Secret Admirer Meharya TS Third shot 23/7

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Hello guys happy weekend have a great time hope you enjoy this criticism welcomed and please leave your comments too. 😉






On a pleasant day evening a young man in his mid twenties sitting in the hanging chair in his balcony while checking his phone. He got a call from his Friend. He answered saying hello.. 'where are you' came from the other end. 'In home Only.' He replied. 'Come to my room immediately.' The caller said in hurry. 'What happened yaar., is there anything emergency...?' He was worried 'it's like that only Shaurya., ab thumhara sawaal chodke jaldi aajao bye bye... (Shaurya now keep your questions aside and come to my room fast bye bye..) Rahul Rahul shouted shaurya., but he already hung up. A worried shaurya without no choice took his car keys and drove rashly to his friend's room. Weather is filled with dark black clouds and heavy winds passes throughout the air. Reaching his friend's room on fourth floor he got shocked and furious at the same time. As he witnessed his friend arranging beer bottles with munching on the table. Seeing shaurya on his door Rahul got excited and went to bring him in. Mera bhai Thu aagaya. (my brother you came) let's go have some drink Rahul said keeping his hands on shaurya shoulder..
Shaurya got much anger and jerked his hands away saying you called for this. He asked in a frustrated tone. Rahul said 'Ha' in a confusion tone and continued Kya hua bhai., mousam bahuth acha hai., aur mujhe bhi man kartha hai peena ka( what happened bro., weather is so cool, and I'm feeling like having drink. So called you) shaurya fuming in anger calming himself a bit I got worried listening your hurry voice.. But here you arranged for sitting. Shaurya continued keeping his one hand on his waist and left one free to make moves. Mujhe ek bath samjh main nahi aath., thum log bina peene kuch din nahi rah sakthe hai kya? (I dont understand one thing, you people can't live some days without drinking..) Waise log barsih main pakode ya kuch hot khana chahatha hai., daaru nahi peethe hai. (people would like to have hot, pakode while it's raining but not beer) Aaj Kya hua bhai ithane frustrate Kyoun ho raha hi.. (what happened today, why are you this much frustrated) Rahul ignored his mood and said normal people will do soso, But not we., Shaurya gave a dirty glare to his friend. It started raining outside.. Leaving his friend to that bloody beer, he stepped out to balcony to enjoy the cool breeze with rain. After few minutes he saw a girl in her early twenties came to her terrace with an umbrella in her hands covering her from rain. But she opened her hands may to know the intensity of rain. Except her face he can see her full. She wore a simple elagent dark Blue frock covering her knees... She twirled around standing on tip of her foot.. Shaurya just looking at the interesting view in rain. As it's evening he can see the shining creamy skin of her legs drenched with water, and her blue frock giving it's hot look which tempted him and desperate. His heart pricked to see her face but couldn't as the umbrella covered it. Thunder lights also giving more shining on her pale creamy skin. After two minutes he is much desperate to see her face. She is dancing and enjoying the rain but didn't loosened the umbrella.. He wished for a heavy wind which can take her umbrella with its speed. But it didn't happened anyway . The girl hair tied in a pony tail he could see that when she bent down for something. Shaurya never knew how to enjoy in rain. As his times ends in safe place or he would complete drench when it's rain. Now also he is under roof. Today He witnessed the rain enjoyment
for the first time by this girl. Standing in rain under umbrella hearing the sounds of rain drops fell on umbrella is a crazy thing he noticed. He wish he could joined her. But couldn't. Few minutes passed like this.. Shaurya forgot about things and surroundings.. His gaze just stayed on her bcz if he ever turn his face away he may miss to see the rain beauty... Rain dropped down a bit. Only Little drops falling from the sky. The crowded streets emptied and the polluted atmosphere vanished giving fresh air. That girl crazy activities also became dull with rain dropping down.. Someone shouted 'Mehek come down you may catch flew'. For which that girl responded 'okay just two minutes more ' then it hit his ears so she is MEHEK he thought. Her voice was so sweet as he registered and it echoed in his ears more times than the original... Mehek slowly dropped her umbrella as rain is not much pouring. He got excited to catch her face but her back is facing him. Keeping her umbrella to the wall she loosened her pony tail and shakes her head to spread it around... She twirled around
again and again few times. That small small glimpse of her filled in his eyes. Shaurya felt Her eyes just like almond and her lengthy lashes, sharp nose, rosy cheeks are perfect at their place. But he missed noticing her lips. Few twirls later she stopped holding her head and her hair covered all her face. His anxiety grew next level when he wanted to see her lips. Composing herself she looked up at the sky with a messy hair. Finally he catched her sight for which he was desperately waiting since an hour. His heart skipped a beat seeing her beautiness. Few rain drops on her face and on her pulmp lips made him go nuts. When a cool breeze hit her face she shivered. But just that sight of her sent chills to his body. He didn't bothered to close his lashes. Sensing someone constant gaze on her she looked upwards in his direction. But before she could see him he hide from her sight. He sat down lost himself in her thoughts.



Next morning shaurya woke up a bit late with a huge smile. As he got much information about his girl past night. He had a worst night in search of her details and lost in her thoughts. He hardly catched some sleep thinking about her and thinking about the things he have to do next morning. He freshened up himself and bought a flower bouquet on the way to Rahul's room. Leaving it in car he went in his room. Shaurya hugged his friend and first apologize him then thanked him. Rahul was surprised and confused as well with Shauryas behaviour. Sorry bhai shaurya said again. 'No need bro. I'm happy you came to me. And why you showed up this early today' Rahul asked for which he got no answer.. Shaurya went to balcony to see mehek again but couldn't find. Rahul followed him. And asked is there something I need to know or help you. Shaurya gave him a naughty smile then it's strikes Rahul. So matter is there. What's that Rahul asked holding him from back.. "Mehek" I Love her.. She is residing in that building shaurya said while showing. 'Congrats mera bhai but when did this happened.' Rahul got excited.. 'Magical things happens without our concern.' Shaurya replied dreamily... Rahul asked Did you confess to her..? Not yet, it will take time for me but not much time..




To Be Countinued😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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enjoy this three shot😉
Edited by Krishna537 - 7 years ago
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dekho,kishu kuch bhi bhi but i res first😆
unres,
Beautiful story...👏
rain romance
i love it.
thanku😳
update soon😳
Edited by Mishtilove - 7 years ago
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Res
Unres😃
Shaurya ke ankhein to bohot tezz hai...itni dur se itna kuch dekh liya😆
While mehek was enjoying the rain and shaurya was enjoying her beauty...her innocence...her antics ..loved it...loved how shaurya hide when mehek looked at his direction 😛 is this shaurya a bit shy😉
Thnx for the pm.continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res 😛
Unres 😊
What a pleasant surprise from.you kishu ...another story ...👏
Really liked the plot of secret admirer ..the way you describe mehek's Beauty was amazing ...one can fall.for her definitely😊
And SK too had fall and moreover in love with her .
Will.she accepts the shaurya love as he is totally stranger to her . It will be interesting to see how shaurya Gona chase her and make her fall in love too😉
So shot two.is also coming in our way ...so I am.waiting for that 😊
Thanks for the PM😊
Thanks for making my Sunday special with mehrya tales 😊
Edited by AD04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res
Wow Krish what a story loved it
Love at first sight hmm
Mera Bhai Majnu bangaya ek hi din me 😆
You beautifuly describe her movements n everything
N he gathered everything aboher came to his friends house
When will the update next part pls continue soon
Thanks for the pm Krish
Have a great Sunday😛
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishtilove

dekho,kishu kuch bhi bhi but i res first😆

unres,
Beautiful story...👏
rain romance
i love it.
thanku😳
update soon😳



Ha baba you are the first one 😳
Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked it.. Wait for another shot..😉
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Originally posted by: AD04

Res 😛

Unres 😊
What a pleasant surprise from.you kishu ...another story ...👏
Really liked the plot of secret admirer ..the way you describe mehek's Beauty was amazing ...one can fall.for her definitely😊
And SK too had fall and moreover in love with her .
Will.she accepts the shaurya love as he is totally stranger to her . It will be interesting to see how shaurya Gona chase her and make her fall in love too😉
So shot two.is also coming in our way ...so I am.waiting for that 😊
Thanks for the PM😊
Thanks for making my Sunday special with mehrya tales 😊



Thank you so much Aarthi dear for your lovely comment... 😳
Yeah I just felt to be write this this is unexpected to me as well😉
Shaurya will be going through her nuts..
You will enjoy that too.. Hope so..
Have a great time dear😉
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Anu Di aap bhi abhi Res kiya 2nd shot K liye 😆
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Great one dear thanks for the pm.. rain romance.. love to read more.. pls continue soon.. want to see how he is going purpose...

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