Ishra ss-#2 kyunki..tu dhadkan main dil, pt 21 on pg 149 updt on 13/5 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Hi congrats for your 50th ss...👏🥳
Your story r superb, amazing & awesome...
U r such a amazing writer...
Interesting prologue...
Ishita request raman to safe her...
Raman feel guilty to see ishita condition...
Continue soon..
Thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations Di...
Interesting prologue Di..
Plz update soon...
Thank u...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pretty please fr me
Start this one..
Please
Fr ur nidu aka personal bhootni
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi
now u get 160+ likes
so dear pls update the nextpart
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh pagal aurat kb update dogi
Is wali ka..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Author's note -hi everyone, finally I am here with part 1 of this story, though many were continuously asking for update but I couldn't because the thread was locked. And finally it got opened and one of my reader, mehwish asked for its update again, so finally I am here with its update, enjoy. But before that read the prologue.

PART 1

Raman was looking at ishita without any expression while ishita was looking sense every second.

Ishita hold Raman's hand tight and said -please mujhe bacha lijiye. Please,main marna nahi chahti.

Raman look at her and said -sorry, I can't save u. Actually main kisi ko nahi bacha sakta. Bas sabki maut ka kaaran banta hoon main.

Ishita hold her hand and said -its paining. Please help.

Raman thought for a while and said -but jisse bhi main bachane ki koshish karta hoon, woh mar jaata hai. I think mujhe chale jaana chahiye, if I will go from here, someone will surely come and save u. But agar main yahin raha toh tum pakka mar jaogi. Saying so he was going when ishita hold his hand and said -please mujhe chod kar mat jaiye, aap chale gaye toh main mar jaaungi, please save me.

Raman -main rahunga tumhare saath tab bhi tum mar jaogi, I can't save anyone.

Ishita -nahi, u can save me. Please save me.

Raman -main nahi bacha paaunga tumhe, why don't u understand. He said and was going when he heard her saying -u can save me, i trust u, u can save me.

He heard and all he could remember was her words, galti ki tum par vishwas karke.

Raman -mujhpe vishwas karne ki galti mat Karo.

Ishita -please, I trust u for my life. Don't break my trust. She said and finally fainted .

Raman turned to go but remember his father's preaching -never break someone's trust.

He stood there for sometime and finally picked her in his arms. He start walking looking for some help but sadly no-one was there. He walked for long and couldn't find any help or hospital, so he finally took her to his house. His house was all messed up, though it was a beautiful house but very badly arranged like none came there since long.

He put her on the couch and went to washroom. He washed his face and then went to kitchen. He warmed the knife and reached ishita. He took cotton, spirit and others things to clean the wound. He clean the wound and then poked the hot knife in her wound. She winced in pain even in her unconscious condition and he took out the bullet at once.

He clean the wound again with spirit and applied ointment to it. He bandaged her wound and then said -tum bach gayi yaa Mar gayi. He said slapping her slowly only to get no response.

Raman -lagta hai mar gayi,i told her not to trust me. But nahi suni, mar gayi naa. He said and his eyes got moist.

He rested his head on her shoulder and said -meri wajah se phir koi mar gaya. I am just too bad, sabke marne ki wajah ban jaata hoon. He was saying when he hear her heartbeat. He put his ear over her heart and said -lagta hai zinda hai, koi nahi. Subah tak mar jayegi. He said and was going but he fell on her. He looked at her with dripping eyes and adjusted himself over her only.

Soon he too slept over her adjusting herself over her tummy.

Next morning, Raman got up feeling the sunlight over his face and saw him sleeping over ishita. He got up at once and look around.

Raman -ghar toh mera hi hai, but who is she. He said and shaked her only to feel her laying lifelessly.

Raman got worried and said shaking her -hey, who r u aur mere ghar mein kya kar rahi ho?? He was saying trying to remember where he got her but sadly he didn't remember anything. He look at her and saw her body turning blue near the wound.

Raman -isse zeher chad raha hai, kya hua Isse, he thought but don't remember anything again. He picked it in his arms without wasting any minute and ran out of the house. He put it in his car and drove towards the nearest hospital.

He picked her in his arms and went inside running.

Raman -hello, excuse me. Koi hai. This girl is injured. He was screaming on top of his voice when two doctors came out along with few compounders .

Raman -she is dying, save her.

Doctor check her and said -isse toh goli lagi thi, uska zeher phail raha hai.

Raman -that I know, u just treat her.

Doc -yeh police case hai, we can't her like this.

Raman -arey yeh mar jayegi.

Doc -sorry,we can't help. saying so he turned when Raman hold him by collar and said -Raman bhalla ko naa sunne ki aadat nahi hai. Treat her.

Doc -but aise bina FIR ke treat karenge toh phans jayenge. It's written in law.

Raman -ji nahi, the law is that u have to treat and save ones life before thinking about anything else. It's ur duty. So treat her.

Doc -tum mujhe kanoon mat sikhao, I know it better then u. Tum bas itna jaano that u have to save her. Treat her now, he roared in anger making the doctors shiver.they signalled the compounders to take ishita inside while Raman settle on the bench nearby. He took out his cigarette and start smoking it.

A staff showed him the sign, no smoking. He smiled and removed the board and said -now it's OK naa. He said and start smoking while the lady went making a disgusting face.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Amazing update dear
Raman take ishita to hospital
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
intresting start
Raman saved ishu and treated her wound and passed out
her wound got infected he didnt remember what happened and also who is she
he took her to hospital doctors are not ready to treat her without complaint
but Raman threatened them atlast they started treating ishu
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Fabulous update di
Ishita trusts raman
He treated her
He didn't remember anything abt her in the morning
He took her to the hospital
Lets see what happens next
Ty 4 d pm too di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow nice start...
Congratulations on new story.

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