ACP Khanna versus Avni's Neil UPDATED (part 2 on page 2, 17 June)

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roshni.27

@roshni_az

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

u gv a completly diff perspective of arrange marriage nd mother in law..portrayed d relations so well😛..

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InderAnoop

@InderAnoop

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

U r a brilliant writer... Keep the updates rolling more frequently..

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lilly718

@lilly718

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

OH My God! This story is such a treat to read. I am loving it so much and the AvNeil's moments are so cute and romantic; I can clearly imagine them. This is a really good story, please write lots and lots of chapters. Update soon!

P.S. your story title could be: "How's my heart supposed to beat without you" (I know its a song; but I feel it kind of represents Neil's emotions based on the first chapter); but its all up to you!!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This story is such a treat ! I love your style of writing man ! I remember you wrote a fanfic on same lines before . You have brought Neil's emotions so well ! This guy is too perfect to be believable . He feels guilty that he couldn't protect her in her past ! 😭 My heart goes for both

You were so brilliant with Avni's dialogues. It showcased the authority , confidence and command which made that criminal hang his head down .

AvNeil's pillow fight and Neil hiding behind Avni requesting her to save from his mom and Bebe was so adorable ! How can he be so cute, handsome at the same time 😳 He is a dream

I like your title ! Na seeka jeena tere bina !