Adiya FF: To be or not to be? updated Part 5 on pg 4

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For the first time attempted to write something which I don't know whether is an os, ss, ts or what.😆 So everyone here's my first story... all the Joota, chappals, ande and tamatar welcome ... 😆😆

To be or not to be?

Six months have passed since the court has cleared their name from the murder of their respective partners. Zoya and Noor went back to Mussoorie. Noor is finishing her diploma in mass communications & is engaged to Arjun Hooda. Zoya is interning at her father's office & will be enrolling in an MBA programme from next semester. Aditya is busy with his job. They are trying to rebuild their lives without each other. But can they live without each other or fate (rather Arnoor) will make them realize that they are so incomplete without each other?

At the Siddiqui House:

Wasim and Roshana are talking about Noor's wedding at breakfast table.

W: Yakeen nahi aata roshana ki bas chand mahine baad hamari chhoti si noor hamse itni dur chali jayegi. Ek baap hone ke naate hame pata hai ki hame use kabhi na kabhi toh apne se door karna hi tha par ye waqt itni jaldi aayega ye pata nahi tha.

R: Ye waqt toh har beti ke maa baap ki zindagi main aata hai lekin mujhe khushi hai ki noor ko Arjun jaisa suljha, samjhdaar insaan mila humsafar ke taur par jo usse bahut khush rakhega. Main bas allah tala se yahi dua karti hoon ki meri noor ko har buri nazar se bachaye aur usse un sab takleefon se door rakhe jo meri zoya ne sahi hai.

W: Khuda ke waaste yaad mat dilaiye unn dino ki, unn takleefon ki jo hamari bachchi Zoya ne sahi hai. Hame yakeen hai ki hamari Zoya bhi apni zindagi mein aage badhegi. Usse bhi koi sachche dil se chahne wala, uski parwah karne wala aur har kadam par saath dene wala humsafar milega. Hamari Bachchi ne kisi ke saath bura nahi kiya toh khuda bhi uska itna imtihaan nahi le sakta. Hamari zoya ki zindagi mein Khushiyaan aayengi jaroor aayengi...

(Noor enters)

N: Ye kya ammi abbu? Aap log phir emotional ho gaye? Hum kahin nahi jaa rahe. Aap kahe toh Arjun ko ghar jamai banane ka offer de de?

Roshana hugs her daughter & kisses her forehead.

R: Aapke jaane ke baad aapki ye baatein hame aur jyada rulayengi. Hamari bachchi... Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe.

W: Noor beta! Zoya kahan hai? Abhi tak aayi nahi?

N: Appi abhi meeting ke liye kuch notes prepare kar rahi hain. Unhe kuch waqt lagega. Unhone kaha woh thodi der baad aayengi.

W: Noor ! Roshana! Aap log samjhaate kyun nahi zoya ko. Itna kaam karengi toh apni tabiyat kharab kar lengi. Hamari baat toh hamesha ye keh kar taal jaati hain ki abbu aap bhi toh itna kaam karte hain toh phir hum kyun nahi.

N: (Thinking) hame pata hai abbu, appi ke din raat kaam mein doobne ki asli wajah. Woh bhaag rahi hain. Apne aap se. Uss ek sawaal se jo Aditya ne unse poochha tha Mussorrie aane se pehle.. ..

(To be continued..)


Index:

Part 2 (pg1): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4995428&PID=147462862&#p147462862

Part 3 (Pg 3): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4995428&PID=147531670&#p147531670

Part 4 (Pg 3): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4995428&PID=147534271&#p147534271

Part 5 (Pg 4): http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4995428&PID=147572571&#p147572571

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow Sounds very interesting
Zoya is fighting with her heart listening to her mind
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Cliffhangers! Why do you torture me so?! The update was amazing, and I love how you started it a few months after everything has been sorted out so AdiYa can understand the extent of their feelings without any external problems. And ArNoor's marriage track is going to be amazing, I can just feel it! Also the prospect of ArNoor being the ones to get AdiYa together is something I just cannot wait for, so please update ASAP! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you, everyone, for liking & commenting. I don't know what has hit me but I'm not able to stop thinking about this story, so just wrote a short part 2. Would love to read your views on this & criticism is most welcome. Never knew I had it in myself to write a story, but then love makes you do things that u never thought you would do. So this story is a proof of my love for this superb show & brilliant Adiya.
Without further ado, here comes the next part:

Part 2

Noor: Abbu hum abhi appi ko bula kar late hain aur aapse vaada karte hain ki hum appi ko iss kaam ke bojh se thodi der door rakhenge. Hum abhi aaye.

Zoya's Room

N: kya appi aap bhi? Abhi tak kaam khatam nahi hua aapka. Nashta toh kar lijiye. Sab table par aapka wait kar rahe hain. Aur waise bhi ye meeting itni bhi important nahi hai ki aap khana peena sab bhool jaayein. Chaliye jaldi chalkar nashta kijiye nahi toh hum bhi nashta nahi karenge.

Z (exasperated): Tauba noor! Thoda aaram dijiye apni jabaan ko. Aura apse kisne kaha ye meeting jaroori nahi hai. Ye jaroori hai aur haan hum nashta bas thodi der mein kar lenge.

N: Hame abbu ne bataya ki meeting itni jaroori nahi jittna nashta. Toh aap chaliye.

Z: Allah aap nahi manegi na. Chaliye, nashta karte hain.

N: That's like my appi (Hugs Zoya). Toh iss baat par ek movie ho jaaye?

Z: Movie? Ye kya? Ham bahut busy hain, hum nahi ja sakte.

N: Plz na appi chaliye. Waise bhi hum yahan ab kuch dino ke liye hi hain toh aap thoda time toh hamare saath spend kar hi sakti hain na. Phir shaadi ki tayyariyon mein kisiko bhi time nahi milega ye sab karneka. Maine toh socha tha ki hum dono ek saath Mumbai jaayenge aur ek hi ghar mein saath rahenge, par takdeer ko shayad ye manzoor nahi. So hum inn chhoti chhoti khushiyon se hi guzara kar lete hain (eyes zoya for her reaction).

Z (turning away): Noor aap subah subah kya baatein lekar baith gayi. Jo takdeer mein hoga wahi insaan ko milta hai. Hum koi bhi cheez jabardasti haasil nahi kar sakte.

N (goes near zoya and cups her face): Sach batayein appi, kya aapko sach mein lagta hai ki adi aur aap saath nahi ho sakte. Woh bhi tab jab dono families iss rishte ko chahte hain. Aur sabse jyada toh Adi bhai. Main bhi aapse wahi poochhna chahti hoon jo adi bhai ne yahan aane se pehle aapse poochha tha ki Kya kasoor hai unka? yahi na ki aapse bahut mohabbat klarte hain aur aapke saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahte hain. Aur aap kya kar rahi hain? chand logo ke ghatiya khayalaat aur apne pichhle rishte ke zakhmon ko lekar baith gayi hain. Kyun yakeen nahi hai aapko adi bhai ke pyaar par?

(To be continued...)

Edited by diatoms82 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So Aditya hai already proposed Zoya
And she is running away from her feelings
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Poor Adi! And I really would like to know what Zoya is running from, especially because it seems like she has feelings for him too! And the bond between Noor and Zoya is honestly goals! I love the story so far, and would love to know what happens next! And, if it's not too much of a hassle, please PM me when you come up with the next update! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

So Aditya hai already proposed Zoya

And she is running away from her feelings

Yes!! Zoya has become kind of commitment phobic in my story. There r no external factors at work here to separate these two. Just the games that our mind plays with us sometimes 😭
Edited by diatoms82 - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasleen77

Poor Adi! And I really would like to know what Zoya is running from, especially because it seems like she has feelings for him too! And the bond between Noor and Zoya is honestly goals! I love the story so far, and would love to know what happens next! And, if it's not too much of a hassle, please PM me when you come up with the next update! :)

Thank you for appreciation 😊 I have answered the question regarding zoya in my earlier post just the mindless games of our mind 😉

Edited by diatoms82 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing story
She is running away because she has suffered so much in past and now she is scared
Update soon and please pm me if possible
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That was really good! Please PM me when you update

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