REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 14

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G-Why am I even arguing with you...you...who doesn't even know Akhil...

 

Tears are rolling down as much she stops

 

M-Yeah why argue... coz you feel like what I am saying might be true... isiliye you argue to convince me and to convince your self...you don't argue about gravity... but you do about Akhil...

 

G-I don't wanna talk about it..I don't wanna talk to you..!..Akhil made a wrong decision trusting you

 

Nurse chilayi Maan par ki

 

Nurse-Sir aap disturb kar rahe ho patient ko. Bahar jao we cant work like this

 

M -yeah yeah

 

Keh kar bahar a gaaya

 

Geet closes her eyes and falls on the bed thinking ki is it so like that ki sab ko pata hai

 

Maan feels irritated and thinks she is crazy. He pities her some but mostly he feels angrily irritated

 

He hasn't shown any of it till now wo to aaj Geet ko lagi to Maan ka bhi volcano phoot gaya

 

Jab Geet ki patti-wati lag gayi  to Maan ne kaha chalo tumhe ghar chod doon

 

Geet ne mooh phoola liya ki nahi baat karni Maan se. Maan ganda!

 

Maan doesn't care about Akil, he wasn't bleeding; Geet was and Akhil wahi bleed ho hokar mar jaye all the better for Maan par Geet se koi bhi personal dushmani nahi hai. So he doesn't want her hurt in the whole process

 

Geet mooh seal karke baith gai Maan ke saath

 

M-Tum kahna rehti ho?

 

Geet is sitting in same position, just her eyes glance sideways then looks away

 

She looks like an anime in anger

 

M-Kya mere ghar jaana hai?

 

G-Chup raho ! Akhil's home

 

Maan looks at her with what ???'expression...he didn't know ki Geet and Akhil were that close

 

Uski research mein bhi ye nahi aya  ki they were that close

 

To achanak usko yaad ayaa ki...but he didn't know the details...but maybe that is where Geet lived...kuch that toh  about a family living in Akhil's outhouse

 

M-Toh ghar se office bhi tum he laati ho? No wonder uski gf se nahi banti...tum chodogi to koi aur aayega naa

 

Maan starts driving while Geet gives him a hard glare

 

He doesn't care for her glares; glaring at him won't make her life better

 

G-Tum Akhil ke saath kaam karke...uske baare mein aisa kaise bol sakte ho? He trusts you so much!

 

M-Tumhe sach se problem hai, ye problem meri nahi hai. Main Akhil ke liye kaam karta hoon, kya iska matlab hai ki main sach nahi bol sakta? Do I have to be a liar scumbag to qualify for a post in this company?

 

G-Main kal hi jaake Akhil se bol doon toh?

 

M-Kya bologi? Ki maine kaha ki you are madly in love with him and khud ka kuch hosh nahi hai ya ye, ki he needs you to even eat? Go ahead, bol do. Kam se kam tum apne love ka confession to karogi kyunki I am pretty sure tumne kuch nahi bataya hoga

 

She is  chup...expression blank for few minutes then speaks up

 

G-I don't love him..we are just childhood friends...main usse pyaar karti to kabhi uski help nahi karti...uski gf ke saath

 

M-Huh? And main kyun manu tum sach bol rahi ho? Apparently... Akhil ke under jo kam karta hia usse jhoot bolna hota hai warna logon ko accha nahi lagta. Waise bhi, tum usse pyar karo, nahi karo, tum khud ki life kharab kar rahi ho. Aur mujhe convince karne ki zarurat nahi hai. I don't gossip. Tum kiske liye kya feel karti ho ye main kisi aur ko nhai kahunga; tumhari baat thi tum se keh di, bass

 

Itni der mein ghar aa jaata hai

 

Maan Geet ko drop kar deta hai

 

Geet uthke chali jati hai without turning

 

Geet ka scarf wahin reh gaya

 

Maan ne uthakar rakh liya pocket mein

 

Maan bhi chala gaya jahan Akhil ko chod kar aya tha

 

Akhil ro raha tha footpath pe baith baitha

 

Antara ne suna diya

 

Maan aaya

 

Boss ko ek ber ki bottle pakdai

 

Akhil hugs Maan...

 

A-She called me gay!

 

Maan pats his back

 

M-You need to show her that you are the man

 

A-How?

 

M-How? By being the man!! Chalo abhi chalte hain. Men don't do anything without thinking right?

 

A-Right

 

M-Waise bhi you were good. Achha bahagya uss ladke ko. First step you have already taken. Now let's go and plan everything else

 

A-Oh I am so glad I have such a friend

 

Maan ko ek aur hug

 

M- Drink...

 

Maan says pointing to the bottle

 

A-No but Geet says I get drunk and can't take alcohol

 

M- You are a man! Of course you can take alcohol. Any man can hold his alcohol aur nahi to main hu na...I'll drive

 

Maan legaya usse ghar

 

Utara usse

 

Geet road ke beech mein gate ke paas bare foot...baal in ponytail...in her night suit khadi thi

 

Maan ne Geet ko horn mara ki side ho

 

Geet jhat se car pehchaan gai

 

Bhaag ke aai aage, par Maan ke horn bajane par raaste se hatt gai

 

Maan ne car furr se andar ghusa di

 

Geet peeche peeche aayi bhaag ke bare foot

 

Maan ne gate ke samne car roki

 

Utra phir Akhil ko utara jo 2 peg mein dheere ho gaya tha

 

Hath dala kandha diya, bahar nikala gate tak le kar gaya

 

G-What is this?...Akhil! Akhil! Kya hua Akhil ko? Tumne kuch kiya? Maan!

 

M-He had 2 peg beer

 

G-Hawww tumne kyun peene diya? Is he ok? Oh my!

 

M- Beer pii hai zeher nai! Stop protecting him! How can he be a man if you keep treating him like a kid? Gate kholo

 

G-Tum sab buri aadat lagwa rahe ho

 

Geet opens the door

 

G-Ouch !!!!

 

Something pricks into her feet but she brushes it off, limping she follows Maan

 

Maan brings Akhil inside

 

Pure ghar mein Akhil aur uski maa ke pics hain

 

M-Room kahan hai?

 

G-Upar

 

Maan wahin neeche sofe par baitha deta hai Akhil ko aur Geet ko pakad kar chair par Baithta hai

 

G-Huh?

 

He kneels down in front of her takes holds up her leg

 

G-Kya hai?

 

She asks softly

 

M-Laga hai tumahra kuch

 

He examines her sole

 

She is speechless seeing his gesture

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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago

Amazing updated 

Geet is a mess she needs to let Akhil be independent and fight his fight with Maan. She is getting caught for no reason. Maan is getting a soft spot for her. 

thanks for the pm! awesome update! well written! Maan advises Akhil! liked Maan's care for Geet! 

maan shows geet mirror which hurt geet

Amazing update..

Maan  ares fr Geet his revenge is with akhil so seeing Geet bleeding he get worried