*Maine Khud ko de diya hai tujhko* - Mehrya OS

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Throwback to mehrya's incomplete Suhagrat that aired last year.(P.s..my inspiration)

Too late...still a small birthday gift to Anu di 😉




**MAINE KHUDKO DE DIYA HAI TUJHKO**




Shaurya was hell worried when he heard about her accident. He traced her location nd finally reached the spot. He was searching her nd screaming her name out madly. The tinkling sound of her anklets broke his trance. He followed the sound in suspicion nd finally reached the spot , a romantic set up. He was in awe of the figure in front of him...yes his beautiful wife was standing there draped in an elegant chiffon off white saree. Her intricate curves were clearly marked by his eyes. The Gazebo lights and the burning scented candles were subdued by the charismatic beauty and aura emanating from her.
A wide naughty smile crept on his lips nd he slowly made his way to reach her. His every step fastened her breaths. He back hugged her nd rested his chin on her shoulder nd rejoiced her fragrance. He thanked her for faking the accident. She was bit confused from his gesture. "thank you Mrs. Khanna..atleast your unfolding your romantic side...he said while caressing her hair. "I'm fed up dear...It's all because that am too handsome that you need to do all these...he said with a chuckle. Uffo..atleast today don't boast yourself..see how I've planned surprise for you with love...she complained. Ok..fine wifey...today I'll just see you, I"ll just feel you, I"ll just touch you, I'll just talk about you...because I just owe you...he said while pulling her closer onto him.

Meine khudko de diya hai tujhko
(I've given myself to you)
Mein tera...Hoon tera
(I'm only yours now)

He placed a gentle kiss on her forehead and caressed her face. She blushed deep red.


Kaate na kate , leta hai yeh karwatein din mera..din mera
(My days are tossing and turning around but they aren't passing)

She stealthily gets rid of his hold and runs away teasing him. While he follows her like a predator. After getting exhausted she lands up in the swing nd he makes it quick to cage her. He bends down nuzzling his nose onto hers. He pics up a rose flower nd gently caresses it on her body..all the way from her creamy waist to those luscious lips.She gets nd tries to leave gently pushing him aside. He makes it quick to hold the pallu of her saree..nd she's forced to stay back.

Aa tujh Mein bitaaon ratiyaan
(I want to spend nights inside you)
Dil dil ko sunaaye batiyaan
(May our hearts talk to one another)
Aa tujh Mein bitaaon ratiyaan
O tu mujh Mein kahin pe bas ja
(you also come and reside inside me someplace)

He pleated the ends of her saree while nearing her. His proximity was sending shivers down her spine. And he was near her with less than a nano metre distance. She felt his breath falling on her face. She lifted her face nd gently cupped his bearded cheeks. She gently rubbed her soft cheeks onto his beard to experience that tickling sensation. Their eyes were locked by their intense gazes. She slowly unbuttons his shirt nd caresses his naked chest. She slowly bends to peck the tattoo of her name imprinted in his chest.


Tune chhua...toh main dhadakne laga
(when you touched me, my heart started beating)
Dil Ki dua...hothon pe rakhne laga
(The prayer inside my heart came to my lips)


He slowly bends to capture her lips. She slightly pushes him nd runs away.He focuses on her footsteps nd tries to follow those.

Meri Raahein...kadmom pe tere ruke
(My roads come and stop at your feet)


He follows her nd finally catches her..nd tightly holds her by her waist. Their hands get busy caressing each other's body nd they seal their kiss in the moonlight.
After tasting her he looks intently into her eyes seeking permission to own her. And her love filled eyes glitters..uttering the unsaid words..make me yours. He picks her up in his arms and nears this swing decorated with floral bed.

Yeh Panaahein...sajde Mein tere jhuke
(These shelters are bowing down in front of you)


He gently caresses her bare waist. She shifts her side giving him access to her bare back. He gently caresses her back and slowly pecks there with all love. She aches her back..nd feels like melting in the heat of his touch.And as the night progress they explore each other nd finally became one.

Aa tujhme bitaaon ratiyaan..
Dil dil ko sunaayen batiyaan...
Aa tujh me bitaaon ratiyaan..
O tu mujh Mein kahin pe bas jaa...


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That's it guys
Hope u"ll like it..


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnx for this hot and romantic os..
U have beautifully written the part.👏..chalo cvs na sahi par tumne uss raat ke mehrya ke wo adhure kam pura kardi apne story me😉😛...and the best thing about ur os is their is no disturbance from that chipkali nikki and her goons
Enjoyed reading it...keep giving us os along with ur other story

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my god surprise pe surprise😛
Thank you Shinu baby🤗
Muaaah love you baby

A big hug to you😳


Wow what a hot update 😳 voh aduri rath Bina disturbing ke poori ho gayi ☺️


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You written very well shinu😛our beech me voh gana superb👏
It's a beautiful os baby
Once again thank you 😳

Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great one dear. Really really hot...hope ki serial mein bhi Kuch alsa hota... great one. Do write more...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wooow shinu superb OS . 😛
You have Beautifully wriiten , we can well imagine mehrya in this scenes .😉
We didn't get the chance to c full SR in serial , but we have read it here and it is great to read Shinu . Thanks for writing this wonderful OS . 😛
Keep writing dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was Very romantic and beautiful , shinu ...the thought of Nikki was not there to disturb them was great 😆...finally managed to claim wat was rightfully his 😳...
Sure anu wud have loved her gift ...good job..
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Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

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Thnx for this hot and romantic os..
U have beautifully written the part.👏..chalo cvs na sahi par tumne uss raat ke mehrya ke wo adhure kam pura kardi apne story me😉😛...and the best thing about ur os is their is no disturbance from that chipkali nikki and her goons
Enjoyed reading it...keep giving us os along with ur other story


Thanks a lot Lima 🤗
😆 don't know how this update sounds hot...may be because of mehrya's chemistry..
Glad that you liked it 😊
Thanks for your motivation... 😉
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Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Oh my god surprise pe surprise😛

Thank you Shinu baby🤗
Muaaah love you baby

A big hug to you😳


Wow what a hot update😳voh aduri rath Bina disturbing ke poori ho gayi☺️

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They become one now
You written very well shinu😛our beech me voh gana superb👏
It's a beautiful os baby
Once again thank you😳



Awww..this is so cute 😳
Thank you Anu di...a big hug to you too🤗
Glad that you liked it.. I thought you"ll not
Well..those pics are making this thread hot...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter


Thanks a lot Lima 🤗
😆 don't know how this update sounds hot...may be because of mehrya's chemistry..
Glad that you liked it 😊
Thanks for your motivation... 😉

i found this os hot cz i was imagining that jhula romance...shirtless shaurya...sexy look of mehek 😳😉...so u don't found this os of ur hot... then what is ur imagination about hotness tell us writing another os which u think will hot as hell😉
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Originally posted by: Harmankav

Great one dear. Really really hot...hope ki serial mein bhi Kuch alsa hota... great one. Do write more...


Thank you Manvi..🤗
Glad that you liked it.. 😛

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