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Posted: 7 years ago

I have a request
Can I have a translation pls 😃

I know the basic Hindi but I don't know the meaning to a lot of the words 😭

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LIKEDMG

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Posted: 7 years ago

Some words even I don't know the meaning but it is good...

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war_is_peace

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Posted: 7 years ago

this never happens...but somehow i like this even better in english! 😲👏

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Pandalicious

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for the translation Mahi! 😆 I always need them lol

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Raijeera

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautifully described ❤️

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Antara123

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Posted: 7 years ago

My phone has major keypad problems, so I'll comment as soon as I finish reading one or two.

Dil dhadakta hai Tere chehre se? Eh? Doesn't it sound like slightly off? Tere chehre ke liye or tujhe dekhne se or something? But the first line was awesome. Not criticising, Mahi. Just commenting. 👏

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Antara123

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Posted: 7 years ago

I loved the second stanza. Jis something something hi Kya. Loved it. On point.

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Antara123

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Posted: 7 years ago

The second last stanza is okay, idk I felt the language was changing from a newer dialect to an older one. But the last two lines of your Shayari are super coolll.

Frigging awesome. Amazing Mahi!!!!

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks Naj for those points.

I know it isn't upto the mark. I'd already stated it

Couldn't frame it well, schemes gone haywire and yes the dialect is funny.

It looks disjoint too.

I so appreciate your criticism :)

Thankyou!😳

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