you had worked hard then you won't be dealing with god ji

Preeti : shut up

Bela feeds curd to both girls before leaving and blesses them


On way, Preeti and Naina meets Swati, Kamya and Hema who are their neighbors and school best friends.

Swati ; girls my heart is pumping so fast, final results

Kamya : I know even I am sweating badly right now thinking

Naina : relax guys we will be fine

Swati : you are fine but here our nerves are high our parents will put ban on going out of house this time


The girls reaches school Pragati Vidhya ka Mandir to get results for their 12th std. Everybody sits in class busy in prayer. The teacher starts calling name and hands them the envelopes


"So the first ranker in class again is Naina Agarawal Teacher announces the names of the toppers


Everybody claps

"And second topper is, Swati teacher announces most expected and surprising thing ever happened


"Swati you cheater, you said I dont' know anything, from today I won't ever sit on your back Preeti scolds her

Naina ; why are you all blaming her?

Swati is still in shock about her results

Naina : you have done fabulous so proud of you (hugs her)


Preeti, Kamya and Hema ends up passing with average.

Kamya : finally its celebration time, lets go to law garden we will have blast

The girls go to celebrate final year and goes to gol gappa vendor


It starts raining


Hema : guys see who came to double our happiness


Naina : Jeb mein humrai do hi rupaiya

Preeti Duniya ko rakhe thenge pe bhaiya

Swati (dances with Naina) : Sukh dukh ko khuti pe tange

Kamya : Aur paap punya chooti se baandhe
Nache hai hum ta ta thaiya

The girls dances together in middle of road

Are hum to aise hai bhaiya
Are hum to aise hai bhaiya
Yeh apna fashion ha bhaiya
Are hum to aise hai bhaiya

Ek gali mein bum bum bhole
Duji gali mein allah miya
Ek gali mein gunje azaane
Duji gali mein bansi bajiya

Hema : Sab ki labo mein lahu
Bahe hai lahu bahe hai

Preeti : Apni rago mein ganga maiya
Suraj aur chanda bhi dhalta

Kamya : Apne ishaao pe chalta
Duniya ka gol gol pahiya

Are hum to aise hai bhaiya
Are hum to aise hai bhaiya
Yeh apna fashion ha bhaiya
Are hum to aise hai bhaiya

Agarwal house


"Chachi chachi Naina comes shouting

Bela : yes my daughter came first again, what about you? (asks Preeti)

Preeti : just consider I passed

Bela : this girl won't mend, today I will distribute sweets in whole colony

Preeti : don't forget my fave barfi

"Really? which big task you achieved Bela twists her ears

Naina : chachi, I need some money, Rakshabandhan is coming

Bela : oh yes, but dear when your chacha comes in evening you take from him

Naina : okay

Bela : you both are so wet go change first I will cook your both favorite food today


Later in evening Anand gets very proud of his daughter for passing their 12th grade with distinction.

Arjun : wow champ you did it again

Naina : thank you Arjun bhaiya

Arjun : don't fly so high, Rakshabandhan is coming save some battering for that time



Precap : Rakshabandhan. Everybody starts college process. Sameer entry


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Posted: 6 years ago
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happy that finally you started it.wow naina the topper.didn't swati do her exams well?why was she surprised about her result?all Preeti scenes were funny.bela naina Preeti scene was nice.the girls gol gappa rain dance was lovely.arjun naina scene was nice.waiting for sameer's entry.ecxpecting pics
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story. Liked the carefree nature of the girls. Golgappa and getting wet in rain is a deadly combination of masthi. Now waiting to see the entry of Sameer and rest of the characters.
Pls continue soon.

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