Maaneet ss-Mera Maasoom Patidev- Part 7/pg 111 (25-May-2018) - Page 77

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Thanks for liking and comment,if any grammatical mistakes in this part I am sorry.

Part 7

Mansion..

Harak was breaking everythings in his room yeah he behaving like psycho person and preeto hearing breaking sound come to their room..

Preeto tried to stop him but he pushed her away from him and continuously breaking room items,he messed room totally..

Preeto : harakji..what happened,why u behave like mad with shouting voice.

Harak look at preeto face: yes,I am mad .. my dream shattered today ..

Preeto making harak sat in their bed and sat next with him and handover water to him..

Harak pushed glass to floor and glass broken into pieces, Preeto grabbed his shirt with angry face

Preeto : tell me, what happened with hard voice ..

Harak narrated what happen in office with mad face


Preeto got shocked and harak continues: now what would we do,within 1 month, maan not married to anyone,this whole property goes to khurana trust ..we cannot take single rupee amount from this property..

Preeto smirked face:hmmm but its good news right why u tensed with calm face

Harak look at preeto to weird face : now u only behave like mad person. we r going to loose whole property u saying its good for us, which angle u thought its good for our life with angry face

Preeto placed her hand in his shoulder : harak ji,listen,how many days we were waiting for this property to our own just for us, u r waiting rules the khurana empire as owner not any monthly salary employee while now u doing with grinned teeth, we enjoying maan s property but we have nothing in our hand own,God give have a chance getting this whole property in our names.

Harak confused look at preeto and preeto evil smile to harak

Preeto: arryeah.. Harak ji this whole property under in our names when its will be happen

Harak :Now you became mad,after maan marriage whole Property under to maan and his wife name.if maan and his wife only transfer whole property into our names ,is it possible one , No right with mocking tone and preeto raised her eye with evil smirk face.harak hit his forhead himself & gave best sheepish smile ..omg preeto u r..

Preeto:I have criminal mind,u don't think this is our golden opportunity with evil smirked face.

Harak doubting look to preeto : maan do what I am saying like my pet dog but why his future wife also will do like him with taunting tone

Preeto angry with grinned teeth: hmm,u thought I select Bride for maan like educated , brave and well knowledge girl who rules this khurana empire in future without anyone help.u think I am fool .. what type of girl , I select for maan, she not open her mouth infront of me even she did not touch piece of food without asking my permission, she become slave under my foot.i select one more servant of KM in name of bahu rani.

Harak: Preeto ,u r the best then only I am saying everytime that u r my lady jaan ..After property transferred why we need them ( maan & his wife) infront of our eyes..

Pretto jerk up sofa and angry face to harak : because I hate this khurana family and maan Parents, what they did with me ,I would return to their bahu more than I got by them,I never forgot my insult.. I will show that idiot maan parents ,how their son and Daughter in law tortured through my hands with closing her fist tightly.

Harak : calm down preeto , we already designed hell life to maan now one more members being add to that list .. we need celebrate this happiness..


Karan enter and over their conversation long time stand in door step:dad & mom atleast close the door then planning and excute ur master plan ,if some one over heared ur conversation then ur plan will be flop.

Harak patted karan cheeks lightly : My son,this mansion is my empire , if anyone against mine , next day they breathe would be stop permanently from their body with smirking face.

Karan: u don't think u r over confident with ur hawk eye ,dad with mocking tone

Preeto : karan,if ur dad not with me , I did not achieve this status in this society . don't underhestimate power of ur dad.

Harak: nahi jaan , u r my master mind... without ur brain,we did not getting our luxury life and what that khurana heir's maan deserve it , u cherishing, karan.forgot it

Preeto : why that khurana only got their luxury why not mine that question raised my mind long ago then only we r here with evily smirked face

Karan: mom, u said u want that stupid parents suffering seeing his suffer but they already died when maan in childhood.

Preeto eyes raised as gesture u did not understand and harak smirked look to preeto then eyes shift to karan


Harak: arrhhh.,my bhai & bhabhji living in heaven na they should watching their child, what their child getting from his own home with sheepish smiling face.

Preeto: Karan,call ur uncle

Karan: uncle ..with confused face

Harak: My brainless son,ur materal uncle living in hoshipur village na.

Karan : haan dad but why I calling him
Preeto rolled her eyes :call ur uncle ,tell him, search pure village girl for maan , send her photo and her family detail with in one week.clearly mentioned what type of girl , I want bahu rani for my pyaari maan beta with evily face.

Karan : yes mom with smirk face

Preeto: and don't open marriage matters with sowmaya until everything finalize with warning tone

Harak : yes, karan becareful with ur own sisters, I don't know what curse I got with previous birth,she totally different nature unlike us.

Karan: yeah dad, ur ladli girl , love that idiot maan more than me even though she consider maan only her brother not mine with grinned teeth.

Preeto : their bonding also + point for us, maan do anything for sowmaya,she one of the golden trump card for me ..so don't interfere their bonding..

Karan little shocked & preeto guessed what he thinking.



Preeto: why u shocked , u thinking what type of mother am I, play with her own child for money, if I wish anything,I just want otherwise i don't mind to sacrifice my own blood to through fullfil my wish.its not only for money,its was my revenge with khurana with spraying her venom

Harak held her shoulder : he know what we were.. with evil grin.karan gulped his saliva.dont do any mistake.

One more person also hear their conversation,stand in numb state.

*************

Park

Maan showing his back to Geet sat on bench with grummy face and same way geet also sat opposite like him but with angry face. Juile sat in floor and one leg cratching her head,one look to maan & then to geet , maan to geet ,geet to maan with confused face.

Juile got irritate seeing their silent cold war and barking heavy sound through their angry mood.

Geet angry glare to juile: u shut ur mouth because of u, we both were fight.

Juile signed to geet: what I did it with casual look

Maan: geetji don't blame my juile ,its not her fault , u scold her, u also did mistake with baby stubborn face and juile wining grin to geet.

Geet : acha, I did mistake ,this creature suddenly went to road side ,that was my mistake right and one bike rider tried to hit her that my mistake ,u jump to save ur juile like hero saved his heroine..that was my mistake, ur hand scratch with rock stone insake of ur stunt because of ur juile ,that was my mistake right.one minute my heart stopped seeing ur stunt that also my mistake.. maan tried stop her but she continue while angry glare to him.

Geet: yeah I shouted this dog for ur wound..that was my mistake right..

Maan: nahi geetji with pout face and juile did not intentionally na..she hurt because of ur angry words.its not good shouting anyone with angry face

Geet: now also u thought this dog hurt because of my shout ,but u did not thinking about me , u think only about this dog with angry face

Maan gulpes his saliva: geetji..she is juile not dog..with slow voice.

Geet: eh.. no dog with warning tone..

Maan: juile

Geet: dog

Maan: juile

Geet: dog..

Maan: juile

Geet: juile was dog..i hate this ..before she finish..m.shape lip place in her lip, her eyes popped out not only geet, juile both eyes ball come out like touch to ground.maan remove his lip from her

Maan: juile

Geet: yeah juile..with shocked face & whishpering tone

Maan: see , u also accept..she was juile not yuck dog with huge grinning face.

Juile just faint in floor and geet also in same state..

Geet: why u kissed me in mindly clear.kiss word nahi just peck..without remove her eyes from him

Maan: stop ur argument with casually said

Geet: this is way u stop argument with everyone grinning tone

Maan: nahi geetji, first time I tried with u, its great success with huge happy grin.

Geet: what..

Maan: Last week,I watched movie scene same way girl argued with boy,suddenly boy place his lip to her,girl stopped her argument with boy..now I understood..

Geet: what u understood with meekly tone

Maan: movie showing everything true one..with sheepish smile


Geet mindthought: hey bhaghwan how u created him ,he not think about our kiss rather thinking about movie showing everything truth ,time god he watched only kiss scene, he watched some XXX rated mean ,her mind thinking xxx scene with maan,chi chi babaji what I am thinking.

Maan checked his watch : opps geetji..i already late before badipapa coming home..i need to home..bye geetji..juile come..

(what come, poor juile already faint seeing ur kiss scene with geet...)

Juile raise her head and gave blank look to maan ..

Maan: uff juile ..come na..juile nod her head & walking behind silently with same face..

**************

After two day

Mohinder come to KM and servant welcome him and make sit in hall sofa and inform preeto to mohinder visit in KM.

Preeto come & sat opposite sofa to facing mohinder with one leg cross position infront of him.

Mohinder : Namastey Preeto ji.

Preeto ignored his wish : suddenly u come to mansion, if any urgent purpose.

Mohinder :yes Preeto ji..few days maan turned into 25 years old, u know very well, I take caring some khurana property

Preeto: so..u want that property for in ur name na..with accusing face


Mohinder smiled : I am not a person enjoying other property like their own ,indirectly mocking preeto..

Preeto grinned teeth: mohinder ji.

Mohi: Nahi preeto.. I am not mentioning u,my visit main,after maan 25 th birthday, I need handover this property to maan beta hand so I just come inform maan guardian..you are maan guardian na (mohi stress guardian like this tone remain u r servant of khurna not owner)

Preeto get up from sofa: thank you for reminder ..now u can..showing entrance to mohi..

Mohi smiled meekly and left the place..

**************

Hospital

Sowmaya & her gang doing routine work in hospital

Sowmaya friend: hey sowmaya this weekend u bring ur bhai too our outing.


Sowmaya eye brow raise: u mentioning karan bhai na..he is busy with his Girlfriends.

S.F : No no.. not karan..u r maan bhai with sheepish smile

Sowmaya : don't drag my maan bhai in ur fun saying warning tone.

S.F: nahi re..why we do teasing ur bhai..last time u intro ur bhai with us right and he so cute & more handsome with dreamy face

Sowmaya hit her forhead through her stestcope : last time I did big mistake I introduced my bhai to u all and because of ur tease , he did not come out with me anywhere & he not comfortable any girl except me & dadi.

Same time maan enjoying geet with somewhere, poor sowmaya trust maan more.

S.F : trust me, sowmaya, we tried close with ur bhai but he ran out that place.we did not teased him.

Sowmaya: No way.. & he is nave & not ur type so don't take my bhai name..

S.f: ok yaar with sad face ,hmm tell me, today u meet ur Dr.hero with teasing tone

Sowmaya irriatate face: he is not my hero,he was villain in my life

S.f: then it more good..nowdays u seeing movie..villian is more handsome than heroes..with teasing tone.sowmaya hit her forhead left the place & hit to someone


Sowmaya mind thought: oh not again.

Miss u have only work to bang me with little harsh voice.

Sowmaya: No sir..mistakely I did..sorry

U know how to say sorry..Good Miss

Sowmaya: Sowmaya Singh,Dr.Harman sir with grinned teeth

Harman: Good, u know my name also not bad

Sowmaya: excuse me sir, I have a work

Harman move one side and sowmaya left

Harman: she is different with little smile face.

**************

Ausual Maaneet meeting plot..

Maan: geetji why u tensed..

Geet: Nothing maan with mood off face

Maan: iam ur friend, u can share with me

Geet : nothing maan

Maan teasing face : then why u keeingp ur face like GEM..

Geet confused face: GEM..

Maan giggled tone : Ginger eating Monkey..

Geet mouth open widely & hitting maan shoulder playfully .& maan laughing heavily.

Geet:Idiots, which angle I look like monkey for you. With fuming face


Maan control his laugh & cupped her face & look at one side to other side : hmmm..this angle u look like ok ,(geet grinned teeth mind thought I just OK for him, every boys openly flirting with my beauty but he said OK ) & if u angry face ,u look like devil.. with chuckled face (geet mouth open widely )..



Geet fuming face : Maan..

Juile teasing grin in her face..geet glare to juile

Maan : if u smile ,u look like ..geeet eager tone.. I am look like

Maan: Joker .. geet face pale down.. before geet hit maan, he run out while geet run behind him with shouting..i kill u idiot..

Few minutes

Both settled down on bench with heavy breathe..

Geet taking breathe: really when smiling time..i am looking like joker with pout face.

Maan nod his head: Nahi buddhu..i just tease u..clear ur mood off ..


Juilee (mind):maan teased her I thought he really told her what he felt with pout face.

Geet fake angry face: still I am in mood off..

Maan : hmmm..ok I tell u important thing .then ur mood would be change..

Geet: important.. maan nod his head

Maan: u must reply my question & genuine answer with serious voice .geet nod her head

Maan hold her hand : u have a pen,geetji..geet give pen to maan.

Geet look at maan with curious face and maan put ball nip in her palm, he draw some square

Geet: maan..

Maan :geetji..dont interpret.. tell me ur favourite Actor

Geet: Gurmeet..

Maan write gurmeet word in one box : then ask ur favourite movie

Geet: not specific I like every movie..even I love animated movie also.

Maan : ok ..he write animated film in next box..geet have tingled whenever maan writing in her palm..

Maan: ur favourite food..

Geet: Italian food ...maan weried look to geet..

Maan: u love Italian food..yuck I tasted some food..it was blunt ..i love Indian food..more spices & more sweets with yummy face..geet want pinch his cheek but she controlled.

Maan: Ok Italian then u r favourite colour

Geet: Blue

Maan pinch geet wrist and geet shout ouch ..: my favourite colour blue and I love white colour also.. white resemble of pure.. geet mindthought yeah pure like you.

Maan: then dress..

Geet: jeans & shirt .. maan yucked face

Maan: geetji, if u wear saree na..u look more beautiful

Geet pout face : so I am not beautiful now..

Maan: u look good but if u wear Indian dress...u more preety..sachi with placed his finger in his throat.

Geet:sure I will try..then next

Maan : ur favorite soap

Geet: soap.. XYZ beauty soap..

Maan: ok ..then ur favourite person except ur family member..with eager tone.

Geet smirked face : harman ..

Maan write harman name with pout face and geet gave lop side grin & mindthought : oh my mister cutie so lovely in this face.

Maan: he written everything in her hand.. geetji..now concentrate only in my face and hearing my word.geet nod her head & look at him only with full concentrate..

Maan connect every box while saying first u wore white top & blue jeans & u thought u want go to some animated film, u called ur friend harman ( harman name with grinned teeth ) , he replied, he was busy so u called ur other friend..geet eye brow raised and maan continue saying & thinking who that person.. let imagine me ok..geet nod her head with teasing smile ..u called me, I said ok..we both went to ur favourite restaurant,we eat ur favourite Italian dish, maan gave yuck face, geet chuckled seeing face and then we go to near mall,we watch ur favourite animated film and then ...geet look at maan with little blushing face..then.

Maan :then wash ur hand through xyz beauty soap.. with laughing voice.. geet look at her face..geet mouth open o shape. And her whole palm scribble through pen ink..geet grinned teeth...

Geet: Maan..

Maan run out before catching her while running : bye geetji...




Geet sat on bench & look at her pen ink scribbled palm & imagine what maan said automatically her cheek turned into pink..

***********

Handa house

Prem : dad,I don't want geet marriage soon, so plz don't take this topic.

Rano: Prem beta, one day we search groom for geet right then why not now.

Prem: yes, maa but she was 21 years old only..let enjoy her life..


Mohi silently sitting in sofa

Rano: why u silent ji.. say something to ur son..

Mohi :ha rano..rano shake her head..

Rano: u r hearing or not..

Mohi : what u both speaking ..


Rano: good..u not hearing anything with angry face

Prem side hug to Rano : Mom ,plz not now..she is child na atleast 2 or 3 years. Then we think about her marriage.

Geet crossed her parents room & heared her marriage matter ,her face dull without saying anything she went to her room.

Prem : mom please..

Rano : ok..but one year not more..

Prem : we decide that after one year ..ok

Mohi lost with some other matters..

*********

After week

Khurana mansion

Preeto enter dadi room with fake smiling face and dadi sat in her bed .

Preeto : Maaji..with sugar coated voice.

Dadi doubting face: preeto , u r here..

Preeto : I am coming to say happy news for u.

Dadi: happy news for me sarcastic tone

Preeto : maaji..our maan beta marriage.. I selected girl for maan..within two days everyone going to hosiphur village..u surely like maan bride with huge happy grin face.

Dadi: but maan wish..

Preeto : Maaji, my son was very innocent, he don't anything..i selected best partner for my son..we were leaving village with in two days..u packed ur thing as well maan also ..without hearing dadi reply..she left the place.

Dadi: God save my child & bring happiness in her life.i don't what their new plan..save my child I trust u only.

Part end

Precap


Dadi look at preeto: what harak saying to bride family..next week marriage with shocked face.

Preeto : why tensed maaji..bride very good girl, bride family thought marriage will happen soon depend on their kundali so haraj ji said ok..what is big issues.

Dadi : Maan..😭

**********

Marriage ritual start 😲😲😲

******

Maan look at juile: we were in hosiphur & geetji message she went to movie with her friends...I am not talk with her & not inivit my marriage also ( so sweet right😆)

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally u updated... Thank you sooo much...

This harak and preeto will not leave maan alone...

Maan marriage with whom now ???
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Posted: 7 years ago
This Month Update😳

26-May-18

Maaneet New SS - Jeevan Saathi ki Liye Interview




26-May-2018

Maaneet OS - Love Found In Hell




25-May-2018

Maaneet SS- Mera Maasoom Patidev

Part 7 -Updated



24-May-2018

Maaneet SS (Hope S2) -Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga



7-May-2018

Maaneet Journey FF - marriage at first sight



Dont worry i will update my other stories also ... yeah long update & sorry for late sweeties.
Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

Finally u updated... Thank you sooo much...

This harak and preeto will not leave maan alone...

Maan marriage with whom now ???


thanks for comment 😳

Sorry for late

u wait for next part maan marriage with whom😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Maan and Geet scene were so cute
Maan way stop Geet with with argument was really cute
Poor Geet got heart attack
Hope Geet stop Maan marriage
Update soon

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