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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice prologue n cs
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Prologue is Captivating
it also holds some sadness to it
yet at the same it has protectiveness
I'm so looking forward to reading this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Character Sketch is Interesting and Intriguing at the same time
can't wait for this story to start
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for starting new storu.. can't wait for you to start it..
Interesting Prologue and Character sketch 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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MG FF - Fictitious (tentative banner)😆



Part 1

















The Two Friends



"Geet, Her friend Meera called. A young and beautiful girl turned to look at her best friend. "Meera, did you that pastry, it looks delicious, She said eying the bakery shop greedily. "Geet you just had your snack now let us go study, Meera tried dragging her friend who was stuck on her spot. "Wait a minute, Geet said rushing inside and buying that snack for her munching on it while both of them went for the library. "I don't get how you maintain that figure after eating like a pig, Meera said.






"My life is dedicated to food Meera, you know brain needs carbohydrates for its functioning right, Geet said. "I really hope Geet you pass the exams with good marks this time or else it will be difficult for you, Meera said to her careless friend who just munched happily on her snack.



They entered the Library. "You just stay here and let me get us some books, Meera said. "Alright, Geet smiled. She looked at her hands which were now smeared with chocolate. She looked around for the washroom. She looked ahead at one direction and found a figure there. She decided to ask as she knew Meera will kill her if she disturbed her right now. She went in that direction but the figure disappeared. "Hello.., She called. Upon hearing a movement she followed the sound. "I guess it must be the wrong room, She said turning back. As she was about to turn something fell from the shelf. Curiosity got the better of her and she looked at the object. It was an ancient book. "Geet, Meera looked for her friend. Not finding her she decided to check everywhere. She heard some noise and came to the room where Geet was. "What are you doing in the archive section, She chided. "I found this here while looking for a washroom, Geet said. "You could have asked me. You are such a troublemaker, Meera sighed. "You would have gotten angry so ..., Geet looked up nervously. "Now put it back there and let us leave, Meera said.



"It looks like in a different language, Geet said. "Give me that, Meera said. "This is a story about a young girl ...who wished upon ..., Meera read. "You can read it so fluently, you are a smart one Meera, Geet praised. "It is easy Geet, She smiled. "Oh let me try then ...A story about a girl who fell in love with a boy who was supposed to be her knight ..., Geet read. "It says as the story is read ...it turns real, Meera read. "What does that mean, Meera asked. "Well you are the smarter one so..., Geet said looking back in it. "Let's read more then to know, Meera said. As soon as they turned the page they heard a sound startling both the girls.



"Owww my head hurts, Geet said waking up rubbing her eyes. She looked around and was shocked to see the surroundings, they were definitely not in the library now. "Hey Meera wake up, She said. "Where are we, asked a shocked Meera. "I don't know, Geet said confused. "Hey does this hurt, Meera pinched her hard. "It sure does, Geet yelled hitting her. "Then it is real ...may we are ..., Before she could complete her mouth was clamped by someone. "Meera, why did you sto..., Geet turned around to see her friend was held captive by some men. "Leave her..who are you, She yelled. "We will make you slaves, you two will make a good commodity specially this one as she is really pretty, The man said. "Leave her you moron, Geet yelled dashing into the man head on making him fall. "Meera run, She said. "Why you little brat..., The man said taking out a knife. "Geet run...I will be fine...go find some help, Meera said. "I'm not leaving you, Geet yelled. "Great then you die, The man said but before he could touch her he was stopped by an apple thrown in his face. "Who the hell is there, The man yelled.



"Really four men taking on two girls...and you really call yourself men, They heard a voice and turned to see a very handsome young man standing in front of them. "Who are you, They yelled. He didn't answer and took care of all those men in a matter of minutes. "I hope that is enough for my introduction, He smirked looking at them making them run for their lives. "Are you guys alright, He asked. "Thank you for saving us, Meera said. "I don't need thanks so if you have some money, I will think of it as a thanks, He said. "What ...money, Geet said. "Ah it seems you guys don't have ...ah another day wasted on broke people oh well then I should get going then, He said going back. "Hey we didn't ask you to save us, huh, look at his attitude, Geet said.







"Well...just to tell you...this area is surrounded by slave traders so be careful...it would be a waste if a pretty girl like yourself would be a victim of that...until then bye, He left waving his hand in the air. "He called me beautiful..., Geet thought. "Wait we have some money...hey what is your name, Meera called but before they could understand they heard that sound again and the next moment they were back in the library.







"We are back...was that a dream, Geet said. "Hey you two...the library is closing what are you guys doing here in the forbidden area, The guard yelled. the girls were startled and packed their bags making a dash for their houses.

"Geet remember Summer vacations start tomorrow so we have ample time to study, I will help you...so come tomorrow to the Library on time, Meera said strictly. "Alright, Geet grinned. Meera shook her head knowing her friend won't come without having something on the way.







"I will cook and pack a meal for you myself so come on time no need to stop anywhere for your food okay, She said. "Meera you are the best...I love you so much, Geet hugged her tightly. "Ah, I really wish that love was for me but I know it is only for the food...I wonder if your love for food will ever change, She smiled. They took their leave and went to different directions. "Was it all really a dream..., Geet thought. "Was he a dream too...




So here is the first part, please do give your honest reviews ...I'm still held up with some issues as I'm settling in a new place ...Updates will be slower but I will definitely complete all my stories ...Thank you for your patience and support😃😃😃



Precap - The boy and Geet
Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Done😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
intriguing
time travelling so is it d story abt their love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Beautiful Chapter.. 😳
Did geet brought that book with herself.. Badly want her to read that book and meet with that mysterious man 😉
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Wow another interesting story
Really mysterious
I want read more about this
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Congrats for new story
Nice update
Waiting for next update

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