FIGURE IT OUT!!!-An AVNEIL OS

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Khanna mansion:
Avni is entering the house with a 1000 watt smile on her face and an envelope in her hand .She quickly made way to her room before anyone could see what is in her hand

Avni then called neil
A:Hello neil where are you?
You had told me that you Will come home early today
N:Missing me wifey ?I didn't know that you're so impatient to see me
A:Keep your single track mind with you Mr.khanna .Are you coming or not?
N:I will come after an hour avni
A:oh okay waiting for you .Bye
Avni cuts the call

Unexpectedly Comissioner held a urgent meeting regarding a case
After meeting is over,neil found out that he became late again
Neil(to himself):oh no! I will have to face the wrath of Mrs.Don khanna now

Neil tip toed to their bed room and saw avni sleeping on couch
N(to himself):She must have slept waiting for me.He stares at her lovingly.How cute my avni is looking like a small baby.
He pecked on her forehead and made her sleep on bed and he too joined her and sleeps holding her

Morning:
Avni wokes up first and find herself caged between neil's arms
She stares at him lovingly for sometime.Realization hit her.Neil was late again .
Avni sits up on bed with force .Neil's sleep is disturbed
N:Avni lets sleep some more time .Come
A:No way!You wake up first
Yesterday I told you to come soon and you promised me that you will!I was waiting for you to tell you that ...
Avni stopped
N:To tell me that ..What avni?why did you stop?
A:I won't tell you
N:What ?But why?Avni please tell na
I had taken leave for 5 days to spend time with you .Tell me please
A:I won't tell you.I will give you clues.You have to figure it out yourself
by this evening
N:I have to wait till this evening
Noo!
A:Why so impatient Mr.Super Cop?
Let's see you will able to figure it out or not
N:I will My lady don

At dining table:
Shwetha prepares poha for avni
S:Avni see I had made this poha for you .You are becoming thin .Now take and eat this completely
A:Yes maa !She ate one spoon and refused to eat that
S:Why avni what happened?Are you fine?You are rejecting your favourite poha checking the temperature of her forehead
A:Maa I want to eat this raajma chawal .
S:Raajma chaawal is neil's favourite.When did you started liking this avni?Okay but finish it .You should look like me after a week
Bebe:Madam madona my avni is far better than you .Don't tell like that
Avni you should eat properly. Seriously you had become thin
N:Avni why are not you eating properly?When did you start disliking poha my poha queen?
A:From yesterday
N:What?why,?
A:Figure it out!
Neil make a puppy face and says okay
Neil brought some chocolates for avni
N:Avni come let's share these chocolates
There are three pieces in the chocolate
Avni takes two and gives neil one
Neil pouts
N:why only one for me?Every time you shared equally .Why this time
unequal?
A:This time also i shared equally
N:WHAT?HOW?wifey did you forgot maths .How did you say that you shared equally?
A:Figure it out!
N:okay
A:Neil How did you became police officer?
I had given you a big clue.Still you are not able to understand.
N:Big clue ? Giving me less pieces of chocolate is big clue .How?
A:Nothing can be done with you
She went out of room

Neil is watching tv.
Avni came and changes into cartoon channel
N:Avni when did you started watching cartoons?
A:Get habituated to this Mr.khanna
You have to watch these daily for some time
N:what ?How much time?
A:I don't know .May be some years or more
N:What?Why ?
Before avni could say Figure it out!
Neil shouts "AVNI I FIGURED IT OUT!"
N:Avni am i ?
Do we?
To which avni nodded her head in yes happily

Neil literally lifts avni in her arms
and twirls her around
A:Neil put me down
Bebe ,shwetha and prakash all gathered there due to the noise made by neil
Bebe:Neil what happened? Why are you shouting like that at this time?
Neil:Bebe if I tell you why I was shouting you will also shout more than me
Bebe:Let's see .Why are you shouting?
N:We are getting a new member in our family soon!
Bebe,prakash and swetha together:What ? Really they asked looking at avni
Avni said to all:Yes I am pregnant!and shows them the reports which she hid yesterday
All hugged avni
N:You all forgot me and joined them
After breaking the hug bebe informed neela maa about avni's pregnancy

At night in avneil's room:
Neil came with his hands around his back
A:Neil what are you hiding? show me
Neil placed two covers in avni's hands and asked her to choose one
The cover which avni had chosen consists a big white teddy bear
Neil pouted and says avni you picked white teddy bear that means we are going to have a boy .



I want a girl just like you
Avni opened another cover and found a pink teddy bear



A:I want a boy just like you
N:Girl
A:Boy
N:Girl
A:Boy
Just then neela maa came inside with another cover in her hand.
Avni ran towards her and hugged her tightly
Neela maa:Avni baccha I am so happy for you and wipes her happy tears
In order to lighten the situation neil complains to neela maa
N:Maa see I want a girl just like avni
Avni interrupts him
A:Maa I want a boy just like neil
Neela opens a red teddy bear from that cover and gives it to avneil



Neela:What if you have a boy just like avni who is like a fire and a girl just like Neil who is like water which calm down the fire
N&A:How ?
Neela:Figure it out!
Neil and avni laughed loudly and says together
N&A:Twins!!Cool

Neela ,avni and neil get into a group hug while bebe click picture of avneil with neela maa in between them



Phew Finally a long one shot among all those that I had written .I wish creatives to show something like this.But alas!They didn't.So I end up writing this one
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Cute One.
The clues part was fun.
Avni and Neil behaving like a real couple was refreshing to read.
Gud work.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was cute and so real. AvNeil are always fun to read. Loved the whole 'figure out' game by Avni.
Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: drbeth

Cute One.

The clues part was fun.
Avni and Neil behaving like a real couple was refreshing to read.
Gud work.


Thank you so much!😛
I am glad that you liked it
Wished see to see avni and neil like this in the show😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

This was cute and so real. AvNeil are always fun to read. Loved the whole 'figure out' game by Avni.

Keep up the good work.


I am glad that you liked it!
Thank you so much😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneilll


Thank you so much!😛
I am glad that you liked it
Wished see to see avni and neil like this in the show😭

Seeing Neil and Avni like dis was every NK fan's wish which was butchered by d idiotic cvs
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: drbeth

Seeing Neil and Avni like dis was every NK fan's wish which was butchered by d idiotic cvs


As dragon said NK CVS =HOSTEL MESS
Their ideas especially after 10 years leap were worst than the sambar served in my hostel mess
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful OS 😳
i really loved it
wow today is a big day i entered in forum and i'm surprised so may stories 👏

If you want please update😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: adizafan

Beautiful OS 😳

i really loved it
wow today is a big day i entered in forum and i'm surprised so may stories 👏

If you want please update😃


Thank you dear😛
I am glad that you liked it
It is a one shot😆
So no next part na

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