*Masha Allah * - Mehrya os - Eid special

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Eid Mubarak to all my beloved dearies. A special token of love on the special occasion of Eid. Don't know how I have ended up writing this 😆 . Well...did a mini research on Islamic quotes, names nd customs etc to write these crazy thoughts. Apologies if I've written anything wrong. Plz do ignore typos nd errors.
Hope u"ll like it. Plz do leave a fb if possible. Eid Mubarak...




*Masha Allah * (As god has willed it)




He followed her in the busy streets of chandni chowk with a heartening smile. While she struggled to suppress her smile shyly sensing his presence. She reached her society where pre Eid celebrations were going on. He tried to steal her glances in between while she kept herself busy with her friend Aaisha. He neared the stage set for Eid celebrations , held a mike and voiced a song for his beloved. His first love...Mehak. Mehak Ayan Qureshi. Her heart skips a beat when she hears his soulful voice...


Gumsum chandni ho (Are you the silent moonlight)
Naazneen ho (A lovely Bella)
Ya koi hoor ho ( Or a goddess)
Dilnasheen ho ( You are heart warming to me)
Dilkasheen ho ( Heart winning)
Ya jannat ka noor ho ( Or a light from the heavens )
Masha Allah, Masha Allah, Masha Allah

She lifted her face to have a look of that handsome guy adorned with an enticing voice. And their eyes met. She was falling for him again nd again. She found herself deeply immersed in those dark orbs .she blushed when he was admiring her with those intense eyes filled with love. She loved those beautiful lines...nd felt as if he has written those lines on his heart. He was the man of her dreams. Her first love...Shaurya. Shaurya Ahmed Siddiqui. A big applaud from the crowd broke their trance. She lowered her gaze nd neared a shop to try new bangles. While he resumed his song admiring the priceless beauty...

Tum saba ho (Are you the breeze)
Ya Ghataa ho (Or a cloud)
Kehkashaa ho ( You are the galaxy)
Saaibaan ho (The master)
Subah Ki pehli Kiran ke jaise (Like the first beam of the morning)
Bebaak Alhad pavan ke jaise (Like an uncontrolled wind)
Khushbowen tum lutati ho ( You are showering your fragnances)
Masti Mein choor choor ( You are immersed into mischief)
Masha Allah, Masha Allah, Masha Allah

She fluttered her eyes nd blushed deep pink hearing those lines filled with love. She felt herself blessed to be loved by him. He winked at her naughtily enjoying the effect that he had on her. He was nearing her, his closeness was something she couldn't resist or restrict. She quickly neared a lady to apply traditional mehendi. He chuckled seeing her antics nd approached her nd stood beside her admiring her mehendi. She found it difficult to adjust her hair falling on her face.He traced his fingers to tuck her hair behind her ear. She rolled her eyes to suppress her embarrassment. While he resumed the song...


Tum haya ho (You are modesty)
Tum rida ho (You are the covering)
Tum Wafaa ho (You are faithfulness)
Tum nasha ho (You are intoxication)
Khamosh nazrein sadaaon jaisi (your silent gaze is like forever)
Tumhari baatein duaon jaisi ( your talks are like the prayers)
Har nafas Mein tum samaye ho ( you are there in every breath I take)

Phir bhi ho itni dooor ( But still you're so far away)

He paused. A lone tear escaped from her eyes. He sighed seeing her moist eyes. He intended to wipe those precious pearl droplets. But he couldn't. He stepped back and turned his face to hide his pain .
When the whole crowd were showering him with applauds nd wishes...he stood there lovingly gazing at her without blinking his eyes...awaiting her answer. Her mehendi was done nd she was leaving for her home. Shaurya followed her..he held her hand. Mehak I want to talk to you..he said. She couldn't ignore or restrict him ...Aaisha asked her to go with him. He thanked Aaisha nd took mehak yo their favourite spot ratan kaka's open terrace.
Mehak tell me...what have you decided?...he asked her impatiently. Last year, at this very place we've confessed our love Jaan and today you are giving your word to marry someone else...he reciprocated.
She closed her eyes unable to digest his pain. Am doing this for Abbu( father) Shaurya..for his sake...she whispered lowering her gaze. It means you don't love me?...If you're love is for the sake of Allah it will never die...look into my eyes mehek...I need an answer..he said venting out his anger. She stood there motionless. I"ll convince him mehak...he assured her. It's of no use Shaurya..Abbu wants me to marry a politician...for his career benefits...he wont accept our relation Shaurya...you are a businessman Shaurya...plz try to understand...she said in-between her sobs. I'll do anything jaan...I'll join politics...I'll assure him of loving and protecting you till my last breath...he pleaded. She was dumbstruck to see his his pain of loosing her. His eyes welled with tears. She must have died a million times seeing his helplessness nd longing for her love. She tried to control her tears nd intended to leave. Remind me of Allah if your love for me is indeed true..he blurted out. Allah puts people in our life for a reason and removes them from your life for a better reason..shaurya..she said as tears overflowed from her eyes. He stood there heartbroken..while she left saying those words that pierced his heart.

At evening. The preparations for mehak's moo dikhai as well as Eid were going on in Qureshi manzil(house). She was sobbing endlessly after her meeting with Shaurya. She thought that sh has done a sin by leaving him heartbroken. I won't be able to forgive myself for what I've done to him. Iam a sinner. She said crying loudly while Aaisha was consoling her. Allah will find a way Mehak...assured Aaisha. What happened beta? Mehak was startled to see her father. She wiped her tears immediately nd stood there lowering her gaze. Beta be ready in 10 minutes ok...asked her Abbu . Ji Abbu...she replied. After few minutes she dressed up beautifully on Aaisha's insistence and neared the hall to meet her future groom, the one found by her Abbu.To her surprise, there was no new faces around. She saw her parents chit chatting nd preparing for Eid. Beta you are ready...Abbu approached and hugged her. Her Ammi( mother) adorned her with a black spot...Allah will protect you from evil eyes..you look gorgeous beta..she added. Mehak thanked them with a vague smile.
Ok beta now leave. You are getting late. In few hours moon will appear...said Abbu. Mehak looked at him confused. Arey...he may be waiting for you.. At ratan kaka's terrace...he added.Mehak looked at him surprisingly with tears filled eyes...while he nodded his head happily in assurance. She hugged him tightly crying her heart out nd thanking him. You thought your Abbu is that cruel nd won't accept my princess wish haan?...questioned Abbu wiping her tears. She nodded her head in no nd thanked him. Waise what's his name..he asked. Aaisha was about to tell...but he shushed her. I want to hear it from my princess..he said lifting mehak's chin. She closed her eyes nd shyly took his name. Shaurya... Abbu smiled heart-warmingly. Ok now go nd get him...I want to meet my son in law. She blushed hearing that . She was about to leave..Abbu stopped her nd said.. Arey..first thank your messenger of love..Aaisha.. She ran nd hugged Aaisha nd thanked her. Ok baba..now leave...don't know your majnu's condition..said Aaisha while pulling her cheeks.

Mehak ran as fast she could. She twirled nd jumped like an innocent child overwhelmed with joy. Finally she reached their favourite spot ratan kaka's terrace. She was panting heavily nd she saw him sitting there watching the night sky. He felt her presence but didn't had the guts to turn his face...he never wanted another broken dream. She took a deep breath to relax. Mr. Shaurya Ahmed Siddiqui would you love to accept Mehak Ayan Qureshi as your future wife...she shouted in excitement. Her words startled him. He turned his face...only to see Allah's beautiful creation...his love, his life, his mehak...standing there bewildered. He quickly got up and spread his arms. She quickly ran to his embrace. A bone crushing hug. And they stood like that for few minutes venting out their love , pain, emotions and longing in each other's solace. Abbu..agreed for our relation...he is happy for us...Aaisha helped us...you know am on cloud nine today...she blabbered with utter happiness while cupping his cheeks. He held her tightly admiring her. Shaurya say something na...she said. Eid Mubarak...he said with heartwinning smile. Haan?..she raised her eyebrows in confusion. He pointed to show her the bright moon that appeared in the sky. She smiled at the moon and thanked Allah. Allah is pleased with the one I love...he said. Ok now tell me something Shaurya she said while turning his gaze from the moon with her palms.
Masha Allah...he said with a naughty wink. He joined his forehead onto her and they smiled endlessly feeling their precious moment..


That's it guys...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good morning Shinu
Eid Mubarak😛
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Superb Shinu loved the song in between their talks nicely written this was something new loved it
Finally his father accepted him 😊 as a future son in law
Romantic update shinu
Thank you for this lovely surprise gift 🤗
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eid Mubarak Shinu 😛
What a lovely surprise today ..😛
It was beautifully written with addition of song 😳👏
Mehrya story in different scenario ...loved it ... completely👏😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eid mibarak shinu...
Thanku for the surprise
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it completely different situation .. loved song n greatly written pls do write more..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update



Edited by Mishtilove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Good morning Shinu

Eid Mubarak😛
Res
Superb Shinu loved the song in between their talks nicely written this was something new loved it
Finally his father accepted him😊as a future son in law
Romantic update shinu
Thank you for this lovely surprise gift🤗


Thank you Anu dear for this lovely fb 😊
Yep tried something different...
Glad that you liked it...
@bold: My pleasure dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for this lovely gift Shinu. ⭐️Felt like a sangam story. Happy ending for the much in love
couple and it was heart warming to see father fulfilling his daughter's dream and gifting her a
life with her soulmate. ⭐️❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnx shinu for this lovely eid gift...Very well written..loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AD04

Eid Mubarak Shinu😛

What a lovely surprise today ..😛
It was beautifully written with addition of song😳👏
Mehrya story in different scenario ...loved it ... completely👏😳


Thankyou Aarti di for your fb... 😛
Glad that you liked it... 😃

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