FF:-MAGNETIC POWER OF LOVE- Opposite attracts, Part 1 on pg 3

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Hello everyone,
From many days i was thinking to start writing something on IF but always left it thinking no yaar i cannot ...there are many fabulous writers how i will be able to write, no one will like my stories n all but now i got a hold on myself and with great courage , i m here to write something on ishra...i don't know you guys will like it or not, just whatever it is do let me know so according to that i can take the story ahead
Ufff i m damn excited as well as nervous as this is my first...okay so here i m with a ishra story
i know because of dull n ishra less yhm everyone is upset so thought to write a story on plot that was eating my mind from long ... hope u all like it
so here it is ishra story with a totally different plot from yhm just cast wioll be the same hope u all like it
here i stop my banter and start writing
please support as this is my first time
love to all
(and for all the writers - i am sorry because of exam i was not able to read the updates but as now i am back, i will start reading all of them and will comment as there are 130+ pms so it will take a little time... sorry ...and thank you for sending me the pms )
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Posted: 7 years ago
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INDEX

PROLOGUE

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PROLOGUE

SCENE - 1 (MUMBAI)(IN A BIG HOUSE - old styled house with old design furniture, but giving it a rich look )

"ma'am inn paper pr signki jrurt h aage ka kaam krne k liye" a person in his late thirty said

("Ma'am we need signature on these papers for furthur process" )

"wakeel sahab uss m kaunsi badi baat hai aap paper bhej dijiye wo bina kuch bole kr dega jo hum bolenge" an old lady spoke, with a smirk n her face

("whats a big deal in that, send the papers to him, he will do whatever i will ask him to do")

"pr ma'am agr unhone paper dekh liye to, wo padhne k baad jaan jaenge sb " the lawyer said

("but ma'am what if he read the papers he will get to know everything")

this brought a big smirk on her face, as if she knew that no one can defeat her and with that she said " wakeel sahab aisa kbhi nhi hoga...hum jo chahenge wahi hoga...wo kbhi kuch nhi jaan paega"

("nothing will happen like this...things will go the way we want them to...he will never get to know anything")

and with this she starting laughing loudly, but the lawyer was still not sure as he knew things will not be the same for long and her over confidence is going to hit her back soon...

SCENE - 2 (MUMBAI) (A BIG HOUSE- luxurious house with all modern amenities, classy n modern style giving it a rich n stylish look)

An old couple sitting in hall

" where is my princess ...subh se nhi dikhi h...tumhe pta h na usse dekhe bina mera din shuru nhi hota " the old man asked to his wife

("where is my princess...i have not seen her from morning...you know i cannot start my day without seeing her")

his wife smiled listening to him " vishwa, tum to jante ho na tumhari princess ek jagh kaha rukti hai...kbhi kahi to kabhi kahi...hogi kahi phir kisi ki help kr rahi hogi" she said to him smiling "kabhi shanti se ghar m nhi rehti hai...aur ye sb tumhare karn h, tum usko kuch bolte hi nhi"

("vishwa, u know her she cannot stay at one place...she must be somewhere helping someone") ("she never stays at home...and this is all because of you, you never say anything to her")

both of them were smiling, as whatever it is they are very proud of their daughter as they know wherever she is, she just spread happiness n help the people around her.

"kya bolu usko meri princess ek heera h madhu , aur uski smile aur masumiyat dekhte hi mai sab bhul jata hu " said vishwa

("what should i say to my princess she is a gem , just by looking at her smile and innocence i forget everything ")

SCENE- 3

DON'T YOU THINK PROLOGUE IS GETTING VERY LENGTHY

HEHEHEHE... lets hang this story here only

now i want all u guys to take a little time and vote for this if u liked it

and do tell me your views so i can improve and comment bhot sara jo jo krna h

i will give its 1st update soon

as i m not gonna let u guys wait for long

enjoy n let me know what u think about this

enough of my banter

bye bye for now

see u guys soon

LOVE LOVE

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your first story dear
May you write many more
Interesting nice prologue dear
Plz do continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your first write up..
Interesting prologue...
Plz update soon...
Thank you...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for the first story
Prologue is interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for ur first story dear
Welcome in writer's world
Very interesting prologue
Continue soon
Thx for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for your first story

Interesting prologue
Update soon
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congo for ur first story pari
Welcome to the writing world
It's damn interesting
Just a question
Is it like movie beta
Waiting for next update
Updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for your first effort dear... Do post ur story fast... And wish u all the best ...
About prologue... It's superb... Wanted to know more... Know who is that lady controlling Raman... Good to see ishu in cute bubbly especially rich gurl... I always hate it when they show heroine as a poor girl... Will be superb to know more ...

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