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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

awwww!!!!!!

i liked this!!!!

it was sooo cute!! 😳

awesome job! 👏

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Momtaj

@momtajbegum1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

awwww that was sooo great 😉 loved the ending 👏

Taj

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

gr8 ending!!! but i still feel jai should have pinned for bani so more and as for jiyasa no word for her 😡 (It so unfair she had destory the life of jai, bani and their kids and still go way without pushiment..all tt she have to do nw is to live on street, still there should be lot more pushiment for her tt wht i feel..)

gr8 ff.. keep up the gr8 work. hope to see more ff from you in future 😊 😊

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

fantastic ending............just loved it.....great!
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Khatija Hoosen

@lenmed

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

😊 thank you all for your kind words. I will try another. thanks for the suggestion for an epilogue, i might just write one.
totally agree with j&b84 but i struggled with either J and B never reuniting or uniting. but i just thought in this FF at least the kids suffered a lot.

I have another FF in my head (it really is there 😃 . it is going to be very 20th century, and realistic. This Bani too will be very strong, she will decide her own destiny, which may not include reconciling with Jai. 😭

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kooliio

@kooliio

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#56

happy ending [:D/] [:D/] [:D/] [:D/]
gr8 ff 👏 👏 👏

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