FF:-MAGNETIC POWER OF LOVE- Opposite attracts, Part 1 on pg 3 - Page 2

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SCENE - 3

looking towards the garden, a lady in her early thirty asked to the one standing at the gate

" Shanti waha kya ho rha hai sab log ek sath circle bna k kyu khade hai"

("shanti what is happening there, why everyone is standing in a circle")

Shanti who was looking towards the garden and was smiling looked towards Rashmi (the lady) and spoke still with that smile intact on her face "Arre didi aap kab aaye, mujhe to pta hi nhi chala "

("didi when did you come, i didn't come to know")

{ here Ra for rashmi and S for Shanti }

Ra- " jab tu waha dekh kar itna dant dikha dikha k hass rhi thi tab aayi mai, ye chod aur mere sawal ka jawab to de "

(" when you were smiling looking there that time i came, leave this and answer my question")

S- " arre didi aap bhul gyi kya yaha pr aisa tbhi hota hai jab wo aati hai ...sb jagh khil uthti hai aur sab khush ho jate hai uske aate hi"

(" ohh ho di did you forget that this happens only when she comes...everyone gets happy as she comes here")

Ra- "tera mtlb hai ki wo aayi hui hai, kisine btaya kyu nahi...

("you mean to say she has come and why no one told...)

"Rashu dii"

she was saying that there came her voice, when they saw towards her there she was coming running towards them calling her lovely rashu dii As she reached there she took rashmi in a hug, telling her how much she missed all of them

"you know how much i missed you all, but what to do was not able to come"

Ra- "missed u too sweetu"

"ishu bitiya"

came a weak shaky voice from behind of an old women who was looking very vulnerable, she was wearing new cloths but was looking too weak...rashmi looked at her confused as she as never seen her here

I- "Dadi aap yaha kyu aayi, maine bola tha na apko aaram krne ko kyu nhi suni apne meri baat" she took a chair kept near her and made her sit on it as she was really very weak "baithiye, aur ab aap bilkul nhi uthengi yaha se samjhi"

("dadi why you came here, i told you to rest why don't you listen to me") ("sit here, and now you will not move from here")

ishita understood rashmi's confusion and thought to clear the air-

Ra- "sweetu ye..."

I- " dii i know what you want to ask but before that i want ki aap inko yaha rakhen iss old age home mai, ye aajse yahi rahengi baki sab k sath"

(" that you keep her in this old age home, from now on she will be here with you all")

SCENE - 4 (Hall of bhalla house)

" maa aa rhi hai jaldi se theek kro aur jao pta hai na koi bhi kaam unke hisaab se na ho to bhot gussa aata hai " said a young man to servant

(" maa is coming do this work fast, you know she doesn't like if things don't happen according to her")

" Suraj suraj" came a voice of Sarla Bhalla

{ Sa for Sarla bhalla and Su for Suraj Bhalla, suraj same as in yhm }

Suraj to servant- " go now leave all this and go"

Su- "yes maa"

Sarla glared him , he was confused as why his mother was glaring him he didn't do anything recently for which she is angry. she understood his confusion

Sa - "ohh to tumhe nhi pta tumne kya kiya hai, nalayk tu abhi tk mehra sahab k yaha se contract papers le kr nhi aaya, ja abhi aur le kr aa" when he didn't move as he was thinking when his mother told him to do so, as she not for once told him any such thing, seeing him not going she shouted " jaa rha hai ya chittar khaega "

(" ohh so you don't know what you did, you fool, you didn't get the contract papers from mehras till now, go and get them") ("are you going or you want me to kick you")

listening to this he ran for his life as he knew his mother do what she says

Sa- "khote da khur"

she said looking to his retreating figure, thats when someone came and touched her feet, she know who the person is and there she smiled and said-

" raman puttar tu ki kar rha hai, roz subh subh aake mere pair chuta hai, iski jrurat nhi hai puttar"

(" raman what are you doing, every morning you touch my feet, there is no need for this my son")

raman smiled "jrurat to hai badi maa mujhe apke aashirwad ki, aur jo apne humare liye kiya hai uske aage to mai kuch bhi kr du wo kam hai"

(" there is need of ur blessings for me badi maa (aunty), whatever i do is nothing in front of what you have done for us")

"raman" she spoke being little angry "maine kitni bar kaha hai tum sab mera parivaar ho, maine jo bhi kiya mere parivaar k liye kiya aur uss bare mai koi baat nhi hogi"

("how many times i have said that you all are my family, and whatever i did, i did that for my family and no one will talk about it'')

R- " achaa achha badi maa aap naraz mat ho iss bare mai baat nhi krte hai"

("ok fine we will not talk about this you just don't get angry")

Sa [smiling]- "achha chalo jao aur nashta krlo"

"okk go now and have breakfast"

R- " aap janti hai na mai apke khae bina kuch nhi khata to chaliye aap bhi nashta kr lijiye" ... "suraj ko bhi bula lete hai, sath mai khaenge"

(" you know i don't have anything until you have something, so come you also have breakfast")

(" lets call suraj also, will eat together")

Sa- "puttar wo mehra ji k yaha gya hai office k kaam se, chalo hum khate hai"

(" he has gone for office work, lets go we will have")

R- "jii badi maa"

(" okk ")

SCENE- (back to old age home)

Ra- " that is okk ishu, this old age home is for such people only so that we can provide them a family, but sweetu where you get her she is looking too weak"

I- "didu ...

FLASHBACK

ishita was going back home after completing her morning workout, when she saw a idiot who was heavily drunk driving a car and was about to hit an old women, who saw the car coming but was too weak to move fast. ishita somehow ran to her and pulled the old lady and saved her. The lady could not understand anything that happened there as everything happened too fast, but when she understood, she turned towards ishita to thank her

thats when she saw the man of her nightmare coming towards them with an angry face , that look of him scared the hell out of her.

"beti tum jao yaha se tumhe yaha nhi rukna chahiye " she said to ishita

(" you go from here, you should not stay here go from here")

but ishita saw her scared face and also how she was looking at that man again and again. and she knew there is a lot to this thing, so she didn't move a bit from there

that man reached to them and clutched hair of that lady and spoke "saali budiya dikhta nhi hai tujhe itni badi gadi k neeche marne chali thi marna hi tha to kahi aur ja kr marti waise bhi tu kisi kaam ki nhi hai "

("oldie can't you see was going to die under such big car if you wanted to die you should have gone somewhere else as you are of no use to me ")

seeing this ishita got super angry and punched that man on his face and stood in between that man and old lady with her red eyes shooting glare to him, if looks could kill he would have died thousands time till now...

this angered that man a lot and he marched towards ishita to show her a lesson but he didn't know that he messed with a wrong person this time

and there she hit him hard between his legs when he was about to attack her and with that gave another kick in his stomach which made it impossible for him to move...and that was the time police arrived as she already informed them through emergency call when she saw him first time coming towards them as she knew there is something big. That old lady was surprised to see the police there and looked towards ishita with grateful eyes and informed them about the children the man had kept with him to make them beg at traffic signals.

ishita with the police reached the place with help of that lady and police raid that area and with that she sent all children to ngos for their betterment...

flashback end

I- "and brought dadi here, her cloths were torn and she didn't had anything from so many thats why she is too weak, i gave her new cloths and now she will live here with you all"

"aur dadi aap ab bilkul mat darna aap yaha safe ho aur uss aadmi ko mai kadi se kadi saza dilwaungi"

("u need not to fear you are totally safe here and i will make sure that man get punished for his deads")

Ra- "ishu we will take care of her you don't worry but you need to know that you cannot just risk your life like this, at least for once you think about uncle and aunty, they only have you in their life bachhe"

I- "ohhh shoot" she gasped

Ra- "what happened"

I- "didu i am finished today, ohh god i have to rush appa must be waiting for me, you know he never go for office without seeing me and he have an important meeting today "

"bye bye bye everyone i will come back soon"

"dadu aap apni dawa time pr liya kro" ("take your medicines on time dadu")

"all of you take care bye bye bye"

she was collecting her things and was running towards outside shouting and instructing everyone. All laughed on her cute antics and looking at her retreating figure

rashmi shouted - "drive safely, don't rush"

[smiling]- "pagal ladki" and shaking her head...

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